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Topic Started: Aug 10 2008, 08:05 PM (3,835 Views)
Amethyst
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Making Edward Say "Bella Who?"
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Hey, welcome sparkly.

That wasn't half bad actually...it was pretty funny! I sniffed a girl! Clever. :D :D

I think the second line would be better
"I sniffed a girl just to try it,
Wish blood didn't smell so tasty"
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sparkly
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Ohh you're right. I had the "so" in there at first but I thought it screwed up the syllable count. But I just recounted and you're right, adding it back in makes the count match up. I added a verse, whaddya think?

I sniffed a girl and I liked it,
the smell of her fruity type B
I sniffed a girl just to try it,
Wish blood didn't smell so tasty
It felt so wrong,
it felt so right.
Don't mean to bite her tonight.
I sniffed a girl and I liked it (I liked it).

No, I don't even know your thoughts, it doesn't matter.
You're my not-yet-immortal girl, just smelling tasty.
It's not what good vamps do, not how they should behave.
I get so confused it's hard, stayin' veggie

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jessicainwonderland
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waaahhahaahah ome i love it! but do we need one more verse? or maybe this part... (hook?)

Us girls we are so magical,
Soft skin, red lips, so kissable.
Hard to resist, so touchable.
Too good to deny it.
Ain't no big deal, it's innocent


btw, the syllable count/ beat is right now :]
Edited by jessicainwonderland, Aug 14 2008, 05:25 AM.
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Amethyst
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I loveeeeeeeee the I sniffed a girl, its hilarious!

Its cool too with the "I don't even know your thoughts" verse.

And we could always change the "Wish blood didn't smell so tasty" line to "I hope my Coven don't mind it" because its more like the original and it kind of fits because they are all not fond of Bella at first. Also it would be cool in the chorus the "It felt so wrong" could change to "It smelt so wrong"

I did the last verse:

Humans they are so tragical
Soft skin, red blood...delectable.
Hard to resist, so edible.
Too good to deny it.
Ain't no big meal, just nourishment!

And tried the first verse...:

Class did not go the way I planned, paid no attention,
Tried to swap class, saw Mrs. Cope, at school's reception,
It's not what I should do, sniff her StrawberryHair (!!! =])
I'm curious for you, Alice please don't mention...

I sniffed a girl...etc.
Edited by Amethyst, Aug 14 2008, 07:44 AM.
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sparkly
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HAHA! I love it!! I like your change to the "I hope my coven don't mind it" too, sounds better! And the "felt" to "smelt"--lol!!
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Okay, so the finished song is

I Sniffed A Girl
By Team Bibliofile

Class did not go the way I planned, paid no attention,
Tried to swap class, saw Mrs. Cope, at school's reception,
It's not what I should do, sniff her StrawberryHair (!!! =]) <-- BTW. I LIKE THAT. XD.
I'm curious for you, Alice please don't mention...

I sniffed a girl and I liked it,
the smell of her fruity type B
I sniffed a girl just to try it,
Wish blood didn't smell so tasty
It felt so wrong,
it felt so right.
Don't mean to bite her tonight.
I sniffed a girl and I liked it (I liked it).

No, I don't even know your thoughts, it doesn't matter.
You're my not-yet-immortal girl, just smelling tasty.
It's not what good vamps do, not how they should behave.
I get so confused it's hard, stayin' veggie

Humans they are so tragical
Soft skin, red blood...delectable.
Hard to resist, so edible.
Too good to deny it.
Ain't no big meal, just nourishment!
Edited by StrawberryHair, Aug 14 2008, 07:02 PM.
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Dancing Muffin
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I like it. Greatly.
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Amethyst
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Hey, sparkly you made it up in the first place so all my inspiration came from you!

Hehe, I put StrawberryHair in there, thought you'd like it.

So are we agreed we should change line 4 of the chorus to "Hope my coven don't mind it." and the "It felt so wrong" to "It smelt so wrong"?
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ahh i love it!
sorry I didnt help much though, school :/
the only thing... the line, "her fruity type b"...thats talking about Bella's blood type right?
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sparkly
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Here's the final with those two lines updated!!

Yep, it was talking about the blood type...although I'm not sure what Bella's actually is, it just rhymed the best!


I Sniffed A Girl
By Team Bibliophile

Class did not go the way I planned, paid no attention,
Tried to swap class, saw Mrs. Cope, at school's reception,
It's not what I should do, sniff her StrawberryHair
I'm curious for you, Alice please don't mention...

I sniffed a girl and I liked it,
the smell of her fruity type B
I sniffed a girl just to try it,
Hope my coven don't mind it.
It smelt so wrong,
it smelt so right.
Don't mean to bite her tonight.
I sniffed a girl and I liked it (I liked it).

No, I don't even know your thoughts, it doesn't matter.
You're my not-yet-immortal girl, just smelling tasty.
It's not what good vamps do, not how they should behave.
I get so confused it's hard, stayin' veggie

Humans they are so tragical
Soft skin, red blood...delectable.
Hard to resist, so edible.
Too good to deny it.
Ain't no big meal, just nourishment!
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Amethyst
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^ YAY! Its good, but we should put [chorus] where the chorus should go again. Just to clarify.

No problem jessica. You can help with the next one! =]
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jessicainwonderland
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ok sweet! dont worry, I won't leave you guys to do it all again. Its just been a...difficult week... :-/
But I absolutely love the song!!
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Amethyst
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Awwwwww :'( Poor jess. HUGGLES!
Tough weeks suck, I know how you feel.

The song turned out even better than I expected, so I'm so happy with it! :D :D
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Wow the song turned out so goood! Sorry I wasn't here to give ideas, but I love the finished product!
Eeeek. :D
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aww thanks for the much needed hug :]
so when do we get to post it officially, and where? anyone know?
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