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| Tweet Topic Started: May 31 2010, 12:52 AM (337 Views) | |
| Owlstar | May 31 2010, 12:52 AM Post #1 |
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Login Name: xOwlspirit(on Furcadia), Owlstar(here) Desired Clan: StreamClan Desired Ranking: Warrior Desired Character Age: 35 moons old Preferred Warrior Name: Owltalon Gender: Tom Reference Photo: ![]() Physical Description. Owlspirit is a thickset cat, his legs are of moderate length with muscles lining their frame from moons of hard living. His fur is thick and lush, mainly ungroomed but will force himself to be cleansed for special occasions. The fur is puffed up, and looks like it is full of static, giving him a slightly... fluffy look. Owlspirit's base color is a dark ginger, almost red, with thin, jagged stripes tracing his body. His face is rugged and w\weathered, and laced with a series of scars that become him and give him a roguishly handsome look. But the first thing you see on his face, is he single, yes single, troubled dark green eye. Which is mirrored by a jagged scar where his opposite eye should have been. Oh, and did we mention he has no tail? His maimed look is finished off by a set of ragged ears, that are constantly on the look out. Furcadia Description: Summarized Description: Owlspirit is a large ginger tabby, with one green eye and a stub tail. History: He was not the type of kit to sit nice and pretty and listen to the warriors, he would get into trouble and bounce into everyones business if that's what needed to happen. His keen interests were mostly focused in the art of fighting, and he started with the playful assault of his two siblings, Pinekit and Shrewkit. Pinekit would happily play along while Shrewkit was angry and refused to play. His kithood passed mostly like this, only with his mother, for his father had died in a battle a quarter moon before he was born. As he gained apprenticeship he plunged into training with a passion and was eager to learn, especially fighting. But after a few rough sessions, despite being good at it, he did not find much pleasure in it, each time he fought it caused a deep unrest in his gut. He sought the peace of hunting and the thrill of the catch instead. Soon, he was ready for his first battle. His sister had come with him, but his brother had split ways with the clans to pursue different interests that a clan life could not give him. At first things went well and the confident apprentice was proud of his skills when something dreadful happened. His sister had been killed in the midst of the warfare. The sister he had loved so much and adored since they were so young. The death was crushing to him, and he refused to speak to anyone for the majority of his apprenticeship. And when words were spoken they were btiter and full of grief even as time after the death flew by. But a few moons after his sister's murder, he was made into a warrior but the ceremony was bittersweet. He wished his sister had been with him, but he knew she was looking down on him from StarClan. He has been a proud and confident warrior ever since, hunting and fighting whenever he is needed to and happily watching kits grow in the nursery. He is known for in battle, protecting apprentices with a passion whenever they get in a tight squeeze. In his mind, he vowed to never let himself witness a young cat's death when he could have stopped it. At the time in his life when he had the misfortune of losing his eye, he very abject to the possibility that he would be moved to the seemingly useless area as the elder's den. Granted, he enjoyed the occasional story, but he was averse to spending his prime moons in a musky den. As he healed, he spent extra time learning to use only one eye in battle. His adjustments gave him an odd gait, and his whiskers always bristling as he swivels his head from side to side constantly. Personality: His personality is quite twisted and different. He shifts from mood to mood, often lashing out at innocent people in a rage or fit of unnecessary proportions. Despite his temper, Owlstar has a peaceful soul, even though his appearance argues greatly with this theory. He loves to lounge around in the sunlight near a humming river. But when he gets into the mood of the battle, he is a force to be reckoned with and greatly feared by those who appose him. He can go into a full blood lust, that demanded his attention all the time when he was just an apprentice. And after he learned to control that, his true personality of somewhat of a family man come to view. He loves kits. They are something he loves more then peace, and would die to defend, even more then his own life. And another thing that overpowers him, is his need to be loved and love. That's who he is. Website (if applicable): www.freewebs.com/kugyay or www.owlstar.deviantart.com Sample Roleplay Post(s): Why won't she look at me? He thought desperately, his parents had been half-clan and they had somehow gotten through with their romance. Granted, his father never really stuck to the territory, taking joy in swaggering about the different clan camps attracting a desperate she-cat before leaving her. He wouldn't be like that, but the memory of Shade stung at the back of his head. Suneagle shook his head watching Scarletsparrow with longing, just to hear her voice, to feel her again. Life had been lonely without her, even while he was teaching Rosepaw battle moves he could not keep her out of his mind for even an instance. Even his sister could tell he was happier and something special was going on. After scolding his siblings, he stood stiffly, daring himself to walk up to her and tell her to look at him. But there beside her was Bumblestar, her former mentor; he physically and mentally sank backwards. There was no way to get her away right now; he had to be satisfied with watching. "Suneagle!" Eclipsekit whined. (This is actually Owlspirit's son on a different site, with Eclipsekit... his other son.o3o) Do you have any other characters in the dream? If so, who? I have none what so ever. Edited by Owlstar, May 31 2010, 08:12 PM.
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| Froststar | May 31 2010, 05:23 PM Post #2 |
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Lookin' for rupees
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Not entirely sure about the suffix -spirit with the prefix Owl-, but staff can put it up for debate? I'll give the rest of the staff a nudge to see how they feel about it. I'm a bit leery of the idea that he'd still be a warrior with so many injuries. Usually when a cat loses an eye or a good amount of their tail they're almost automatically sent to join the elders. Of course there have been characters that have learned to deal with only one eye (I've had one myself), and you could easily say that he had someone help him with training or something to help him get used to it. I'm just not so sure about him having no tail. Other staff can correct me if I'm wrong, but I thought a cat having not tail was pretty much meant a one way trip to the Elder's Den? I usually seem to get these mixed up often, so please tell me if I'm mistaken guys. Sixty moons is actually the typical age that warriors tend to retire at anyway. If you want an age that would make him a 'seasoned warrior' I'd say go for around thirty to early forty moons. |
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| Eyebright | May 31 2010, 06:39 PM Post #3 |
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Former Leader of FieldClan
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The suffix "-spirit" fits into the intangible/emotion category (precedent case - pretty sure there have been a couple others, as well, but that's the first one I found). The listed alternative "-talon" works much better. The tail can be compensated for, especially if he lost it at a young age. The eye, however, is another matter - it's a serious loss and, as Frost said, there needs to be some explanation as to why he did not retire. |
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FieldClan: Talltail, Dust-tail CliffClan: Rowantail StarClan: Patchedstar, Rockclaw, Fernwhisker OOC: Eyebright/Mistystar | |
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| Owlstar | May 31 2010, 07:07 PM Post #4 |
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I edited why he isn't in the elder's den and twisted his age for him to be a bit younger. |
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| Froststar | May 31 2010, 07:56 PM Post #5 |
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Lookin' for rupees
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Thanks for clearing that up, Eye. <3 History looks alright now. Just be aware that playing a cat without a tail and eye will leave him at a serious disadvantage and it's likely he could be easily over powered. Anyway, I just noticed the reference photo is photoshopped. I gathered up a multitude of other photo's that you could use if you want. Here's a list; One Two Three Four Five Six Edited by Froststar, May 31 2010, 07:57 PM.
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| Owlstar | Jun 1 2010, 09:11 PM Post #6 |
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Once again, I edited it with a non-photoshopped image. I hope everything is in order now. :3 And sorry for making such a conflicted warrior, I guess different websites have different preferences. |
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| Froststar | Jun 2 2010, 01:17 PM Post #7 |
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Lookin' for rupees
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No need to apologize whatsoever. :D Everything looks good now~ Just be sure to change all the Owlspirit's to Owltalon. ;3 |
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| Eyebright | Jun 2 2010, 01:42 PM Post #8 |
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Former Leader of FieldClan
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He has the alt, just hasn't edited it in yet. Looks good. |
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FieldClan: Talltail, Dust-tail CliffClan: Rowantail StarClan: Patchedstar, Rockclaw, Fernwhisker OOC: Eyebright/Mistystar | |
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| Otterclaw | Jun 2 2010, 06:48 PM Post #9 |
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HARDLY A PROPER GENTLEMAN AT ALL
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Looks fine.
Edited by Otterclaw, Jun 2 2010, 06:49 PM.
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Otterstar (SC) Sootfoot (CC) Berryleaf, Thistlepaw (LC) Galestorm (FC) Whitecough (OOC) | |
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| Eyebright | Jun 2 2010, 08:31 PM Post #10 |
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Former Leader of FieldClan
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Looks good. Please speak with a staff member in-dream about getting into the PS system. |
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FieldClan: Talltail, Dust-tail CliffClan: Rowantail StarClan: Patchedstar, Rockclaw, Fernwhisker OOC: Eyebright/Mistystar | |
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