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| Tweet Topic Started: May 6 2008, 07:49 PM (270 Views) | |
| Deleted User | May 6 2008, 07:49 PM Post #1 |
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Login Name - Dawnflower Desired Ranking - Warrior Preferred Name - Dawnflower Gender - She-cat Refrence Photo - ![]() Physical Description - Gray pelt with green eyes, tuft of fur missing from back, scar over right back paw. Summarized Description - Light gray she-cat with green eyes Personality - Caring and playful, careful with kits and protective of others. Sample RP - Dawnflower sat crouched behind a bush, keeping her eyes on the target: a mouse. Pouncing, she grabbed the mouse in her jaws and broke it's neck. Carefully she dug a little hole in the ground, placing the mouse in it and reburing it. Skillfully leaping over the roots of the trees, her nose followed a rabbit's scent as she roamed on with the hunting patrol. Over lumps and piles of leaves they ran, her nose stuck to the ground. Finding that rabbit meant more mouths could be fed. Speeding up, she finally found the little rascal. Crouching once again into the hunting crouch, she pounced, biting its neck. She scampered back to grab the mouse and then caught up with the rest of the patrol while they headed back to camp. Other Characters - Mudclaw. c: |
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| Deleted User | May 6 2008, 07:51 PM Post #2 |
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Seems a little lacking. Try to add more to physical appearance and personality. |
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| Silby | May 6 2008, 08:05 PM Post #3 |
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I'll do it for a SILBY SNACK
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Physical description is too short, not descriptive. Maybe you could add to the roleplay post? |
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| Silby | May 11 2008, 05:20 PM Post #4 |
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I'll do it for a SILBY SNACK
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Alrighty, looks good. <3 |
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