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Drink this tea with me, my aging cup; this prolonged steep.
Topic Started: Oct 13 2011, 12:45 AM (201 Views)
Jam
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Drink this cup of tea with me;
bitter plain and sugar sweet.
Add a touch of both;
so this frail cup's complete.
Drink this cup of life with me;
this temporary brew.
Drink a little slower;
the pot does not renew.
Long live Carolus
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The_Fry_Cook_of_Doom
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:OOOOOOOOOOOOMAAANN
If the fifth line had been, "Drink this cup of tea with me," the poem might have been more thrilling to decipher; but other than that, I like it.
Jam
 
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DragonLegend
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DragonLegend
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I don't like it, however. It seems to be saying there is no afterlife. Although I can think of a couple other interpretations.
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Incog
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CHEERIO!

It's about savouring life no?

Good poem in that case.
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