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Big Show Respect Rap; Warfare Rp4
Topic Started: Jul 18 2009, 11:17 PM (138 Views)
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The scene starts in by Big Show's locker as if he is already getting ready for the fight against John Cena.Big Show sees the camera and speaks.

Big Show: I liked that rap but im still going to make you tap.What are you going to do now because I think your going to bow.Cena you remind me of a thug because you have your face on my mug.Word life it sounds like you cant afford a Wife.Now Cena your going to be beat so you mine aswell take a seat.I liked 12 rounds but it reminded me of my grey hounds because when I saw your wife's face it made me take your place. Cena lets have good fight or you might just loose all your might. Now that is all I have to say so you mine aswell go and play. Word. Good Luck Cena !

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Just... stop. Just... no.
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Your roleplays remind me of a dog's duvet days. Though they do make me laugh, like a purple giraffe.
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Im doing my best.I just want to impress you guys.
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Well, like I said in the PM. These are not rps, they're just a bunch of disjointed segments that don't result in... well anything really. They tell no story and I learn nothing about Big Show having read them.
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ok ill make a new one about me.
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Where is a Florida Championship Wrestling when you need it?
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I'm not the least bit interested in you. If you wrote (not made) an RP about the Big Show and it was coherent and told a story then it might be worth reading. See the EBWF Info section for a really great article on types of rps and how to write them.

PRO TIP {and I do mean pro, since I've been around for 9 years which is basically 100 in efed years} - Your RP should take more than ten minutes to write. More than 30 really.
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Hey man, from new guy to new guy... Try putting all those mini roleplays together, be creative and have fun! Big Show is kinda advanced to roleplay, you should go for someone easier to portrait. Also it is not that you have to portrait them as they are in WWE... you can show readers a whole new side of the character you chose!
Oh and be overly descriptive.

Cheers
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Really dude. I'm no Ash, Shev, or Ben or even some others but even I'm saying you're wasting your time.
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Thanks for being nice Dohko! I've kind of had my limit the last few days! I love the fact that you're from Columbia cause the English words you mess up make me smile. Portrait works in that paragraph even though you meant portray. Made me smile.
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:D thanks!
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Nah, really dude. The competition here is tough. I would suggest starting off somewhere smaller getting more experience then maybe coming back when your a little more experienced and a lot less green.
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