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22 Apr 2009, 05:41 AM |
What is green...scaly...breathes flame...and has spikes?
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You had a bunch of misakes, one you vary your writing structure a lot. And that is one of the most imprtant principles the syle of which you write it. I would stay with the couplets instead of trying to do quartets which are much harder and all your lines don' rhyme. In poetry it doesn't have to rhyme line to line either. It just has to have a good flow. If you want I can edit it in microsoft word then send you the file. |
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