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| Blonde Doctor | Feb 13 2008, 05:35 PM Post #1 |
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Just so you know the text in green, are thoughts in Dylan's head. The door made it's old familiar squeaking noise as she pushed it open, the smell hit her and a million memories came flooding back at once, some good, some not so good, but here she was anyway back at school. She had decided to take a trip down memory lane just to remind herself how far she had come. Just look at me now on my way into a ppv event for the women's championship and back then I was lucky if I even got to watch a wrestling practice. She walked towards the trophy cabinets and there they were all the cheerleading trophies she had won, well her and the squad and the photos, looking at herself in them she saw how young and naïve she looked, granted it was only a few years ago, but so much had changed, so much had happened, she'd grown up, a lot, learnt that you didn't have to worry about what everyone else thought, could control her own life. Then there was Sam he was in most of the photos always standing next to her an arm on her shoulder, touching her in some way. Dylan was glad that she didn't have to see him again, it was hard enough hiding the relationship from everyone in the first place, imagine the outrage that it would have caused if her parents, or anyone for that matter had found out who it was. The bell rung out for end of school and Dylan made a sharp exit, she didn't want anyone to see her here. On the way to her car her cellphone vibrated in her pocket, she knew that it would be her Mum checking up on her, reminding her that she said she would be there for dinner at 4, she looked at the screen and confirmed her suspicions, sliding her phone back into her pocket she climbed into the car and headed for home. As she pulled the car up to the driveway there were 2 cars already there she gave a puzzled look and parked in the street, two of her brothers were shooting hoops at the side of the house, they both greeted her with enthusiasm. Jack Good to see you Dyl, we heard about the PPV and we're very proud of you Dad even bought us all tickets, so we'll be there cheering you on. Dylan Thanks Jack it's good to know someone will be cheering me on, even if you lot have too because you're family. Jack Ah but there will be someone else there cheering for you and he doesn't have to. Dylan Who? Jack Head inside and you'll find out he's having dinner with us. It's someone you'll like though. Dylan headed for the back door and let herself in, heading straight for the kitchen as she knew that’s where her mum would be. Just like mum interfering trying to set me up with a date. Dylan made her way into the kitchen and gave her mum a hug, it was good to be back home, she had missed her family. . Mrs D Hi, honey, wow you look good, I’ve missed you a lot and we have loads to catch up on, but dinner is nearly ready and we have a guest, so could you grab those plates and take them through to the dining room. Dylan picked up the pile of plates from the edge of the table and followed her mum to the dining room, it wasn’t until she was almost halfway across the room when she saw him sat at the table talking to her Dad with not a care in the world. She froze, felt her self screaming but no noise came out and she dropped the plates, as they bounced of the laminate floor the noise seemed to snap her from her daze, everyone turned to look at her. She turned on her heel and bolted for the door pushing past her brothers, she was outside before she felt safe enough to breathe properly. Running for the car she heard footsteps and shouting coming from behind her, he was following her. She jumped into the car and not even stopping to fasten her seatbelt she sped away. She knew he would follow her, so she went to their place, she could almost drive there with her eyes closed, which was could because the tears were rolling down her face, she heard his car pull in beside hers and felt her car shift as he got in, he started to speak trying to explain. Dylan Jesus Sam what the hell do you think you were doing?? Those are my parents, my family. Sam You're mum and dad invited me, what was I supposed to say, they're proud of what you've done and well, I was your coach. Dylan Yeah Sam my coach, what were you going to do go in there and say "Hi Mr and Mrs Donovan long time no see, really proud of Dylan and what she's doing, oh by the way did you know back when I was her coach we were having sex and she got pregnant, let me and my wife keep the baby, then skipped town." Sam Of course I wasn't going to do that, but since you brought it up, our son is doing great, getting on really well at school. Dylan You have about ten seconds to get out of my car, and i don't want to hear about it, he's your son, not mine, I got $2000 remember?, now you got five seconds. Sam slammed the car door and walked away, Dylan started the engine and drove of she looked back only once knowing that this would probably be the last time she came home. DISCLAIMER: Please excuse the grammar, I probably would have noticed if I had read it through before posting it, but i didn't so
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| TURNCOAT | Feb 13 2008, 05:45 PM Post #2 |
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just like i said earlier, this is a good look into the sort of person Dylan really is. The character just gets that bit more devious and manipulative every time you see her, which is good, the last revelation being a nice twist at the end as well. Good stuff, keep it up
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| Harmony | Feb 13 2008, 05:45 PM Post #3 |
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Gogz once fucked a ginger
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You've definately gotten better Kell, and it was a damn good RP. Like I said on MSN, my only complaint is the gramma nazi type stuff. |
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| Chain | Feb 13 2008, 08:05 PM Post #4 |
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Killed Phenetic & Probably Andy Chills
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wheres the picture of scarlette. No picture means I got the whole way through. Nice work. |
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| Stainless | Feb 14 2008, 10:29 AM Post #5 |
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Grammar*
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| Arati Raman | Feb 14 2008, 12:45 PM Post #6 |
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Nice work. You really are improving. Dylan's horrible, so vicious, so sooo deserves an ass kicking
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| Harmony | Feb 14 2008, 01:23 PM Post #7 |
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Gogz once fucked a ginger
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Typo
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| Blonde Doctor | Feb 14 2008, 04:05 PM Post #8 |
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well then all my grammatical errors were typos :ninja: |
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