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| Deleted User | Jul 19 2009, 12:08 AM Post #1 |
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Scene lights up with Big Show bench pressing nearly 260 pounds.Big show is very tired and releases the press and puts it back into his place .Then sits down holding his back"Oooh....AAAhhh"Big Show says as he has suddent back spasms.He goes back and lifting the press over his head........ Posted Image Wait it is Kurt Angle.As the back spasms were gone he lifted Kurt Angle as if he was a doll.Big Show counting his last reps...."48,49,50".He puts Kurt Angle back on the ground.Big Show tells Kurt Angle that he is good to go and thanks him. Now he goes on to his next task........ He blindfolded well punching punching bags.He apparently has to find the one that has Cena on it.Big Show waits for nearly 20 minutes before he finds it.Then the last and final task...... Car pulling practice.He takes car by car getting bigger and bigger by the minutes.He ends with a Ford Tundra he barely is able to pull it but he does and one more foot.Big show does it and everyone is amazed by strength of Big Show. Scene fades with Big Show with one hand in air. |
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| Deleted User | Jul 19 2009, 12:29 AM Post #2 |
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*Scratches head* Wait! What!? [Enters Talia Madison mode] O.M.G. W.T.F. |
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| Ben M | Jul 19 2009, 12:33 AM Post #3 |
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Hypocrites and Sycophants!
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If you lost the bits about Kurt Angle and the John Cena punchbag, this would be a good start to an RP. As Ashlee said in the other thread, your RPs should be longer. Okay, so he's working out. Why? What are his thoughts/feelings? He's pretty strong, is he just making sure that he keeps that strength at its maximum? Is he addicted to working out? Is he scared that his match might not be as easy as he makes it out to be in front of the EBWF characters. To paraphrase from Ashlee again, your RPs should be telling a story. At the moment, yours are not. Improve that aspect of your RPs, and they'll improve significantly. |
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