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| Fireclaw---Warrior; It's a application to be a warrior. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 24 2010, 07:17 PM (234 Views) | |
| Bullets | Jun 24 2010, 07:17 PM Post #1 |
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OH MAI GOODNESS
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Login Name: FireClawx Desired Clan: StreamClan Desired Ranking: Warrior Desired Character Age: 18 Moons Preferred Warrior Name: Fireclaw Gender: Male Reference Photo: http://www.apurrfectfeline.org/Ginger_Cat.jpg [Edited for screen stretching - EB] Physical Description. Common adult size, fair amount of muscle. Fast considering he's not really thin but not thick. His coat is light orange with darker orange markings making their own paths in his fur. His eyes reflect brightly as a warm golden color, the were raging with determination and went with the flow of his fur. Furcadia Description: Common adult size, fair amount of muscle. Fast considering he's not really thin but not thick. His coat is light orange with darker orange markings making their own paths in his fur. His eyes reflect brightly as a warm golden color, the were raging with determination and went with the flow of his fur. He's a calm and collected feline, he takes his life in the clan very seriously but he always takes the chance to make his fellow clan cats laugh, although he loves making his buddies laugh he doesn't know what isn't and is funny. If he has any duties to attend though, he will always tend to those first and that means he finishes what he starts so he is very trustworthy.[StreamClan Warrior] **IF I get accepted anyway** Summarized Description: Number of Oranges Tom with Golden eyes Personality: A calm and collected feline, he takes his life in the clan very seriously but he always takes the chance to make his fellow clan cats laugh, although he loves making his buddies laugh he doesn't know what isn't and is funny. If he has any duties to attend though, he will always tend to those first and that means he finishes what he starts so he is very trustworthy. History: Fireclaw was born into the StreamClan by two warriors and went through the apprentice training like all the other cats and grew into a warrior himself. Website (if applicable):No Website Sample Roleplay Post(s): Fireclaw went through his daily routine as he awoke, a common yawn and a everyday stretch. He shook and hobbled over to a stream, like all of Fireclaw's other days he lowered his muzzle to the water and lapped it up rhythmically. The day was bright and held much warmth, he turned his head and spotted Shadowwatcher he gave out a friendly hello to her. Do you have any other characters in the dream? If so, who? Nopes~ xxxxxxxxx Okay some extra stuff, I just used a name I seen in the applying board or whatever you call it in my rp. Take your time to respond and stuff and uhmm Peace I'm out!
Edited by Bullets, Jun 25 2010, 11:09 AM.
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| Alyzza | Jun 24 2010, 08:39 PM Post #2 |
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Lieutenant Dan - ICECREAM!
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Please keep in mind that the warrior name would be 'Fireclaw' and not 'FireClaw', and it's 'StreamClan' not 'Streamclan' The personality and description seems lacking, but is okay if you don't want to expand it. |
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lolololol!11 Silverstone - StreamClan (Warrior) Snowpaw - LilyClan (Apprentice) Cinderstreak-FieldClan (Medicine Cat) Thunderstorm - CliffClan (Deputy) Foxy - Kittypet | |
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| Eyebright | Jun 25 2010, 01:33 AM Post #3 |
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Former Leader of FieldClan
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There are a lot of typoes and grammatical errors (for example, using "there" as in "over there" instead of "their" as in "their blanket"), but overall it looks alright. |
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FieldClan: Talltail, Dust-tail CliffClan: Rowantail StarClan: Patchedstar, Rockclaw, Fernwhisker OOC: Eyebright/Mistystar | |
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| Bullets | Jun 25 2010, 11:09 AM Post #4 |
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Okay, I edited the stuff you told me to edit. |
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| Froststar | Jun 25 2010, 05:00 PM Post #5 |
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Lookin' for rupees
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Looks good. Please speak with a staff member in-dream about getting into the PS system. |
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