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The Contest; A Short Story
Topic Started: 10 Jul 2008, 02:31 PM (571 Views)
Giul	10 Jul 2008, 02:31 PM Post #1
Pilot/Fighter Posts: 2,084 Group: Moderator Member #28 Joined: 15 February 2008 Guild: Open Condition: Content Feeling: Spinny Status: Trying to Manage Time.	Once day, A giant alien space ship came to earth with a message. After decoding was complete it said: "We have searched the galaxies for worthy people to share THE MEANING OF LIFE with. We have selected your planet next. Send all that can compete to our spaceship tomorrow at 12 a.m.!" The message was displayed on the 11:00 news. The next day everyone raced to the spaceship to compete so that they could know THE MEANING OF LIFE. The aliens showed up at noon and used a translating device so that all could be heard quickly. "Inside our spaceship is a list of trials and challenges involving many things that normal life forms have been unable to acomplish. You have 12 hours to complete them and get to the center where the winners will be told THE MEANING OF LIFE" After 11 and a half hours, only 2 people remained and reached the center. The aliens stood before a door and said: "Inside this room is a screen. Touch it to know THE MEANING OF LIFE." The two went inside and touched the screen. Then they heard the phrases that they would remember for the rest of their lives. "Never gonna give you up, never gonna let you down, never gonna run around and desert you"
	"This is our world. Look after it. We can make a difference." -Spot the Difference final stage Giul


Petal	14 Jul 2008, 06:00 AM Post #2
Horned Rogue Posts: 125 Group: Members Member #54 Joined: 1 July 2008	hey slicing student read this not long after you posted it but with big brother watching didnt want to risk a reply there is one thing i wanted to say and its- Spoiler: click to toggle now you have to reply to the singing bee in gmes forum because there are only a selected few in the world who would admit to knowing the lyrics to that one



Cameron	14 Jul 2008, 06:06 PM Post #3
Administratinator Posts: 1,832 Group: Admin Member #1 Joined: 20 December 2007	Nice. Maybe I should have had my story end with a Rickrolling. Oh well.
	Note that Cameron is not Patrick and does not run Godlimations.


Giul	25 Jul 2008, 06:05 PM Post #4
Pilot/Fighter Posts: 2,084 Group: Moderator Member #28 Joined: 15 February 2008 Guild: Open Condition: Content Feeling: Spinny Status: Trying to Manage Time.	What do you think the focus of my next short story Should Be on?
	"This is our world. Look after it. We can make a difference." -Spot the Difference final stage Giul


Cameron	25 Jul 2008, 06:08 PM Post #5
Administratinator Posts: 1,832 Group: Admin Member #1 Joined: 20 December 2007	Ninjas.
	Note that Cameron is not Patrick and does not run Godlimations.


Giul	25 Jul 2008, 06:14 PM Post #6
Pilot/Fighter Posts: 2,084 Group: Moderator Member #28 Joined: 15 February 2008 Guild: Open Condition: Content Feeling: Spinny Status: Trying to Manage Time.	Thank you for your feedback. The next story will not end in a rick roll
	"This is our world. Look after it. We can make a difference." -Spot the Difference final stage Giul


ARAZEC	25 Jul 2008, 07:12 PM Post #7
Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds Posts: 6,145 Group: Veterans Member #48 Joined: 18 June 2008 Guild: Open Condition: Heavily Damaged Feeling: RTC Status: Definitely not good at multitasking.	funny if i may offer a suggestion.... i think your next storey should be a true storey about something supernatural you have witnessed nahh ninjas nahh maybe a fictional storey about something supernatural and scarey that could be a true storey......
	*Whenever God Closes One Door He Always Opens Another, Even Though Sometimes It's Hell in the Hallway* Support Chaplains concolor ..my fav son of a monkey


Blaze	25 Jul 2008, 09:07 PM Post #8
You Will Have A Nice Day Posts: 2,064 Group: Admin Member #8 Joined: 6 January 2008 Guild: Guild of Mages Condition: Spotted Feeling: Oh look, a fire! Status: Burning something or another	Hey, it could even be called "The Messengers" [/SARCASM] Seriously, I would do something serious. Seriously. We have to counteract all of Drunken's comedic stories with some horror or something.
	"Even when our eyes are closed, there's a whole world out there that lives outside ourselves and our dreams."


ARAZEC	3 Aug 2008, 09:54 AM Post #9
Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds Posts: 6,145 Group: Veterans Member #48 Joined: 18 June 2008 Guild: Open Condition: Heavily Damaged Feeling: RTC Status: Definitely not good at multitasking.	i think a storey about food would be nice-a true storey
	*Whenever God Closes One Door He Always Opens Another, Even Though Sometimes It's Hell in the Hallway* Support Chaplains concolor ..my fav son of a monkey


Godzilla	19 Aug 2008, 09:37 PM Post #10
What is green...scaly...breathes flame...and has spikes? Posts: 1,616 Group: Moderator Member #30 Joined: 17 February 2008	I think a story about giant lizards terrorizing very-short civillians in a large municipal area with tall buildings
	http://godzilla725.deviantart.com/ "Rest, prepare, cry in the corner...whatever you do before a mission, only do it quietly." ~ Malik (Assassin's Creed) "I am not a vegetarian because I love animals; I am a vegetarian because I hate plants." ~ A. Whitney Brown When cryptography is outlawed, bayl bhgynjf jvyy unir cevinpl.


Curley Q	20 Aug 2008, 08:57 AM Post #11
Death Posts: 1,158 Group: Veterans Member #3 Joined: 26 December 2007	I've been Rickrolled! Again!
	My Command is this:Love each other as I have loved you. Greater love has no one than this, that he should lay down his life for his friends. -John 15:12-13 That's a mighty wicked place. Tilt-a-whirl's okay, but the rest is pure wicked. Hell have no fury like the vast robot armies of a woman scorned Now boarding stand by passengers I'm engaged now


Santa Fe	22 Aug 2008, 02:31 PM Post #12
Zanica Knight Posts: 1,302 Group: Veterans Member #81 Joined: 11 August 2008 Guild: Legion of Warriors Condition: Spotted Feeling: Ambivalent Status: Floating in Aethyr	I can think of a story I made it when I was 11. It's called Graveyard Messiah. A popular 7th grader named Joseph lives a regular life at Blacklace Middle School with his girlfriend Marcy and his friend Kevin and one mean bully named Duncan. One day he decides to pray on his father's grave and give flowers, but suddenly he notices his father's grave was dug up!(oh and the story doesn't go exactly how it was because I can't find the paper and i'm crying right now seriously I am).He looked up and saw a tall figure shadowing him. In a voice so cold and retched he announced,"Hahaha! So you are the son of the father that created your town!"."Who are you and what have you done with my father!",Joseph wanted to know. I have taken him so I can blast him into oblivion!!"Why?",Joseph asked. He said nothing but the hallowed words"know me as GALLION" ,he echoed off as he dissapeared into the shadows.(this story is actually a long story so I'll try to make it short, oh and i'm still crying) He gathered up 3 friends: Marcy his girlfriend, Kevin his soulman, and unexpectedly Duncan! Together they wereee THE GRAVEYARD FORCE FOUR!: (prononced Zar Gothu) They set off on they're journey: They were to find the 3 orbs of Xar Gothua Combine they're energy with Joseph so he can defeat Gallion and his legion of zombies and then put the 3 orbs:Water, Fire, and Wind, Zeus, Posiedon, and Hades(water counts as earth too) on the Helix tripix to covert to the sheild generators with enough dark matter to bring Joseph's dad alive(this is nothing relating to christ) and well. with a 12 year-old prodigy mastering the art of tae kwon do, kung fu, karate, and staff mastery all in 6 years is impressive. A girl who likes to live life to the fullest and an expert gymnast with nothing standing in her way to beat the national 2050 Olympics, she's a girl you'd prefer any day. A guy who is one with technical,biological, and mechanical things, this guy can sure be there when you need him. He understands everything and everyone. Last...and maybe least Duncan a grade-A top notch bully. this is the kind of guy you wouldn't like if he gets angry...unless he's on your side. Only Joseph makes it but he is captured by none other than Gallion's own son! But wait!Now who will defeat gallion! wait who's that? Could it be!!! Joseph's older brother! Alluicious! The number one person in the world!!!Knowing every martial art known to man and being an 11th degree black belt at each of them the person who was always number one at everything!! He eventually freed his brother and the came across gallion(gallion had 2 of the orbs and Joseph had only one but the most sacred one of all, water).His brother took out his cross(Jesus christ cross)blade out, it was bigger than his brother's. Gallion took out The Sacred Sword Of The Black Realm Sword! They clashed. Gallion's cape was a bit torn off and with one dealt to his head his mask came off revealing his white eye and his redish black eye! Alluicious looked into his red-black eye and saw Despair Torment snd Suffering... he froze and fell to the floor. It was up to Joseph now to beat Gallion. He fought him and finally after many blows were dealt he struck gallion in the heart. All of those sights of Pain, Despair, Torment, and Suffering all flashed before his eye and then he fell. He was defeated, Joseph's father was reborn, and his friends including Duncan were in the imfirmory but would make a full recovery in a week. As for Alluicious....., he went to his instructor the one person that new everything he knew and much more. He went there to train harder and never let that tragedy happen again. And as for Joseph?.....Well lets just say I lived my life happily ever after. Edited by Santa Fe, 22 Aug 2008, 02:39 PM.
	"So maybe we could see each other one day, like by travel,"the girl said. "Well I know my mom won't let me,you shouldn't have to,"I said "Don't worry I can do it,"she replied "Are you sure, cause if your not sure, then I'm not sure, and if I'm not sure that means we're both not sure, and if were both not sure then I don't know how this is going to work,"I said. "Don't worry sweet, I'm sure,"she replied "Your sour?! Now I really don't know if this will work out,"said Joseph.


Godzilla	10 Mar 2009, 02:50 PM Post #13
What is green...scaly...breathes flame...and has spikes? Posts: 1,616 Group: Moderator Member #30 Joined: 17 February 2008	That was weird...
	http://godzilla725.deviantart.com/ "Rest, prepare, cry in the corner...whatever you do before a mission, only do it quietly." ~ Malik (Assassin's Creed) "I am not a vegetarian because I love animals; I am a vegetarian because I hate plants." ~ A. Whitney Brown When cryptography is outlawed, bayl bhgynjf jvyy unir cevinpl.


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