Welcome Guest [Log In] [Register]
Welcome to the EBWF.

Board access is by Moderator Validation Only! Please fill out a join form to Join the EBWF Forum!


Join our community!


If you're already a member please log in to your account to access all of our features:

Username:   Password:
Add Reply
A new Era; PPV promo & Intro
Topic Started: Jul 20 2010, 12:48 PM (194 Views)
Deleted User
Deleted User

(OCC Okay l decided l had better hit while the iron is hot and do a roleplay, it is short but it was hard being the new kid, and not knowing anybody. I have not roleplayed in 6 years so l am rusty, hope it is okay and it passes the okay test. Good luck Candice Michelle and Portia Perez)



S.C.E.N.E. 1
The scene opened has warfare came to a close, but good old Coachman was still hanging around for afew last minute interviews.
Has the Coach turned to give up a 4x4 pulled up and the drivers door flew open

"The interviewer" Coachman: Wow hang on guys don't stop the camera we may have a interview

Coach walked upto the drivers door

"The interviewer" Coachman: Hey...

But before the Coach could carry on a female figure stepped out. The figure was of a light tanned colour more italian or some kind of exotic nature. Her hair was black and very straight and her figure was off small but rather athletic built

"The interviewer" Coachman: Erm sorry Miss l thought you were one of the EBWF roster

The female placed her hand up to stop the coach from speaking

"The English Beauty" Layla: Excuse me Mr Coachman but you will find l am the newset additon to the EBWF diva roaster.

The Coach looked has female pulled out a bag and placed it over her shoulder

"The interviewer" Coachman: Ohh your the new Diva

"The English Beauty" Layla: That is right, Layla... The English Beauty the one that will spice up the EBWF, the one that will bring a whole new meaning of talant.

"The interviewer" Coachman: I see, so what has a talanted diva like yourself have to offer EBWF?

"The English Beauty" Layla: Please... don't mock me, the way l see it EBWF needs that something special to pull in fans, don't get me wrong the divas here are all good in their own little ways but if your going to take EBWF to a new hight then you need that spark, that bolt of lighting that will make people stand up and take a look, and l just don't think the divas here have what it takes.

"The interviewer" Coachman: But how would you know that? You have just arrived

Layla laughed

"The English Beauty" Layla: Ohh please give me credit, do you think l would just sign a contract and say yes yes yes to the first company that offered me something

Layla placed her hand on her hip and took a step back

"The English Beauty" Layla: I have been following EBWF for a month, watched the competition fall and rise, watched Trish and Daffney win belts, watched Taylor pertent she is a super hero, and l even watch Von Tosh win her very first match. But that dose not mean nothing, I am here to take on the best, l am here to win gold and if that means l have to be a bitch and take on little Playboy divas, super girls, blond bimbos and whoever else that is in the diva's locker room then so be it.
Now if you excuse me l have a ring slot l wish to use

Layla turns and walks off leaveing Jonathan Coachman looking on


S.C.E.N.E. 2

Nasty Girl by Rhianna hits the speaks has the fans hit to the floor

"The King" Jerry Lawler: Hey JR what is this? Don't know the entrance theme

The titan tron hits a new entrance movie

"The King" Jerry Lawler: We got new puppies

The King starts to jump in his seat as Layla makes her way onto the ramp

"Good Old" Jim Ross: Well we have a mixed reaction has the newest signing to EBWF

"The King" Jerry Lawler: But we have puppies JR, new ones

"Good Old" Jim Ross: I am hearing reports Coachman had a few words with the new diva just before
she came out here, and well l will be intrested what this new diva has to offer EBWF

Layla enters the ring and strikes a pose, again the crowed is in mixed reaction has she takes the mic

"The English Beauty" Layla: Please, you don't even know me and already l am judged, you know what l don't care, l don't care if you, you or even you dislikes me.
The EBWF wanted a fresh new talant to spice up the old diva's locker room and who better to be put to the hart-ful challenege is yours truley.

Layla stops for a second before carrying on

"The English Beauty" Layla: Lets look at the figuers

Layla places her finger on her head

"The English Beauty" Layla: We have Playboy girls, we have blond girls, red head girls, girls from third genetaion families oh and not forgetting goth girls. What a bunch of mix and matched divas we have in EBWF.
So no wonder the managment needed some talant on the roster.

Layla smirked

"The English Beauty" Layla: So now this Sunday "The English Beauty" has a match. Candice Michelle Vs. Portia yeah can't remeber her second name and of course me.
Now l bet your all thinking to yourself blah blah blah she is going to tell us how she will whip their butts, pull their hair, dig her nails into their eyes and so on.

Layla shock her head

"The English Beauty" Layla: Naa, l don't need hair pulling, nail digging and anything these divas do to win because their is only one diva that will come out of that match a true champion and that is me, I have been train by the best and l want to be the best in the company, but like my dear old mum told me you have to take the useless with the best and then you will sucessed and get what you want.
So this PPV will not only be my first match but it will show the diva roster that l play hard and get what l want.

Layla dropped the mic and posed in the ring as most of the EBWF fans gave their opion on Layla's ring promo has the camera faded out.

Quote Post Goto Top
 
Chloe
Member Avatar
Main Eventer
[ *  *  *  * ]
IIIII like it. It's a very solid first promo and it's always good to have more girl wrestlers (FOR ME TO DESTROOOOOYYYYY). I do think some of the spelling errors might hold you back a little but I'm just trying to be helpful and not nitpicky. =)

P.S. I'm going to try and give everyone that posts a promo this week feedback because we definitely do not have enough of it lately. =O
Offline Quote Post Goto Top
 
Ashlee
Member Avatar
Live with the Name
[ *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  * ]
I agree with you Chloe. Thanks for being proactive and helping out.

This is a good, solid first promo Steph. I agree with Chloe that you may want to write in Google Docs or a word editing program first so you can use spell checker. When grammar is nice, and spelling is correct, it makes reading a lot easier for me.

Overall though, NICE work! :)
Offline Quote Post Goto Top
 
Deleted User
Deleted User

Aww thank you so much, for the great comments and l totally agree with you on the spelling and grammar, l will get something sorted for the next roleplay.
Your words will help me get better and better thank you Ashlee and Chole your ace both of you.
Ohh btw Chole l oved your roleplay it was brilliant l am loving yout Taylor she is awsome l will look forward in reading the other promos

Good luck Chole and Candice Michelle's handler May the best diva win
Quote Post Goto Top
 
1 user reading this topic (1 Guest and 0 Anonymous)
« Previous Topic · Roleplaying Board · Next Topic »
Add Reply

Kylirium created by Sarah & Delirium of G-Force