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| Blonde Doctor | Feb 25 2008, 01:20 PM Post #1 |
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Firstly apologies to the Grammar Police you know who you are Dylan is in the BQWA ladies locker room slamming lockers, throwing things around clearly upset by the events of the evening. Dylan: God damn it, that should have been me out there holding up the belt, I should be the women’s champion, I should be in control, I should have been in control out there but I wasn’t, I told Sam that I didn’t want to see him again and what does he do he brings his whole damn family to my first big fight and what happens I see the kid and totally go to pieces. Excuse me I’m talking, are you even listening to me??? Woman: Yo no escuchaba, usted hembra tonta, vi el lucha usted era malo . Arati era fantástico. Dylan heads for the shower shaking with anger her mind racing as she steps into the steaming cubicle, she begins to calm down as the hot water courses over her body, she knows what will make her forget all about Sam, the kid, and Arati. She dries quickly, puts some clothes on and headed for the parking lot hoping that no-one would see her, she wasn’t exactly dressed to impress, well not to impress anyone she might meet her. Driving off she tried to plan the evening out in her head. Dylan cursed as she drove the car up the driveway, surely this was the right address but it all seemed so dark. She decided that she would wait for a few minutes and then drive on. As she waited she was trying to convince herself that being here was a good idea, that she was doing the right thing. She was just about to turn the car round and go home when she spotted someone familiar walk past the upstairs window, so she had the right house after all, now she needed to work up the courage to do what she was here for. The house looked ominous and dark just the kind of place she expected him to live in, very carefully she closed the car door, and walked towards the back door. Dylan: Well here we go it’s now or never. She turned the handle hoping to god that it was open and that there wasn’t an alarm. She breathed a sigh of relief when the door gave and there wasn’t the shrill shriek of an alarm alerting anyone in the house of he presence. As she walked through the kitchen she could hear the sound of her heartbeat pounding in her chest and was certain that the people upstairs could hear it too. She walked towards the stairway and paused for a second to remove her shoes, she didn’t wanted to clacking of the heels to announce her before she had the chance to do it herself. The sound of muffled voices carried through the house. Dylan: Excellent now I know which of the rooms I want, that saved me a job. At the bedroom door she quickly put her shoes on again, and pushed open the door they both turned to look at her, she was standing near the window and he was sitting on the bed. Woman: Who the fuck are you, and what the fuck are you doing here?? Dylan blanks her completely focussing all of her attention at the man sat on the bed. Dylan: I think you better tell your little friend it’s time for her to leave. Turning towards the girl she puts on her sweetest smile. Dylan: Run along now, bitch. Woman: Don’t think I’m going to listen to you. Man: No but you will listen to me, now do as the lady says and run along, bitch. The woman storms out of the room, and Dylan walks over to the man who has mad no attempt to even stand up. Dylan: Now that we are alone, I have a proposition for you. Dylan unbuttons her coat and slowly lets it fall to the floor, revealing her very expensive purchase from Victoria Secrets . The man sits on the bed unable to take his eyes off Dylan and opens his mouth to speak. Dylan: Ah, no talking, don’t say a word, just kiss me. The man pulls her to him hard. She pulls back and pushes him away, trying to let him know who’s in charge, he stands up moving towards her again and before she can resist they are tearing at each others clothes, they fall to the bed kissing, touching, each instinctively knowing what the other needed. Satisfied they lay together in a tangled mess of sweaty limbs and bed sheets. Man: That was great. Dylan: Yeah, just what I needed. They lay together in silence, Dylan hoping for a repeat performance and soon, she decided to give him maybe 15 minutes and then see if they could get the party started again. After about 10 minutes she could hear the deep even breathing of someone clearly asleep, she gave him a quick shove to see if he would wake up, nothing. She tried shouting at him and pushing him a little bit harder still nothing. Dylan: Ok so you clearly aren’t going to be getting it or yourself up anytime soon, I’m outta here, loser. She quickly got dressed in what little clothing she had with her, gave the man a quick kiss on the cheek and was out of the door and back in her car quicker than you could say one night stand. |
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| Tara Shannon | Feb 25 2008, 01:27 PM Post #2 |
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Why Dylan, you tart. Good job, girly. I'm very intrigued at who this new man is. |
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| SoCal | Feb 25 2008, 01:43 PM Post #3 |
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Holy cow...do you write soft porn on the side? Lol, kididing. Great read, really relayed the "frustration" she had after a hard fought battle. |
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| Harmony | Feb 25 2008, 03:17 PM Post #4 |
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Gogz once fucked a ginger
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Good stuff Kell, you're really improving from when you first joined, and this work is impressive, well done. |
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| BrahmaBull10 | Feb 26 2008, 12:13 AM Post #5 |
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Excellent stuff, milady! I like this uber-bitch of a character. It's a cool change of pace from someone like Jessie Baltos, whom I also loved...and the more focused Harmony....or the sweeter Arati...or the all-around lovable Miss Shannon. I enjoy the variety of female characters in BQWA. Quality stuff. Also...I feel that, much like The Rock in times of old, Miss Donovan's...how you say...looser nature is ripe for a rundown. Perhaps Colossus will get to you one day, even though he doesn't often slag off the ladies. Isn't that the Brit slang?
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