
| The Adventures of VolcanoMan and IronClad!; Rawlin's Superhero Story (WIP) | |
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| Topic Started: Jul 24 2017, 08:28 PM (12 Views) | |
| Rawlin | Jul 24 2017, 08:28 PM Post #1 |
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Scene 1 int.victor's house.night Victor and Isaac are college buddies in their hometown. One Friday night they got together at Victor's house for dinner. They had plans to go hiking in the morning. Victor: Oh man! Are you ready to go hiking tomorrow! Isaac: Yeah I am, but first can you guess what I have? *Isaac says as he is holding something behind him.* Victor: Hmmm... *Victor sniffs and then smiles* Victor: Oh man I can smell the nachos! Issac: Hey Victor I got some ghost pepper sauce too! Are you up for the challenge? *Isaac shows the nachos and the bottle of ghost pepper sauce from behind him.* Victor: You bet I am! Also Isaac I made you some spinach puffs since I know you love those. Issac: Sweet! Thanks Victor! *They begin to eat their favorite meals. Victor puts on some superhero movies and they both enjoy the night* ext.mountain.morning The next morning they depart on their hiking trip up the mountain behind their town known as Crater Rise. Neither of them has ever explored the area and this would be a first for them. They hike all morning and then around mid-day they come to the rim of a giant crater. Victor: Wow look at the size of that crater! Isaac: Well it is called 'Crater Rise' for a reason. *They both laugh at that as they get closer to the edge of the crater* But just as they arrive at the edge the whole mountain starts to shake and the two are hurled hopelessly down into the crater. Many years ago an unknown governmental branch zoned the hollow and dormant volcano as a storage site for millions of barrels of toxic waste. Over the last fifty years lava has been simmering below the surface of the waste, and the two have started to mix. There is no time to run or call for help before they fall into to pit of magma and toxic sludge as they are sure they are about to die as they fall into the chasm. But luck would have it that when they plunge into the radioactive magma, they find themselves protected from the terrible heat. Issac: Uh, Victor I can feel the heat but I don’t feel the pain what’s going on. Victor: I have no idea Isaac. The toxic compounds have changed them, each in different ways: Victor's last meal had been doused in Ghost Pepper Sauce, the hottest salsa on earth and Isaac's last meal had been iron-rich spinach puffs. Isaac turns green skinned then grey as his whole body turns to iron and he gains super strength. The iron in the spinach takes over his body and he is made 1000 times stronger than any man as he is coated in a iron like shell around his body. Isaac then grabs his friend Victor and they leap out of the volcano moments before the terrible eruption. Victor: Oh no! The city is down there we got to stop that eruption or everything will be destroyed! Isaac: Yeah we got to do something! Victor you stand over there I think I can help with this. Isaac takes notice of his new strength and iron shell as he then leaps back onto the crater and begins busying himself by filling the pit with trees and rocks and debris to prevent the inevitable eruption. Victor: What do I do now? *Victor wondered as he looked around.* Suddenly because of Isaac's frantic clearing of the mountainside, a tree that he had missed begins to fall directly toward him. Victor extends his hand toward the tree. Victor: Watch out Isaac! But to his surprise, a spray of flame shoots from his palm and turns the tree to dust and ashes before it can harm his friend. Both sit staring in amazement at the space where the tree had been. Victor: What the?! How'd that happen? Isaac: I don't know but it was pretty cool! *Victor takes notice of his hands as they have visible holes in them but they do not hurt and they seemingly can close back up.* A moment later they remember the radioactive volcano they sit upon. When Isaac piled debris into the volcano he succeeded only in adding pressure to the vat of magma and toxic waste. Victor decides that if he can shoot fire from the newly formed holes in his hands, then he ought to be able to absorb the force of the volcanic blast into his arms as well. Victor then runs back to the edge of the volcano just as it begins to erupt. Isaac: What are you doing?! You'll be killed! Victor: I got a stupid idea, just trust me on this! Victor says as he lets out a great yell and aims his arms into the blast and miraculously his plan works. His body balloons up with lava, and the eruption is contained. Victor turns toward the sea, and with a great grin, the top of his head explodes outward but keeping the cranium intact. He is able to aim all the lava into the waves. When the explosion's force is complete, the top of his head has taken the shape of a volcanic crater and he falls down on the ground laughing. Isaac can't believe what he has just seen! Isaac: What happened Victor? Are you okay?! Victor: Yeah I'm okay Isaac, I just have a splitting headache. *Victor chuckles at his own joke* Isaac: That was your stupid idea?! Victor: Yeah but it all worked out right? Isaac: Well yeah but how are we going to explain this to our friends and family? Victor: I don't know! *Victor said as he smiled brightly.* Isaac: Let's just get home Victor I'm feeling hungry again. Victor: Roger that Isaac! The two head back home and enjoy the rest of the day together. Scene 2 int.volcano base.day Victor and Isaac decide to make the newly hollowed volcano their home and base of operations. They clean out the last of the barrels of toxic waste, and other volcanic debris. Soon they have it all cleaned out, and start talking about design options. Isaac: We need a good kitchen. Victor: And a monitor to keep an eye on the town. Isaac: I don’t think we can afford that stuff Victor. Victor: Okay how about we just get all our kitchenware from our houses and we can pool our money together for a police scanner just to start with? Isaac: Sounds good to me! *Transition to when their base is finished and they have a new police scanner* Victor hears of a hostage situation involving a wealthy person on his police scanner. Victor: Dude there is a hostage situation going on we've got to do something! Isaac: Yeah lets! With these new powers we’ll have a way to help the police! Since Victor can shoot magma, fire and volcanic rocks from his hands and head, and because of Isaac's super strength and iron shell, they feel sure that they can help. They then climb back out of the crater then run down the mountainside, making a mental note to install a ground-level door. Victor: Hey Isaac remind me when we get back to install a ground level door to the base, climbing out of the top of the crater is annoying. Isaac: Duly noted. ext.abandoned building.day They head for the abandoned apartment building where the hostage is being held. The police are out in front trying to reason with the criminal. Victor and Isaac see an open window in the back of the building. Since they can't reach it, Isaac throws Victor up through the open window using his super strength. Isaac waits on the ground to see if he needs to help somehow. Victor, after watching superhero movies, makes himself believe that he is brave, although he is very scared. Victor: Jeez this is so freaky man. I really hope that everything will be fine. He rushes through the hallway looking into the abandoned rooms until he comes upon a slightly open door where the hostage is being held. He sees the hostage with a gun to his head. Victor gets an idea from one of the superhero movies he watched as he then flicks a small bit of fire at the shoes of the hostage taker, the fire ignites and burns his shoe. In the man's confusion he stops pointing the gun at the hostage, and at that moment Victor fires a volcanic rock at the gun thus knocking it away from the man's hand. Victor yells and charges in, grabbing the hostage and looking around for others. The hostage taker then dives for his gun, burning shoe and all. Victor: Not going to happen dude! Victor says as he releases a single drop of magma onto the gun that fell on the floor in front of him, melting it into a worthless hunk of metal. With the confused hostage and hostage taker in hand, Victor leaps out the 8th floor window. Fortunately for them, Isaac was there with the cops, telling them about his friend. Isaac: Listen you gotta believe me! My friend is in there saving the guy! He and I got super powers! Police Officer: Yeah yeah yeah, step aside kid let the real heroes in blue save the day, now go watch cartoons or something. They find it very hard to believe until they see the three men falling from the window. Isaac then leaps into the air and catches them mid-fall, absorbing the shock of the landing in his iron plating thus allowing them to land safely. Victor: Dude that was awesome! That iron shell of yours really comes in handy! Isaac: Yeah well you did great too man! The cops promptly arrest the hostage taker but are still in shock that two kids did something a whole police force could not do. The hostage as it turns out is the mayor and he is very grateful for the help of the two boys. The mayor then learns that they had also deflected the recent volcanic eruption and then decides he must help them as they had helped the city so much already. Mayor: Thank you boys for saving me there! As it seems from what I have been told about you two and from seeing your recent exploits first hand, I’d have to say you two are not only super human but heroes in my book! What can I possibly do to help you out? Isaac: We need to setup a base here and we were thinking we could use some new ways to monitor the city and help out. Victor: Yeah but it would be totally your call of course. Mayor: I would gladly fund this base of yours! With gun sales up the crime rate is up so we could use all the help we can get, though I do believe you two should get some proper training with those hip and cool powers of yours. Victor and Isaac visibly groan as they noticed that the mayor was trying to relate to them. Isaac: Yeah we'll try. Victor: Just don't say hip anymore. *The mayor funds the base. They get a brand new monitor and a state of the art kitchen. Victor bores a ground level exit to their base, melting the rock with his two hands. They put in a nice iron door.* Victor: Thanks for reminding me Isaac I nearly forgot! Isaac: Yeah no problem Victor! Let's be the best superheroes ever! Victor: You mean the 'only' superheroes ever. Isaac: Yeah that too! *Isaac said in a chuckle.* End of Scene 2 Scene 3 int.volcano base.Morning As the two newly appointed heroes had their base all set up they remembered the mayor's words to them. That they needed training for their new powers. Victor: Hey Isaac how do you think we can even train our powers? I mean there were plently of fictional superheroes out there but none of them were ever real. Isaac: Maybe we could setup a sort of training area in the base? You know so we can figure out our powers better? Victor: Well we can't possibly ask the mayor again he already did so much for us with this base we have now. I'd feel bad asking for more stuff. Isaac: Very good point there Victor. How about we just make it ourselves? Victor: We still need money for that Isaac. Any ideas how we can make money fast? Victor and Isaac try to come up with different ideas for how to make money when suddenly Isaac comes up with something. Isaac: Hey remember that old show that had these atheletic people go through obstacles? Maybe something on the internet can tell us where to buy equipment like that! Victor: Yeah but the only money we have is for the bills to fund the base and you know that was given to us by the mayor so we are kinda broke otherwise. As Isaac searches the internet for possible jobs. They come upon a cooking competition advertised online. Isaac enters in hopes of winning the $5000 prize, to raise money for the training grounds and any future things they would eventually need. So the two travel to the local cooking competiton with little to no experience. int.Cookoff.afternoon Isaac: Dude I'm not sure about this. Victor: You'll be fine man you're already a great chef! Isaac: Yeah but that's just for casual stuff like when I come over for movie night! Victor: I'll be cheering you on all the way man and besides this will be good training! As the bell rang Isaac was very nervous and began making his favorite dish that he picked up from Victor who was sitting in the front row cheering him on. Spinach puffs were his favorite meal and were easier for him to make than something complicated. Turns out he could save time using his powers related to iron to make iron cooking utensils from his hands to help speed up the process. Though it got some strange looks from other chefs they had tried not to think too much on it as the bell rang again for them to finish. As the chefs all got their ratings from the judges Isaac's Spinach puffs were the highest among the ratings with a solid nine out of ten for most of the judges as they loved his spinach puffs. They announced Isaac as the winner and handed him the trophy much to Isaac's surprise. Victor was allowed on stage with him when Isaac told them the recipe was originally Victor's. They both held the trophy high as they were then given the check for the five thousand dollars. Victor: Now that i'm up here Isaac I got to try those spinach puffs you made! Isaac: Dude they were basically the same ones you made me just with a little touch of my own creativity! Victor: Oh please Isaac what could you have added that made my grandma's old recipe any better? Isaac: I added some feta along with the cream cheese! Victor: Nice! I'll be sure to try it sometime! int.volcano base.evening The two boys drove back to their new base and cashed the check so they could buy things they needed for the base such as the training course that would be built for them and just enough money to pay for some new costumes for their super heroic deeds. But before they decided on costumes they had to come up wih super hero names. Victor: So what should we call ourselves? Isaac: How about Vulcan and IronChef?! Victor: Too generic for mine and yours is kinda taken for cooking contests. But you knew that already. Isaac: Yeah good point. How about Iron Man? Victor: That one is taken too Isaac. But how does IronGuy sound?! Isaac: Seems kinda like a lame name to me. Victor: Yeah but IronGuy isn't taken like those other two. Isaac: Fair point there VolcanoMan. Victor: Where'd you come up with that Isaac? Isaac: I just figured since Vulcan was too generic for you that VolcanoMan would fit better. *Victor chuckled then nodded at Isaac.* Victor: And you'd be right on the money there Isaac! I love the name! But since IronGuy is so lame how does IronClad sound? Isaac: That sounds cool! Okay lets get those costumes! But then again lets wait till morning until we do that. Victor: I agree with you Isaac after all we had a big day today! End of Scene 3 Scene 4 int.Crater Rise.Morning Edited by Rawlin, Jul 24 2017, 08:41 PM.
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