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[D!]: Kuro Zetsu
Topic Started: Jan 5 2009, 12:05 PM (155 Views)
riku uchiha	Jan 5 2009, 12:05 PM Post #1
Arrancar Posts: 23 Group: Members Member #122 Joined: January 2, 2009 Soul Class: Arrancar	Name: Kuro Zetsu Sealed Design: About 4' long. Has a straight blade with a notch coming out above the hilt. The blade is a much darker metal than usually used for swords. The blade is about 5 inches thick, making it thicker than a usual katana. Command: "Cry, Kuro Zetsu " Resurrection Form: (I don't have access to photobucket at the current moment, though I will edit and post a picture later) Resurrection Effect: Allows Riku to control gravity Resurrection Power One: Name: Gravitational Push/Pull Soul Type: Espada Arrancar Requirements: Ressurection form. Damage/Burn/paralyze: Pushes and Pulls enemies/objects Cost: Description:Pushes enemies/objects back. Can damage if pushed into an object such as a wall or rock. Also pulls enemies/objects towards Riku for quicker attacks. Resurrection Power Two: Name: Gravitational Control Soul Type: Espada Arrancar Requirements: Ressurection form Damage/Burn/paralyze: Slows and weakens enemies Cost: Description: Riku can intensify gravity on a particular area to slow enemies down and make them weaker. He can also lighten gravity to make it harder for enemies to function. Riku can also change which direction gravity pulls to throw enemies off. Edited by riku uchiha, Jan 8 2009, 11:20 AM.
Ballian	Jan 7 2009, 10:58 PM Post #2
Posts: 1,398 Group: Head Management Member #1 Joined: February 24, 2008 Equipment: Zanpakuto Soul Class: 11th Division Captain	hmmm.... how about using the power template :P?
riku uchiha	Jan 8 2009, 11:05 AM Post #3
Arrancar Posts: 23 Group: Members Member #122 Joined: January 2, 2009 Soul Class: Arrancar	Why would I use the power template? The abilities in there are his Ressurecion powers. So why would I make a power even though it's my Ressurecion?
Mitsuaki Ryuujin	Jan 8 2009, 11:09 AM Post #4
I= v ( I< Posts: 141 Group: Management Member #120 Joined: January 2, 2009 Soul Class: 1st Division Captain/Soutaichou Equipment: Zanpakuto	He means for your Resurrection Power One & Two use the template to better describe them
riku uchiha	Jan 8 2009, 11:13 AM Post #5
Arrancar Posts: 23 Group: Members Member #122 Joined: January 2, 2009 Soul Class: Arrancar	Oh, I didn't get what he meant. Yeah, I'll do that. EDIT: Ok, I added the template thing ^-^ Edited by riku uchiha, Jan 8 2009, 11:21 AM.
riku uchiha	Jan 9 2009, 01:19 PM Post #6
Arrancar Posts: 23 Group: Members Member #122 Joined: January 2, 2009 Soul Class: Arrancar	So can someone approve this so I can RP?
Mitsuaki Ryuujin	Jan 9 2009, 01:44 PM Post #7
I= v ( I< Posts: 141 Group: Management Member #120 Joined: January 2, 2009 Soul Class: 1st Division Captain/Soutaichou Equipment: Zanpakuto	Ok things I see wrong with it: 1:There is no cost for using your powers 2: I find this being very easy to God mod with, you need to describe them better as well as add an actual damage to them
Ballian	Jan 9 2009, 03:22 PM Post #8
Posts: 1,398 Group: Head Management Member #1 Joined: February 24, 2008 Equipment: Zanpakuto Soul Class: 11th Division Captain	Gravity? No, I think it was... Cite? Yeah, Cite who asked; and I denied even how she stated it made it weaker and very detailed, but still no. If you want a better reason; PM me, but anyways; Denied.
riku uchiha	Jan 9 2009, 10:04 PM Post #9
Arrancar Posts: 23 Group: Members Member #122 Joined: January 2, 2009 Soul Class: Arrancar	Ugh, fine, I'll make a new one. But the I'll need to edit my already approved character, being that the thread for this is on the character. also, what do you mean cost? Like MP or something? I don't get what you mean. And also, how do I choose how much damage it does? Like, do we actually have HP?
Ballian	Jan 9 2009, 10:19 PM Post #10
Posts: 1,398 Group: Head Management Member #1 Joined: February 24, 2008 Equipment: Zanpakuto Soul Class: 11th Division Captain	Hmmm. Did you read the rules? OR read other zanpakutos? Edited by Ballian, Jan 9 2009, 10:19 PM.
Ballian	Jan 12 2009, 07:20 PM Post #11
Posts: 1,398 Group: Head Management Member #1 Joined: February 24, 2008 Equipment: Zanpakuto Soul Class: 11th Division Captain	Denied Sorry, your application has been denied. If you feel this was denied by mistake, unfairly, etc. please PM me. Also, feel free to create a new application that fixes the problems of this one. BRC Staff
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