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| Longclaw; Streamclan Warrior | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Dec 12 2010, 01:44 PM (194 Views) | |
| tigerfeet | Dec 12 2010, 01:44 PM Post #1 |
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Login Name: Longclaw [OOC alt: Tiger Feet] Desired Clan: Streamclan Desired Ranking: Warrior Desired Character Age: 28 moons Preferred Warrior Name: Longclaw Gender: Tom Reference Photo: Picture Physical Description: He is light gray with white patches. Longclaw is mainly light gray or blue, but he has large patches of white as well. His fur is short and thick, perfect for winter hunting. His eyes are a pale green with yellow accents. Furcadia Description: > Down through the trees the wind did blow, and out popped a tom of winter and snow. He raced through the land, who knew what he planned. For he was a warrior of Streamclan, he bowed to no man.[Streamclan warrior application][No apprentice] Summarized Description: A patched gray and white tom with green eyes. History: Longclaw was born to normal warrior parents in Streamclan. He had two littermates, who died during his kit and apprentice stages of life. Though he wasn't very close to them. His mentor was fair and calm, and he became a warrior at seventeen moons. Personality: He is rather hard to get along with, warm one minute and cold the next. Longclaw is severely loyal to Starclan and the cats in his clan, but not as much to the warrior code. He doesn't go around breaking codes left and right, but he doesn't agree with it sometimes. He's not interested in falling in love and would rather work hard at being the best warrior he can be. Longclaw hates kittypets and outside cats, he is revolted by their lifestyle and will actively avoid them. Website (if applicable): http://longclawx.webs.com/ Sample Roleplay Post(s): Longclaw shifted in his sleep, the night was late and he was restless. His dreams were uneventful, though he woke up anyway. The warrior frowned, this was annoying. It wasn't the first time he wouldn't be able to sleep and it wouldn't be the last. Best he could do was see if he could be useful. Perhaps he would go on a nighttime hunting expedition. His pale eyes flashed in the cloudy night as he rose from the warriors den and out into the cool air. Longclaw sniffed it, looking around for other insomnia ridden cats. Finding none, the young warrior nodded to the guards and slipped out of camp with a mumbled, "Going hunting..." He could take care of himself and he couldn't sleep, though he did want company tonight, it seemed he would not find any. The patched tom walked with silent grace, common to most warriors. He listened for the scurrying of nocturnal prey, hoping to find something worth catching. Do you have any other characters in the dream? If so, who? Longclaw would be my first character, though I might bring Tiger Feet as an OOC alt... Edited by tigerfeet, Dec 12 2010, 08:46 PM.
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| Alyzza | Dec 12 2010, 08:02 PM Post #2 |
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Lieutenant Dan - ICECREAM!
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Looks fine to me, but remember to capitalize a sentence when you start it, even it it's a quote. So instead of "going hunting...", you'd have "Going hunting..." |
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lolololol!11 Silverstone - StreamClan (Warrior) Snowpaw - LilyClan (Apprentice) Cinderstreak-FieldClan (Medicine Cat) Thunderstorm - CliffClan (Deputy) Foxy - Kittypet | |
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| tigerfeet | Dec 12 2010, 08:46 PM Post #3 |
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I'm sorry, I'll fix that. I always thought when talking you still didn't capitalize it. But I'll fix it, thanks. =) |
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| Eyebright | Dec 14 2010, 01:03 AM Post #4 |
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Former Leader of FieldClan
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Looks good to me~ |
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FieldClan: Talltail, Dust-tail CliffClan: Rowantail StarClan: Patchedstar, Rockclaw, Fernwhisker OOC: Eyebright/Mistystar | |
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| Froststar | Dec 14 2010, 09:22 PM Post #5 |
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Lookin' for rupees
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Looks good. Please speak with a staff member in-dream about getting into the PS system. |
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