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Wilson001: A Laiko Odyssey; Because WILLLLLLSSSOOOOOOONNN!
Topic Started: Sep 8 2015, 12:25 AM (343 Views)
Talist
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I felt like writing some more and I also wanted some more practice writing in first person before DTG0 starts. So here you go. Have Wilson's backstory in more detail. Tell me what you think of it, if you want to. This is Wilson describing his own memories.

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Huh, wow. I like this already.
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Well, thanks. I plan to keep writing these at least until DTG0 starts because I want to give at least some of my story in this first person, past narrative format.

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are you going to continue this?
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Time to retype the post I had that just... vanished.
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And now, to double post. Because I haven't posted this for a while, have a REALLY long one.
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Wow, that was pretty impressive.

Now we know where Wilson learned about brewing.
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Technically, I've already referred to this event before during the DreamScape quest. It was in that journal from the woman in blue's perceptive. But still, have more stuff to reference in Trifecta. I think I'm at around the 2/3rds mark now.

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Edited by Talist, Sep 20 2015, 09:21 PM.
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NEXT!! This one is kinda short. Well, compared to the other ones I've done. It's still not that bad.

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Edited by Talist, Sep 20 2015, 09:18 PM.
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Actually, I'm probably not 2/3rds done. I want to finish all these things so I can post them over on the Forge thread because very few people seem to read this. It would be nice if people tell me what they think about this. *wink wink* I want as much practice as possible before writing the backstory for Mikoto, Inari, and Gail.

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Heh. I feel sorry for Wilson, but at the same time that was absolutely hilarious.
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Well, that's my goal. Make people feel empathy towards an imaginary animal. It's easy for me. Maybe disturbingly so. Someone mows down a street of people in GTA? Eh. Whatever. That same person shoots a cougar? Aw... poor thing... And now after writing all this stuff with Wilson, if a game has, Notch forbid, a dead fox, I practically go into hysterics. I didn't even like foxes all that much when I first made Wilson. I'm more of a cat person. But now, I freakin' love them.

I want to get practice writing in this kind of... circumstance. A lot of aspects of my characters are based on what I saw today and thought was cool. Maybe not the best method for making permanent character choices, but hey, it's been working so far.

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LET'S START RETYPING!

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Alright. I've put this off because I keep on losing my progress. Let's try this again. Although, maybe I'll set my goal of length a little shorter just in case of my browser crashing or whatever.

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Well, whoever owned that facility really caught the idiot ball on that one... No cameras in the animal habitats?
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Well, there were cameras, but the vent was covered up by a tree. And any other convenient oversights on my part are totally because of Inari. Totally. 110%.

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Don't you think it's a little odd how I can remember everything exactly as it happened even though I was rather young? It's probably for the sake of story telling. Either that, or Inari. Because whenever anything doesn't line up, blame Inari.
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Ho hum. Ho hum. Away to testing we go.
Edited by Talist, Oct 24 2015, 09:03 PM.
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