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[color=yellow]Jack Trader's Stuff[/color]; No Clever Title Here
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Topic Started: Sep 2 2015, 09:43 AM (3,315 Views)
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Sep 2 2015, 09:43 AM
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Axolotl Awakening [1:1] Ability Descended from a rather unusual anthro (Who Jack later guessed must have dwelt near or within the ocean), the dormant genes within him have finally awakened to the latest in a series of traumatic experiences in his life and in response to his human body that he has, quite literally, pushed beyond realistic limits. This has triggered a macro-cellular mutation that eliminated previously unused physical traits with ones that may better enable him to survive the harsh conditions to which he regularly exposes himself. This ability, upon activating, provides the following PERMANENT effects: Changes Jack's species to Halfbreed with Human as his primary race and Anthro as his secondary race. Jack may only keep ONE of his Human traits upon using this Ability and must replace the others with ONE Anthro trait in addition to Enhanced Senses [1:3]. {250 in Physical Stats, and Exclusive to Jack Trader} This Ability, upon activating, reduces Jack's Remaining PL to 1% of his Max PL. Learning and using this ability may not be reversed. The effects of this ability are permanent until character death unless Jack undergoes another means of changing species.
Gill Growth [1:1] Ability Whenever Jack changes into his anthro or animal form, he may include gills in the transformation to allow him to breathe underwater. Whenever out in open air, he may consciously close his gills shut and breathe through his mouth instead. {Blessed Human [1:1], Exclusive to Jack Trader} None
Axolotl Restoration [1:6] Ability Jack has found himself capable of recovering from a number of injuries inflicted upon him as a result of his anthro heritage. Restores +1.5% Max PL per level at the end of each post while in combat. {Blessed Human [1:1], 150 Strength or Dexterity, and Exclusive to Jack Trader} None
Axolotl Regeneration [1:4] Technique With additional focus, Jack is capable of accessing the full extent of his restorative abilities and may consciously regenerate to the point that he may regrow lost body parts. If dealt fatal damage or issued enough damage to render him unconscious, Jack may not use this Technique. Regenerates lost body parts including limbs and organs as long as Jack has at least 1 PL. Restores +1.5% Max PL per level. {Axolotl Restoration [6:6]} None
Mental Lock Down [1:3] Technique Some attacks against the human mind persist even after the initial defense against it. This technique allows a human to further reinforce the natural defense of their complex mind. Prevents all non-damage effects of any opposing Wisdom, Aptitude, or Willpower ATBS or Item from affecting the user and prevents the non-damage effects of the ATBS or Item from affecting them again for one additional post per level. Every other level adds an additional use to Mental Sever. {Mental Sever [3:3]} Requires one use of Mental Sever.
Trader's Soul Crafter [1:10] Accessory A gauntlet worn on the left hand that enables its creator to manipulate their energies with greater ease and efficiency. +1% Max PL per level. [10:10] Restores 2 PL for every 5 PL spent. {5,000 PL, Ki Manifestation, Exclusive to Jack Trader} -None-
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Mach 10 [5:5] Ability Humans are constantly pushing the boundaries of what is and is not considered possible, redefining the definition of impossible until the day comes in which “impossible” is defined as a lie. One human has done just that with their mastery of flight and has broken the sound barrier with it. Allows the user to fly at X times the speed of sound in which X is double the level of this Ability. The user may modify a Strength-based attack so that it may not be blocked or dodged without a Technique. Attacks modified by this Ability cannot have their damage reduced below the user's Spirit*X in which X equals Level*0.5. {Immense Physical Prowess [5:5], Power of Flight [4:4], Aerobatics [3:3], Fast as Lightning [2:2], 100 Spirit, 100 Strength} -Once per level per thread-
Converging Storm Strike [1:5] Attack The user issues a pair of invisible blasts of concussive energy that curve toward their target from separate directions, threatening to incapacitate and subdue their target upon converging with it. This attack may prove lethal against those who cannot withstand its crushing force. Deals Spirit*0.4 per level in Physical Damage. Increases the Spirit Stat by X% during the Attack only. X = 4 per level {Descending Storm Strike [4:4], 150 Spirit} -12% PL. Once every other level per thread.
Exploit Weakness [1:5] Ability It's rare, if impossible, to come across an entirely impenetrable and perfect defense. The user applies this knowledge to their fighting prowess to expose the weaknesses within an opponent's protective measures. Optional: Whenever using a Physical Attack, add X to its Stat Check. X = 4% per level of (Strength+Spirit+Dexterity) This Ability does NOT modify Damage. {Equal Footing [5:5], Immense Physical Prowess [5:5], and 150 in Physical Stats} -4% PL
Jack‘s sword [15:15] Weapon
A hand-and-a-half sword completely ordinary in appearance and without decoration. Its edge is blunt to prevent it from cutting, but remains capable of significant destruction. Since its creation, this weapon has been and always will be a fragment of its creator’s soul. A refinement process that was supposed to destroy it merely purged from it the evil that afflicted its creator.
This item replaces Jack’s sword [10:10] with Jack’s sword [11:15] upon creation for -7 Exp (Standard Item Creation Cost). The creation of this item requires the destruction and removal of Demonic Wrath [5:5]
Attacks with this weapon deal Strength*0.07 per level in Physical Damage. This weapon grants +3.2 Strength per level, but only when Attacking with it. This weapon may NEVER receive Enchantments or Curses.
Whenever taken, lost, or broken Jack may deconstruct this weapon and reconstruct it within his possession for -5% PL.
{Ki Manifesting, Immense Physical Prowess [5:5], 150 Strength, Jack Trader Exclusive} None
Bat Out of Hell [1:1] Technique Having utilized his demonically enhanced aerobatics a number of times, Jack has become something of an aerial trickster capable of avoiding most incoming threats against him at any given moment. If the user is flying or begins to fly, they may dodge all incoming Attacks for one post. {Aerobatics [3:3] modified by Demon's Touch [1:1]} -10% PL and consumes one use of Aerobatics.
Hit'em Really Hard [1:4] Attack Defeating a harder opponent sometimes requires you to hit them...well...harder. Deals Strength*1.15 at [1:4], Strength*1.35 at [2:4], Strength*1.55 at [3:4], or Strength*1.75 at [4:4] in Physical Damage. Increases the user's Max PL by 5% per level during the attack only. {Normal Kicks and Punches [3:3]} -9% PL. Once per level per thread.
Regular Blocking [1:7] Technique Jack uses his strength and martial mastery to block attacks. That's why it's called 'Blocking'. Each use reduces Strength and Dexterity Damage dealt to Jack by 14% per level (That's 98% at [7:7]) if X% of his Strength exceeds an attacker's attacking stat. X = 15 per level (That's 105 at [7:7]). {Immense Physical Prowess [5:5], 100 Strength} None
You'll Only Hurt Yourself [1:1] Ability Directly attacking Jack with your fists is not advisable. Whenever Jack receives Strength Damage from an attack, the attacker loses 10 Strength and 10% Max PL for their next post if their Strength does not exceed Jack's Strength. {Regular Blocking [7:7], and Exclusive to Jack Trader} None
Normal Kicks and Punches [1:3] Attack With his strength having reached insane levels, Jack tries his best not to hit things with his normal strength. This is not so much a quote, signature attack, unquote as it is just him fighting at his default strength. "Normal Kicks and Punches" deals Strength*0.75 at [1:3], Strength*0.95 at [2:3], and Strength*1.15 at [3:3] in Physical Damage. {Immense Physical Prowess [5:5], 100 Strength, and Jack Trader Exclusive} -3% PL
Equal Footing [1:5] Ability There are those who place too many proverbial eggs in one basket to overwhelm their enemies with a singular force. And then there are those who demonstrate a certain sense of balance to counter such acts of aggression. Optional: Whenever an opponent's ATBS or Item compares their highest stat to the user's highest stat, it checks each user's second highest stat instead (if either user's highest stat is tied with their second highest then it will default to their highest stat). This only affects Stat Checks and does not modify Damage. {30 in at least two stats. Only functions at [5:5]} -None-
Against the Wall [2:2] Technique Jack manifests a wall of energy at a target location to Block 1 Physical Attack. {Ki Manifesting, 100 Spirit, Be Jack} -10% PL, Once per level per thread.
Unrestricted [10:10] Technique A true hero of the people exercises restraint and self control so as not to harm the innocent they have sworn to protect, but great evil may sometimes force them to cast aside their personal restrictions and confront a threat with all their might. This technique restores 3% PL per level upon activation. During the activation post, Jack may NOT EVER Attack or use any other Technique, but he may use Skills and Abilities IF their levels are MAXED. Grants the following Effects: +3 Strength per level and +3 Spirit per level for 6 posts (not counting activation). {90 Spirit, 90 Strength, and Jack Trader Exclusive} Once per thread and may only be activated at 45% PL or less. While active, Attacks that determine Strength or Spirit as Damage cost an additional 3% PL including Attacks that have no cost.
Jack’s sword [1:10] Weapon
A hand-and-a-half sword completely ordinary in appearance and without decoration. Standard features include a round pommel, a synthetic grip, and a brass guard. Jack intentionally dulled its sharp edges to prevent it from ever cutting anyone after he finished creating it. Its shoddy appearance mirrors the humble nature of its master, which is ironic given the fact that the sword possesses no reflective surface.
Attacks with this sword deal Strength*0.75 damage. This sword grants +5 Strength per level, but only when attacking with it.
{Immense Physical Prowess [5:5], 90 Strength, and Ki Manifesting} None
Descending Storm Strike [3:4] Attack The user extends one hand forward and discharges an invisible blast of concussive energy; alternatively, the user may launch the attack from a foot. Anyone struck by the blast will be knocked back a great distance and will receive the user’s Spirit*0.7 in Physical Damage. Increases the user's Max PL by 5% per level during the attack only. {75 Spirit} -4% PL, may be used once every other level per post, capping at twice per post.
Demonic Wrath [1:5] Item-Curse Accepting half of Astraea’s wrath has already proven detrimental to Jack’s sanity and health. This curse forces Jack to sense Astraea’s physical and emotional anguish (no matter how small or great) and alerts him to her location even if he cannot reach her. It has also implanted a dependency within Jack to keep the sword with him at all times in case he might need it to locate and rescue Astraea.
Jack gains the following effects whenever he wields his sword.
+5% Max PL per level when calculating Jack's Strength Damage from any source. Reduces Spirit by 10
{Astraea's Approval, Jack’s sword [10:10], Rename the item type of Jack's sword to "cursed weapon"} -None-
Acoustic Guitar [0:0] Accessory A seemingly ordinary hand-crafted and stringed guitar into which its player may channel their energy to amplify the clarity and volume of the instrument’s musical notes. This item has no significant effects of its own, but may receive Admin-Approved modifications and enchantments that grant it effects. This item has no level and, as such, no Exp cost. This item may be destroyed in combat and by effects that specifically target items, but the user may recreate it in the event of its destruction. {Ki Manifesting} None
True Nature of the Thing [1:3] Ability The user has practiced and honed their sense of life energy around them to the point that they can sense most life around them whenever they choose no matter how seemingly insignificant. Increases the user's Spirit by 35% per level whenever using Ki Sense or Ki Track for the stat check only (Does not Modify Damage). Successful Ki Sense use now allows the user to sense most living things around them and detect the subtle differences between them for identifying races. This skill does not work against All Machine characters. {Ki Sense [3:3]} None
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Post #21
Sep 26 2015, 05:10 AM
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I changed the attack to this, instead.
Descending Storm Strike [1:3] Attack The user extends one hand forward and discharges an invisible blast of concussive energy from their palm; alternatively, the user may launch the attack from a foot. Anyone struck by the blast will be knocked back a great distance and will receive the user’s Spirit*0.8 in damage. {60 Spirit} -4% PL, may be used once every other level per post.
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Post #22
Sep 28 2015, 04:12 PM
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Descending Storm Strike [1:3] Attack The user extends one hand forward and discharges an invisible blast of concussive energy from their palm; alternatively, the user may launch the attack from a foot. Anyone struck by the blast will be knocked back a great distance and will receive the user’s Spirit*0.8 in damage. {60 Spirit} -4% PL, may be used once every other level per post.
This is okay
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Post #23
Feb 5 2016, 04:31 PM
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I'm scrapping the Dark Sword in favor of something simpler and less cancerous.
Jack’s sword [1:10]
A hand-and-a-half sword completely ordinary in appearance and without decoration. Standard features include a round pommel, a synthetic grip, and a brass guard. Jack intentionally dulled its sharp edges to prevent it from ever cutting anyone after he finished creating it. Its shoddy appearance mirrors the humble nature of its master, which is ironic given the fact that the sword possesses no reflective surface.
Attacks with this sword represent Strength in damage and deal an additional 15% of the attacker's strength in damage. This sword grants +5 Strength per level, but only when attacking with it.
{Immense Physical Prowess, 90 Strength, and Ki Manifestation} None
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Feb 6 2016, 10:52 AM
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Descending Storm Strike [1:3] Attack The user extends one hand forward and discharges an invisible blast of concussive energy from their palm; alternatively, the user may launch the attack from a foot. Anyone struck by the blast will be knocked back a great distance and will receive the user’s Spirit*0.8 in damage. {60 Spirit} -4% PL, may be used once every other level per post.
Looks good on my end.
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Post #25
Feb 6 2016, 02:08 PM
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I'm scrapping the Dark Sword in favor of something simpler and less cancerous.
Jack’s sword [1:10]
A hand-and-a-half sword completely ordinary in appearance and without decoration. Standard features include a round pommel, a synthetic grip, and a brass guard. Jack intentionally dulled its sharp edges to prevent it from ever cutting anyone after he finished creating it. Its shoddy appearance mirrors the humble nature of its master, which is ironic given the fact that the sword possesses no reflective surface.
Attacks with this sword represent Strength in damage and deal an additional 15% of the attacker's Strength in damage. This sword grants +5 Strength per level, but only when attacking with it.
{Immense Physical Prowess [5:5], 90 Strength, and Ki Manifestation} None This is what I am requesting...Descending Storm Strike was already approved.
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Post #26
Feb 7 2016, 06:25 PM
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Mechanically the sword is fine, I'm still stewing on if +5 per level is too much on top of what else it has going for it. I'm rattling my brain at +3 or 3.5 per level.
Edit:maybe a cost per swing/post would make sense, as it is a ki manifestation weapon. Dunno.
Edited by Bowwy, Feb 7 2016, 06:27 PM.
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Post #27
Feb 7 2016, 06:58 PM
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Will this clear the confusion we have?
Jack’s sword [1:10] Weapon
A hand-and-a-half sword completely ordinary in appearance and without decoration. Standard features include a round pommel, a synthetic grip, and a brass guard. Jack intentionally dulled its sharp edges to prevent it from ever cutting anyone after he finished creating it. Its shoddy appearance mirrors the humble nature of its master, which is ironic given the fact that the sword possesses no reflective surface.
Attacks with this sword deal Strength*0.75 damage. This sword grants +5 Strength per level, but only when attacking with it.
{Immense Physical Prowess [5:5], 90 Strength, and Ki Manifesting} None
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Post #28
Feb 7 2016, 10:23 PM
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Jack’s sword [1:10] Weapon
A hand-and-a-half sword completely ordinary in appearance and without decoration. Standard features include a round pommel, a synthetic grip, and a brass guard. Jack intentionally dulled its sharp edges to prevent it from ever cutting anyone after he finished creating it. Its shoddy appearance mirrors the humble nature of its master, which is ironic given the fact that the sword possesses no reflective surface.
Attacks with this sword deal Strength*0.75 damage. This sword grants +5 Strength per level, but only when attacking with it.
{Immense Physical Prowess [5:5], 90 Strength, and Ki Manifesting} None
The only thing that concerns me about this weapon is the eventual truth that ATBS will come along-side it. The only other item I've approved with this big of a stat increase is
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Eyes on the Inside [10:10] Armor This simple looking pendant is actually a very powerful magical artifact. When worn, the magic in this amulet effects the thoughts of the user, enabling them to have much more magical power through magical understanding. For each level the amulet gives the user +5 wisdom for use in stat checks.
The requirements accidentally got removed after awhile (this was one Talon's nerfed items) but the crafting stuff was all there with like 100 wisdom req too. I think these two items are similar in a lot of ways, and although I think they're both incredibly powerful, a lot of items are.
I'll approve it.
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Post #29
Feb 11 2016, 10:30 AM
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I realized that Soul Crafter needs an update so it doesn't have as much math to it.
Trader's Soul Crafter [1:5] Item A gauntlet worn on the left hand that enables its creator to manipulate their energies with greater ease and efficiency. It grants the following effects. [5:5] Increases Jack's Max PL by 10%. [5:5] Restores 2 PL for every 5 PL spent. {Ki Manifestation, Be Jack Trader} -None-
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Post #30
Feb 11 2016, 05:54 PM
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Trader's Soul Crafter [1:10] Item A gauntlet worn on the left hand that enables its creator to manipulate their energies with greater ease and efficiency. It grants the following effects. [10:10] Increases Jack's Max PL by 10%. [10:10] Restores 2 PL for every 5 PL spent. {Ki Manifestation, Be Jack Trader} -None-
This is (semi) the equivalent to 40% extra current power level (8% per level as a 1:5, although this IS just for spending) And extra max PL on top. I think 10 levels is appropriate (and says fuck you to the words 'per level')
This soul crafter is lot more efficient than the old one, right? Wasn't the old one like 1 pl for every 25?
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Post #31
Feb 11 2016, 10:19 PM
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at [5:5], the old one was 5 PL restored for every 25 spent. The "Current PL" increase on the old one was supposed to give Jack more PL to spend, but that doesn't make much sense when all costs are %, right?
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Post #32
Feb 12 2016, 02:55 PM
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Here's the edit you requested.
Trader's Soul Crafter [1:10] Item A gauntlet worn on the left hand that enables its creator to manipulate their energies with greater ease and efficiency. It grants the following effects. +1% Max PL per level. [10:10] Restores 2 PL for every 5 PL spent. {Ki Manifestation, Be Jack Trader} -None-
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Post #33
Feb 12 2016, 03:07 PM
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Trader's Soul Crafter [1:10] Item A gauntlet worn on the left hand that enables its creator to manipulate their energies with greater ease and efficiency. It grants the following effects. +1% Max PL per level. [10:10] Restores 2 PL for every 5 PL spent. {Ki Manifestation, Be Jack Trader} -None-
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Post #34
Feb 13 2016, 06:32 AM
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I am updating Fan the Flame.
Fan the Flame [1:4] Ability This ability sharpens the resolve of a human the longer they remain in combat, making it even harder to bring them down. The user receives 5% reduced Physical Damage per 5% missing PL up to a maximum reduction of 10% per level. {100 Strength, Undying Will} -None-
Test the Spirit [1:4] Ability This ability sharpens the resolve of a human the longer they remain in combat, making it even harder to bring them down. The user receives 5% reduced Mental Damage per 5% missing PL up to a maximum reduction of 10% per level. {100 Spirit, Undying Will} -None-
Instead of maxing an existing ATBS to learn 1 ATBS that reduces all damage, I am planning to learn two separate ATBS, each reducing a different category of damage. I also increased the stat requirements for each so that the reduction scales in 5% increments instead of 8% increments and the levels max at 4 instead of 5. The maximum reduction remains the same 40%.
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Post #35
Feb 13 2016, 01:15 PM
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Fan the Flame [1:4] Ability This ability sharpens the resolve of a human the longer they remain in combat, making it even harder to bring them down. The user receives 5% reduced Physical Damage per 5% missing PL up to a maximum reduction of 10% per level. {100 Strength, Undying Will} -None-
Test the Spirit [1:4] Ability This ability sharpens the resolve of a human the longer they remain in combat, making it even harder to bring them down. The user receives 5% reduced Mental Damage per 5% missing PL up to a maximum reduction of 10% per level. {100 Spirit, Undying Will} -None-
i believe I can approve these.
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Post #36
Feb 13 2016, 01:39 PM
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Thanks and here's a simplified version of Wall.
Against the Wall [1:2] Technique Jack manifests a wall of energy at a target location. Allows the use of 1 of the following Effects: Blocks the damage of one Physical attack. Intercepts a target to deal Spirit in damage. {Ki Manifesting, Be Jack} -10% PL, once per level.
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Post #37
Feb 13 2016, 02:00 PM
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Against the Wall [1:2] Technique Jack manifests a wall of energy at a target location for defensive or offensive use. Allows the use of 1 of the following Effects: Blocks the damage of one Physical attack. Intercepts a target to deal Spirit in damage. {Ki Manifesting, Be Jack} -10% PL, once per level.
bah, give me time to think about this one
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Post #38
Feb 13 2016, 02:34 PM
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That's fine. I'm in no rush to learn this stuff. I do have another, but this is mostly for plot purposes.
Demonic Wrath [1:5] Item-Curse Accepting half of Astraea’s wrath has already proven detrimental to Jack’s sanity and health. This curse forces Jack to sense Astraea’s physical and emotional anguish (no matter how small or great) and alerts him to her location even if he cannot reach her. It has also implanted a dependency within Jack to keep the sword with him at all times in case he might need it to locate and rescue Astraea.
Jack gains the following effects whenever he wields his sword.
+5% Max PL per level Reduces Spirit by 10
{Astraea's Approval, Jack’s sword [10:10], Rename the item type of Jack's sword to "cursed weapon"} -None-
Considering the sword already grants him a massive Strength boost for his attacks, I figure a Max PL boost would be more fair than adding another Strength increase to the curse.
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Feb 14 2016, 12:13 AM
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Demonic Wrath [1:5] Item-Curse Accepting half of Astraea’s wrath has already proven detrimental to Jack’s sanity and health. This curse forces Jack to sense Astraea’s physical and emotional anguish (no matter how small or great) and alerts him to her location even if he cannot reach her. It has also implanted a dependency within Jack to keep the sword with him at all times in case he might need it to locate and rescue Astraea.
Jack gains the following effects whenever he wields his sword.
+5% Max PL per level Reduces Spirit by 10
{Astraea's Approval, Jack’s sword [10:10], Rename the item type of Jack's sword to "cursed weapon"} -None-
This is alright!
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Post #40
Feb 14 2016, 10:58 AM
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Would this be an acceptable edit for AtW?
Against the Wall [2:2] Technique Jack manifests a wall of energy at a target location that allows the use of 1 of the following effects before it shatters: Any Level-Blocks one Physical attack. [2:2]-Intercepts an enemy to deal Spirit in damage. {Ki Manifesting, 100 Spirit, Be Jack} -10% PL, Once per level per thread.
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