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| [D!]: Raikairi; The Lightning Edge | |
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| Topic Started: Jan 11 2009, 02:17 PM (50 Views) | |
| Aaron | Jan 11 2009, 02:17 PM Post #1 |
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Name: Raikiri Design: Zanpaktou: Raikiri (Lightning Edge) Arashi's sword resembles a Japanese samurai sword (or Katana). The blade, however, is tinted slightly yellow, and the hilt of the sword goes out in four directions; shaped like lightning bolts. Each of the bolts is made of gold, giving the sword a pretty flashy look to it. The blade itself extends about four feet, and the hilt is ten inches long. The whole sword measures 4'10". Inner World: The inner realm of this character, is that of any given location he deems to contact the holder of his weapon, however instead its concealed with ebony and violet hues, known better to many as the Twilight Realm, none the less this is the inner world of the Shinigami. Avatar: ![]() Facial Features: Haku. is one complex boy other then just his persona, for his body matches him in each category. Being a child prodigy of the Yajuu clan. Though what brings us to conversation about his facial appearance, is that of his skin and hair, his hair, which like its clan has no master, and splits off into numerous directions covereding his eyes and many other features like his ears from sight, as well as splitting up into the air with its auburn hue, though along with the soft orange and yellow hues, slices and blades of emerald and jade line his hairline, acting as highlights on the young shinobi. Adding a surreal appearance to his hair, not exactly commin in color, though quite fitting to his attire. Beneath his painted hair, are his eyes which have seen the uglier side of this world, being from more of a nomadic tribe, death and murder have been apart of the every day life, the crimson pupils consumed with fear as well as courgage, however, they fail to emit his emotion, often and rarely displaying anything less then inteliigence and cleverness. Above his sly eyes are his jet jade eyebrowns which conclude each of his thoughs with either anger, or suprise, often never resting in a single bored line. His nose his there, not bigger then normal, or smaller, being nothign special to the boy, other then providing him with the sense known as smell. His lips, often never puckered, remain a thin line on his face, for his amusment is very low, and a smile nearly never found, unless provided it be a devious smile from the boy. Torso & Below: Haku. torso, resembles any fit shinobi within his country, being shaped with broad shoulders and a skin waist, providing him with a quick and easy stature, not forgetting flexible as well. However his muscle build is firmly notted, with hours spent training with his two katanas, he defined not only his chest but his arms, obvious to the eye when ever he bends them to reveal hos tough and built he really is. Though in the matter of weight, just himself comes in at about 130, however with his armour he weights about 180, an additional 50 pounds with his blade, and light weight breastplate. However, his torso, is rather untouched and marked, only a few scars from the day of old, teaching him of lessons of the blade and life. Reaching his pelvis, which are defined quite well in his suit of armour in which, he often is seen leaning in a certain direction, displaying his devious attitude. Though his legs, are defined as well, needing to be as fast as he is strong, bending back and forth with his fluid movements, his legs streching down his body with brillant grace. His height is about six foot, once inches. Being quite tall for his age, but being a boy its nothing to special. ---> Clothing Facial Articles: Not much clothing can be found or located on his face, however clothing assecories can be found in pairs on this boy, having several earings, being nothing more then solider pills disguised as minitaure orbs, a simple crushing of the metal bands cause the disburstment of the orb pills. However, other then for looks and appearance he also has a nose ring, a simple for of intimadation in his book, in which its nothing more then a blood diamond, found in the mines of Kusagakure no Sato, which is realative to his home prior location, atleast for his clan homestead, now being nothing more then wanders, quite a sad and pathetic becoming of the powerful clan. Torso: His torso, is the monst balanced, and advanced of his outfit, starting out with a simple color, with soft hues of jade and azure, a mixture similar to a deep and blossomed mint leave. Beneath that begins his breast plate, and actual metal material that streches only amonst he top portion of his chest, blocking anything above the pectoral reigon with the hardy steel of the suit, however, this brestplate, has shoulder guards, very small ones, but enough for him to remain and have flexible arm movement and control, able to bend them with ease and pivot them in which ever direction he need to use. With a small vent for breathing on the top near his neck, it provide it with an imperial fashion courset of armour. THough in the midsts of both breasts, is th sole emblem and ensigma of the Yajuu clan, brining much pride to the single warrior. Though beneath this set of armour, is a smaller mitheral set of lighter armour, which can be used as a certain shirt, in which it provides defense against basic and simple attacks, quite lovely in use against another dagger or smaller sword. Though one must forget his gunatlets are custom reated for him, swiveling on the edge to cover his forearm in a jade suit of armour, and a single side blace created of onxy material used to cut in aopponent in a dire situation when his katanas can not be reached. Waist & Below: Beneath his rather display based armour, is the other part of his armour, the entire armour set below is tied together by a single obi, in which he keepts his weapons tied to, the katana's being sheathed there in a tight fashion. THe color bieng a dull staw color. In the same fashion as above, he has thigh armour plates which stretch down to his knees, blocking any attack from either side of his body, and the front and the back, being a balanced source of prtection, while the pants beneath flare out, being wide and puffy, not stopping the shinobi by any means or weighing him down. Righ beneath the knees, his boots begin, where they lace from the top to the bottom, reaching all the way down tot he ankles, where the sandals begin, revealing the top of his feet, and the toes to his opponents but nothing more, they also appear to be a small platform shoes, making him an inch or less taller before anyone he approaches. Shikai Phrase: "Seiteki" (Electricute) Shikai Design: Using the above phrase, Raikiri is awakened into its Shikai form. The sword turns all silver and the hilt spirals out into a wing-like shape. At the center of the hilt is a green jewel that comes out from either side of the sword. The blade itself extends to about 6 feet long (so the entire sword is 7'10" in Shikai form). Shikai Activation Power: The blade is consistent of half steel and half electricity, the weapon is able to numb the concact on touch. Shikai Power 1:
Shikai Power 2:
Bankai Name: Shougekiha Raikiri (Shock Wave Lightning Edge). Bankai Design: The sword loses its shape and becomes completely electricity. That electricity swells around Arashi, creating a sort of electric armor around him. The lightning stays close to his body. Bankai Activation Power: The weapon itself becomes more pure lightining reitsu and becomes near vorpal to the touch of and opponents limb. Bankai Power 1:
Bankai Power 2:
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| Mitsuaki Ryuujin | Jan 12 2009, 01:54 PM Post #2 |
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lol Man this Zanpakuto is so much like mine it's scary, ok here's what I see that's wrong 1:you have to add costs for the powers 2:you need to add an actual damage amount 3:your first Bankai power is really OP since you can repel and blade |
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| Ballian | Jan 17 2009, 12:20 PM Post #3 |
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Doesn't look like Lainey's friend is active. |
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| Ballian | Jan 24 2009, 10:21 AM Post #4 |
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Denied Sorry, your application has been denied. If you feel this was denied by mistake, unfairly, etc. please PM me. Also, feel free to create a new application that fixes the problems of this one. BRC Staff |
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