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Celeste's Workshop; Celeste's Requests
Topic Started: Apr 23 2015, 09:09 PM (1,366 Views)
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Edited by Celeste, Jun 6 2016, 09:10 PM.
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1st one - looks fine

2nd one - The only thing that bothers me is a lack of interaction between stats for a confirmed hit, unless the level check is just for the ability to break and only that

3rd- 20% seems like a lot of PL for stat damage, but the effects are useful. 15% seems fine, still costly but not that much.
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Changed to 15% and the second one should have been an ability instead of a Technique. It's designed to work with any attack involving the Cyborg arm and intentionally destroying weapons or items. I messed up the original design and now fixed it.
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All good here then!
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Eye Scouter is fine!

Finger Tip Hack just worries me.
Just so it feels more fair, let the defending stat of the all machine be any of the 4 stats they can use. Considering you can reprogram their whole body, I feel like you should be have to beat the best thing they have.

Forearm Canon is fine, I just want to tone the numbers very slightly and give it another level

15--30--45--60--75


I think this is good with this :D
Edited by Bowwy, May 5 2015, 09:23 PM.
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New toys. Lemme Know how busted they are or how weak they are.
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Everything except Enhanced Body Core is fine by me.

EBC is just really really strong. At level 6 it's basically a free 30% PL boost all the time. My idea is that the more damage Celeste herself takes, the less extra damage she deals? Something like that with total PL % markers?

That, or give each attack that uses the extra PL an extra 2% cost or something if that seems easier.
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First off.. I forgot to mess with my numbers. The 30% was from my previous design that I scrapped. It was supposed to be a 20% cap. So fixed that. XD

Anyway. I was originally going to go for it increased PL during attacks... but realized that this was effectively the same thing but just less wordy. I can tack on an energy cost if you like for anything that uses PL. I was trying to go for a simple design that basically made her attacks deal more damage due to a cyber suit. However since it's an item and not an upgrade it would be effected by things that destroyed or disabled technology.

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Disable Tech [1:5] Technique
A technique designed to disable a piece of Technology with just one touch for the remainder of a thread (until repaired). The level of this Technique must match or exceed the level of the technology you are disabling.
{12 Aptitude}


I went for the chest piece being the strongest since it is also the largest. If you'd like I can make it so it increases her Max by % of her Current? That way it's boost is depending on the damage she took. But that'd be a lot of extra math.

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Edited by Cloud, May 7 2015, 05:38 PM.
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Considering it's going to have additional XP costs, I feel much better about this. Capping at 20% is also much nicer. I'm fine with this! :D
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Bowwy or Roots

Just to clarify. You like my edited version of this and see no need for further changes or do you want further changes? XD
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IS GOOD
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An Android/Cyborg version of Energy Field.
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In my opinion, Artificial Energy Field looks just fine.
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That's 'cause it is fine. Nice work, Jach. Approved.
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Kurisu has made his way into the forum.
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Is it just +3? Do you mean per level? I figure, but make it +2 per level.
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Dem Skills.
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Looks good to me
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