[D!]: Getsugia (DONE)

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[D!]: Getsugia (DONE)
Topic Started: Jan 14 2009, 01:46 PM (138 Views)
Locron	Jan 14 2009, 01:46 PM Post #1
Posts: 119 Group: Arrancar Member #124 Joined: January 2, 2009 Soul Class: Arrancar / 4th Espada Equipment: Zanpakto	i'm going to make this and get it approved before i make the character. Name: Getsugia (Bird of the shadows) Design: Getsugia it the looks like a traditional Zanpakto with a few different fetures. Firstly the grip of the sword is double what it would be usserally. Secondly the Crossgaurd of the blade is shapped in a symetrical mist type pattern. Inner World: The innerworld of getsugia is just one large dessert made of white sand with a single tree in the middle. However the sun in the innerworld casts shadows instead of light making it very dim. Avatar: Getsugia Looks similair to a small Phoenix apart from instead of fire covering it, it instead has a black swirling mist which on occasions rspreads across the floor. Shikai Phrase: Fade into the sky, Getsugia Shikai Design: Shikai Activation Power: Getsugia has the ability to fade through objects at the wielders will. This makes it almost impossible to block against, thus evading is the only reasonable way to defend Shikai Power 1: ”” Name: Bird strike Soul Type:Shinigami Requirements:Getsugia Damage/Burn/paralyze: Damage = 1.75x strength Cost:400 Reiatsu per attack Description:The wielder of Getsugia points their blade towards their opponent at arms length. Shortly afterwards the blade of Getsugia extends at a rapid rate until it is called back. This attack retains all the shikia's activation power. Shikai Power 2: ”” Name: Shadow strike Soul Type:Shinigami Requirements:Getsugia Damage/Burn/paralyze: damage = 1.75x Reiatsu offence Cost: 400 Reiatsu per attack Description:The blade of Getsugia appears as if it is rapidly fading away. A split second after the blade of Getsugia has vanished it lunges from the opposing person shadow or any shadow nearby. This attack retains all the shikia's activation power. Bankai Name: Bring him to our world. Bankai! Bankai Design: the blade retains the same appearance as its Shikai form. Bankai Activation Power: Upon activation Getsugia absorbs all colour from the landscape surrounding the user and their opponent, this causes everything apart from creatures and animals to appear in a gray scale. Also all shadows within a 80 meter radius around the user and their opponent become pitch black, this does not include the shadows of people within the area. However the true ability of Getsugia lies within these shadows, if the opponents shadow cross one of these blackened area’s formed by the shadows the opponent skin begins to grind away causing 0.1 x Reiatsu offences damage per post. If the user would then touch another shadow during the time that the Bankai is activated the damage received would be 0.2, and the third time would be 0.3x. (See Bankai power 1 for details) Bankai Power 1: ”” Name: The power of shadows Soul Type: Shinigami Requirements:Getsugia Damage/Burn/paralyze: 0.1x Reiatsu offence damage, If the user would then touch another shadow during the time that the Bankai is activated the damage received would be 0.2x, and the third time would be 0.3x. Cost: 200 Reiatsu automatically deducted touch. Description: However the true ability of Getsugia lies within these shadows, if the opponents shadow cross one of these blackened area’s formed by the shadows the opponent skin begins to grind away causing 0.1 x Reiatsu offences damage per post. If the user would then touch another shadow during the time that the Bankai is activated the damage received would be 0.2, and the third time would be 0.3x. Even though this ability is one of the most powerful at the user's arsenal it has soem server drawbacks and can be easily countered by weapons which can create light or other forms of changing the way of shadows e.g. destroying buildings to make their shadows shorter, but keep in mind that the rubble makies it's own shadow. Also with it's unaviodable reiastu ussage fighting against multiple opponents can drian ones reiastu at a rappid rate. Bankai Power 2: Not yet acquired Edited by Locron, Jan 29 2009, 01:01 AM.



Locron	Jan 15 2009, 01:32 PM Post #2
Posts: 119 Group: Arrancar Member #124 Joined: January 2, 2009 Soul Class: Arrancar / 4th Espada Equipment: Zanpakto	okay finished it... I havn't put bankia power because this is for a vice captain.



MinatoNamikaze	Jan 15 2009, 02:05 PM Post #3
Posts: 428 Group: RP Moderators Member #18 Joined: March 13, 2008	I believe that you need more description.



Locron	Jan 15 2009, 03:15 PM Post #4
Posts: 119 Group: Arrancar Member #124 Joined: January 2, 2009 Soul Class: Arrancar / 4th Espada Equipment: Zanpakto	yeah because description really narrows down what needs editing -.-



MinatoNamikaze	Jan 15 2009, 03:29 PM Post #5
Posts: 428 Group: RP Moderators Member #18 Joined: March 13, 2008	Yeah, how about this. Describe Shikai Powers 1-2 better >_> that's the only thing most people look at anyways. OT: in your signature its [ center] [ center] without spaces Edited by MinatoNamikaze, Jan 15 2009, 03:30 PM.



Ballian	Jan 15 2009, 10:35 PM Post #6
Posts: 1,398 Group: Head Management Member #1 Joined: February 24, 2008 Equipment: Zanpakuto Soul Class: 11th Division Captain	Costs need to be raised.



Nexus	Jan 15 2009, 10:54 PM Post #7
Octava Espada Posts: 140 Group: Global Moderators Member #131 Joined: January 4, 2009 Soul Class: Shinigami, Espada Equipment: Zankpakuto (Hoshi no Hi), Zankpakuto (Sky Walker)	Vices know their bankai and it's first power.



Locron	Jan 17 2009, 04:36 PM Post #8
Posts: 119 Group: Arrancar Member #124 Joined: January 2, 2009 Soul Class: Arrancar / 4th Espada Equipment: Zanpakto	okay edited and placed bankia and bankai power one up.



Lainey	Jan 17 2009, 04:50 PM Post #9
Shinigami - Vice Captain Posts: 74 Group: RP Moderators Member #128 Joined: January 3, 2009 Soul Class: 11th Division Vice Captain Equipment: Zanpakuto - Kenshi	Ummm, a lot of the powers are an exact copy of pearl's zanpakuto, but way rigged. Anyone read his activation effect? He wants it so his blade fades through anything. All of his powers are copied off of Pearl/Me Either way, cost needs to way up. Possibly double it. The way I'm seeing it now, you'll never run out of reiatsu to use these powers, the entire idea of cost is to limit the amount of times you can use a power. Edited by Lainey, Jan 17 2009, 04:52 PM.



Locron	Jan 17 2009, 05:18 PM Post #10
Posts: 119 Group: Arrancar Member #124 Joined: January 2, 2009 Soul Class: Arrancar / 4th Espada Equipment: Zanpakto	i never acturally looke4d at your zank lol xD i've always used this particualr set-u[p for every bleach RP i've ever done i can link some if you want lol xD



Lainey	Jan 17 2009, 10:03 PM Post #11
Shinigami - Vice Captain Posts: 74 Group: RP Moderators Member #128 Joined: January 3, 2009 Soul Class: 11th Division Vice Captain Equipment: Zanpakuto - Kenshi	It costs me 250 per time my blade fades, and thats just for a single fade, which is one block. Either way, if you want that, you'll have to make it a lot less rigged. An activation power isn't that powerful, I'm pretty sure. Edited by Lainey, Jan 17 2009, 10:04 PM.



Locron	Jan 18 2009, 11:15 AM Post #12
Posts: 119 Group: Arrancar Member #124 Joined: January 2, 2009 Soul Class: Arrancar / 4th Espada Equipment: Zanpakto	well that is my activation power xD and most people don't have ton pay for there activation power.



Lainey	Jan 18 2009, 12:29 PM Post #13
Shinigami - Vice Captain Posts: 74 Group: RP Moderators Member #128 Joined: January 3, 2009 Soul Class: 11th Division Vice Captain Equipment: Zanpakuto - Kenshi	This is rejected unless you remove that activation power, its incredibly overpowered.



Locron	Jan 19 2009, 10:27 AM Post #14
Posts: 119 Group: Arrancar Member #124 Joined: January 2, 2009 Soul Class: Arrancar / 4th Espada Equipment: Zanpakto	i Just recon it's because myou have a similair ability... If it's really that OP why did ballian or nexus not point it out in their posts?



Locron	Jan 22 2009, 12:58 PM Post #15
Posts: 119 Group: Arrancar Member #124 Joined: January 2, 2009 Soul Class: Arrancar / 4th Espada Equipment: Zanpakto	!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!BUMP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -thats what she said.xD Edited by Locron, Jan 22 2009, 12:58 PM.



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