kateandpookie

Aug 22 2008, 07:03 PM

I have a few beefs:

1) I HATE jacob (sorry Jacob fans). He like forced himself on Bella *grrr* and he always loses his temper, lets her down and ARG i just want to slap him (but I'd probably end up breaking my hand).
And he is such a jerk when it comes to Edward. I almost cried when he hurt Edward in the parking lot just by thinking about Bella's pain. It was heartbreaking. And then, when he's in the tent with Bella, he's all smug about being able to be physically close to her when Edward can't :'( and he's annoying and gealigeialgheilawghwa. *spazz attack*

2) Typos. I hate them. I kept hoping they'd go away, but alas, they didn't. I almost (ALMOST) whited out the word and corrected it.

3) I felt like Bella cared wayyy too much about Jacob (she kept feeling guilty, needed to see his smile bla bla bla) but then he just lets her down, once again! (Specifically when he said he'd rather see her dead...grrr)

K, there are a few more things (i'm re-reading it now) but for now, the rant is over...