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| Aisaki | Jan 8 2008, 05:05 PM Post #1 |
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Use this form as your character design sheet. Copy the details, then post it as a new topic in NEW PROFILES. Once accepted it will be moved by admin. Don't post in "Accepted!" Post in "New." DELETE ALL THE STUFF IN BRACKETS, PLEASE. -General- Name: Age: Gender: Race: (Human, Demon, or Guardian.) Job: (If you have one.) Home Town: Current Residence: -Weapons- Type: Weapon Name: Weapon Abilities: PIcture: (Optional, but appreciated) -Physical Attributes- Height: Weight: Eye Colour: Hair Colour: Anything else?: Personality: (How they ACT.) Description and/or Picture: (How people physically view your character.) Some pointers - Nobody is perfectly beautiful. Add some appearance flaws to your character. - Try to include detail in your brain when thinking about appearance. - Are they tall, short, overweight, skinny? Do they have muscles? Or are they simply skinny? Are they this way because they eat to much? Not enough? Think about this, as this is a big part of your character. - Scars/Birthmarks: A sun on their back? A big scar from a car accident? Explain. - Feel free to add anything else you can think of. Hairy legs? Smelly armpits? This might be a good place to add flaws. - Eyes are not orbs. They are eyes. Not orbs. Orbs remind me of planets in the sky. “Orbs”, while a fascinating word, make one think of little pieces of glass suspended in something which is definitely not your character’s head. - Do not describe brown eyes as chocolate. This is way overdone. And why must all brown eyes be chocolate? How about mud? Dirt? Cake? C’mon, if you want to compare them to something, be a little creative about it. - No chocolate orbs. Sounds tasty. - Clothes! How could I possibly forget the clothes? These describe a lot about your character and you can even go into what your character wears by him/herself and what he/she wears in public. Do the clothes he/she wears with his/her friends differ from the clothes he/she wears at school or at work? Describing the colors of the socks your character wears seems like overkill—unless, of course, this has significant impact in your character’s personality. - Don’t be afraid of contradictions. We all have contradictions in our lives. Some people can be both shy and outgoing or both a follower and a leader. Of course, you can have a character who is extreme on one side or another; nothing wrong with that. - Make sure the contradictions are adequately explained. There’s nothing more horrendous than reading a personality which has contradiction after contradiction for no apparent reason; it makes the writer look like a n00b. If your character is both friendly and shy, explain in what circumstances he/she is so. - Don’t be overdramatic. It gets old. Really fast. - Has there been any significant happenings in the past? Big things (even small things!) can be significant enough to shape someone’s personality. - Quirks. Does your character have any sort of unusual traits that shine through his/her personality? - Personality Traits. Agreeableness, conscientiousness, extraversion, neuroticism, openness to experiences. And of course, their opposites. - And, of course, don't Mary-Sue to death. Please. Edited by Aisaki, Jan 10 2009, 12:11 AM.
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