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Once Stung, Twice as Deadly
Topic Started: Aug 27 2006, 06:40 PM (174 Views)
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Sorry for the lateness....Brian's rp should be up later this evening. Any comments on this would be appreciated as I had a hard time writing it :) Thanks to Chrissy and Jonathan for their help on it.

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Ashlee
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It's nice of you to Thank Chrissy for the help, especially since it's kind of obvious that she didn't write all of that. haha
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I have this horrible habit of adding to people's dialogue to make conversation flow more natrally. She actually wrote the whole scene with me (minus the action) and I added parts to Montanna's speech where it felt appropriate. We wrote it in a rush so I thought some things that should have been said were missed out or brushed over too quickly :):)

You fail to answer though...did you like it? What's good, what's bad? What need's changing for next time? B)
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She still wrote most of it though, I can sense Christina's flair in the majority of the parts... and I'm talking "15 pieces of flair" flair, not "stupid David" flair... :P
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You sense that David Flair is in Christina? What?? :blink: ;)

He'd be lucky to have you darling :) In all seriousness, I read over it again and I actually only added a couple of lines here and there, mostly in places where topics seemed to shift too randomly. Christina did an awesome job on this. Simply awesome. I also sent her the rp before it was posted so she could change whatever she wanted. We're tight like that, baby B)
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