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Graystep | Warrior; __?__Clan
Topic Started: May 6 2008, 06:07 PM (261 Views)
Graystep
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Login Name: Graystep

Desired Ranking: Warrior

Preferred Warrior Name: Graystep

Gender: Tom


Reference Photo:

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Physical Description.

Graystep is a large muscular tom. He has broad shoulders and large paws, lined with razor sharp claws. His fur is long and soft, the color of smoke. He has a long bushy tail thats a tad darker than the rest of his pelt. He has average sized ears that sit proudly atop his head. But the most stunning thing about this tom is his eyes. They are a bright energetic green, and are always glowing with happiness.


Summarized Description:

Graystep: Long-hair gray tom with bright green eyes



Personality:

Graystep can be referred to a "mischievous" cat. He is very active, and when he is having fun, he is very entertaining to watch. He loves to play, run, and jump. His activity level is high and yet, he is calm in serious situations. He is highly intelligent, using his mind for bright, and sometimes complicated ideas. He is very confident, and he gets along well with other cats. He is devoted to his clan and is strong minded, sometimes hot headed. He is affectionate, and tends to have a variety of mews. He purrs quite alot, without knowing it. All in all, Graystep is a high energy cat, who loves his clan and is very friendly.




Website (if applicable): No sorry


Furcadia Description:

[Clan:Looking][Warrior][24moons]
You pass by a larger tom. His bushy gray fur makes him look larger than he really is. But you still feel his strength pulsing throughout his body. His bright green eyes turn to you, glowing with happiness. He purrs a hello and walks away. You watch him leave, your mouth open with shock...you were sure he was hostile.


Sample Roleplay Post(s):

The soft orange glow of dawn was only just beginning to creep across the horizon, but already the air was hot and muggy, so thick that Graystep felt as if he would choke. Though the shade of the trees provided welcome relief from the pounding heat most days, it still did not shield Rainclan from the smothering humidity of this morning. During leaf-bare, he thanked Starclan for his long gray fur, which kept him warm even when other cats were shaking with cold. In green-leaf, he cursed it.

Clearing a fallen log with a neat leap, Graystep paused for a moment to catch his breath, and took the opportunity to call over his shoulder to the rest of the patrol. “Today, we can start with the Cloudclan border and work our way over to the Dustclan side. Hopefully we'll make it back under the trees before the sun gets too high in the sky.” Blinking, he turned and resumed his trotting pace towards the Pelted River. As the trees began to thin and he neared the water, a light breeze stirred his fur, though it brought little relief. Even the wind was hot, for Starclan's sake!

Lifting his nose into the air, the smokey colored tom scented deeply, mouth open. He smelled Rainclan, of course, and the nearby Cloudclan scent markers, though they were slightly stale. Obviously, the Cloudclan patrol had not yet made it to this part of the border.

(This is from my old dream, that has long been dead)


Do you have any other characters in the dream? If so, who?

No, this is my first time finding this dream.
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Looks good, but in the reference photo the eyes are yellow and not green.
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Herb Pile [Inactive]
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a master is out, ze~
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Looks good.
there is not a shred of evidence in favor of the idea that life is meant to be taken seriously.
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Otterclaw
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HARDLY A PROPER GENTLEMAN AT ALL
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I don't think cats can sweat.
Other than that, looks good to me.
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Graystep
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So is it accepted?
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Otterclaw
May 6 2008, 11:24 PM
I don't think cats can sweat.
Other than that, looks good to me.

Cats can sweat through their pads, but not from their skin.
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Silby
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I'll do it for a SILBY SNACK 8D
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Looks good to me.
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Graystep
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Okay, I fixed the sweating thing.
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Then it is approved!
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