| Viewing Single Post From: Pandemic | |
|---|---|
| ARAZEC | 13 May 2009, 03:34 AM |
This Person Has No Life
  ![]](http://209.85.117.197/static/1/pip_r.png)
|
well the only thing i would change would be the language used to describe what actually happened. if the head guy is addressing the worlds best scientistics he wouldnt speak like that saying obvious procedural things in basic language when addressing his coleages (sry 4 bad spelling) you could say the same things as more of the main character thinking them so that the reader can follow the scientific jargon- i will pm you some plots |
|
OTTOR never BE SORRY | |
 |
|
| Pandemic · General Gallery | |
4:46 PM Nov 25
