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[color=yellow]Galactic Domination[/color]; Glacius' bonds
Topic Started: Jun 9 2015, 10:29 PM (723 Views)
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Both are... super strong. Lemme fix that for you. xD

How do you like these:

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Eradicator's Vengeance [1:10] Bio Armor
Glacius' bio armor. As it grows stronger, his physical attacks deal more damage and all damage dealt to him is lowered. Grants +2% reduction to all damage per level as well as +1% per level to all physical damage dealt.
{Glacius}


Frost Demon Breath [1:5] Attack
A blast from Glacius' mouth of bone-chilling wind to hurt an opponent. Does 20% of Wisdom per level. Every time an opponent is hit with Frost Demon Breath, their maximum power level is lowered by 10% of their ACTUAL Max Power level. Usable once per level per thread. Costs 5% of power level.
{Changeling, 15 Wisdom}


I mostly had an issue with how high the first one's level got. All Damage reduction by 50% and your damage output increased to 25% was a tad bit ridiculous.

The second one was just confusing with the minimum of 50% while lowering it by 20%. I figured just lower by 10% and it'll eventually lower it to 50% based on the wording.
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Impotent fool, hindering my progress. Fine. Pathetic earthling. I'll take them.
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I have more items, fool
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Fools!!! I have more property.
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Bio-Enchantment is fine, as is Second Layer and Brutal Tail Smash.

Prideful Blows though, that one seems a bit too powerful to me. Maybe if it was a technique with a PL cost it would be alright. Or if you increased the requirements of the ability a bit, it would be alright. Also, does the strength increase last until the end of the thread?
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Fool! Clearly I forgot to put that there, there's no need to mock me. You're lucky I don't strangle you. Is it adequate now?
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Well, looks good to me at least.
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Not staff (Pls dun make me staff), but here is my (Galileo) unofficial review.

Blizzard Beam [1:4] Attack
A deadly beam of temperatures below any science can explain. Glacius fires a bright blue cold blast of energy at whatever he deems inferior to the Frost Demon. Deals 60% of wisdom per level. An opponent hit with a Blizzard Beam has their max power level reduced by 40% for their next post.
[40 Wisdom] -30% PL, once per thread, twice at level 4-

At max level, this is Wisdom*2.4 damage with an added effect and limited use. I’d drop the cost down to -25% PL.


Vacuum Tail [1:3] Technique
A technique in which Glacius uses his powerful tail to create a vacuum so powerful it can defend him from attacks. If Glacius' strength is higher than the opposing attack's stat (Strength, Spirit, or Dex) Glacius can deflect the attack away.
{Changeling, 30 Strength} -Once per level per thread, 7% power level-

Seems fine to me.


Frost Demon Barrier [1:5] Technique
A ice cold wall of magical energy that will block an opposing Wisdom, Aptitude, or Willpower based attack. This wall can withstand up to 30% of Glacius' Wisdom per level.
{Changeling, 40 Wisdom} -Once per level per thread, 10% power level-

Seeing as how my Wall was approved and this is similar to that with fewer effects and a reduced cost, I'd say this is fine.
Edited by Spark, Sep 18 2015, 10:58 PM.
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Blizzard Beam [1:4] Attack
A deadly beam of temperatures below any science can explain. Glacius fires a bright blue cold blast of energy at whatever he deems inferior to the Frost Demon. Deals 60% of wisdom per level. An opponent hit with a Blizzard Beam has their max power level reduced by 40% for their next post.
[40 Wisdom] -30% PL, once per thread, twice at level 4-


So at fourth level it does 240% damage, twice, for 30% PL, at the requirement of 40 wisdom. Hm... something about that feels a little OP for the cost and requirement, I want to say up the req to 50 wisdom, and I'll be more okay with how powerful it is.

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Vacuum Tail [1:3] Technique
A technique in which Glacius uses his powerful tail to create a vacuum so powerful it can defend him from attacks. If Glacius' strength is higher than the opposing attack's stat (Strength, Spirit, or Dex) Glacius can deflect the attack away.
{Changeling, 30 Strength} -Once per level per thread, 7% power level-


This is approved.

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Frost Demon Barrier [1:5] Technique
An ice cold wall of magical energy that will block an opposing Wisdom, Aptitude, or Willpower based attack. This wall can withstand up to 30% of Glacius' Wisdom per level.
{Changeling, 40 Wisdom} -Once per level per thread, 10% power level-


Fixed a grammar thing so, similarly to Blizzard beam, at fifth level this can block 150% damage, five times per thread at 10% each use (50% total if all uses are used) for 40 Wisdom. NEVERMIND!

This is fine.
Edited by Angeles, Sep 19 2015, 12:36 PM.
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Tyrant Glacius has performed these edits!!
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Blizzard Beam [1:4] Attack
A deadly beam of temperatures below any science can explain. Glacius fires a bright blue cold blast of energy at whatever he deems inferior to the Frost Demon. Deals 60% of wisdom per level. An opponent hit with a Blizzard Beam has their max power level reduced by 40% for their next post.
[50 Wisdom] -30% PL, once per thread, twice at level 4-


Approved.
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FOOLS! I GROW STRONGER WITH MADNESS!!!
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Hadiis-Aspect [1:6] Technique
The legendary crocodile will never truly die. The animatronic crocodile lives on permanently in the soul of the Mighty Tyrant Glacius, and he brings the heat.
When used, Glacius transforms into Hadiis-Aspect. This form change all of Glacius' ice or frost-related moves in any way to fire moves and increases' strength and wisdom by 30%. Lasts one post per level.
{Glacius, Demon Tooth, Minor Regen 3:3} -Once per thread takes the use of Demon Tooth-


Fixed.

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Third Layer [1:10] Bio-Armor
The third layer of Glacius' Vengeful Bio-Armor.
Grants +1.5 strength AND +1.5 wisdom per level during stat checks.
{Glacius, 1500 power level}


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Bound Tooth [1:1] Ability
Certain special items are designated as tied to Glacius' person. The Demon Tooth that binds he and Hadiis together is one of these, and counts as being part of his 'person', as Glacius cannot rid himself of it.
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Mar 1 2016, 05:15 PM
Bound Tooth [1:1] Ability
Certain special items are designated as tied to Glacius' person. The Demon Tooth that binds he and Hadiis together is one of these, and counts as being part of his 'person', as Glacius cannot rid himself of it.
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I see nothing wrong with this.

Approved.
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Arcosian Healing [1:5] Ability
Arcosians can regenerate their power level in combat due to their regenerative capabilities. At 5:5, at the beginning of the user's post, they restore 25% of their missing power level.
{Arcosian, Minor Regeneration 3:3}


I WILL NEVER DIE
Edited by Glacius, Mar 7 2016, 04:44 PM.
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Arcosian Healing [1:5] Ability
Arcosians can regenerate their power level in combat due to their regenerative capabilities. At [5:5], at the beginning of the user's post, they restore 30% of their missing power level.
{Arcosian, Minor Regeneration 3:3} None


buffed and Approved
Edited by Galileo, Mar 7 2016, 05:57 PM.
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Blizzard Beam [1:5] Attack
A deadly beam of temperatures below any science can explain. Glacius fires a bright blue cold blast of energy at whatever he deems inferior to the Frost Demon.
Deals 50% Wisdom Mental Damage per level.
Reduces the target's Max PL by 40% during their next post.
[50 Wisdom] -15% PL. Once every other level per thread.-


just posting a new version gal gave me
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Mar 21 2016, 12:07 AM
Blizzard Beam [1:5] Attack
A deadly beam of temperatures below any science can explain. Glacius fires a bright blue cold blast of energy at whatever he deems inferior to the Frost Demon.
Deals 50% Wisdom Mental Damage per level.
Reduces the target's Max PL by 40% during their next post.
[50 Wisdom] -15% PL. Once every other level per thread.-
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