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Chance; A Lost one shot
Topic Started: Jun 25 2009, 01:10 AM (378 Views)
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First I have to say don't say your fic is boring because it lacks action and dialogue. I think some of the best fics lack both of them. I really enjoy getting inside a characters head and seeing what they are thinking and feeling, those kinds of fics can be some of the most interesting to read.

I am very impressed with how well you got inside Sawyers head, (it was his head right.) Especially considering English is your second language, even with the few errors I was able to read past them and still feel what he was thinking, what you were trying to convey. I couldn't imagine trying to do that in a second language and you say your language has improved a lot since you wrote this so I think that a someone to beta your stories they could be great. You seem to have all the building blocks there. I enjoyed it good job. :)
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