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Starting January 18, 2010 we will be resuming our weekly discussions on various characters, couples, and plot points for the show Grey's Anatomy. If you are interested in seeing a similar discussion for another show let Danielle know. Be sure to check out some of the new fanfictions that been posted and show the writers your support!

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First I have to say don't say your fic is boring because it lacks action and dialogue. I think some of the best fics lack both of them. I really enjoy getting inside a characters head and seeing what they are thinking and feeling, those kinds of fics can be some of the most interesting to read.

I am very impressed with how well you got inside Sawyers head, (it was his head right.) Especially considering English is your second language, even with the few errors I was able to read past them and still feel what he was thinking, what you were trying to convey. I couldn't imagine trying to do that in a second language and you say your language has improved a lot since you wrote this so I think that a someone to beta your stories they could be great. You seem to have all the building blocks there. I enjoyed it good job. :)
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