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Poems; Anything That Rhymes
Topic Started: 9 Mar 2009, 06:41 PM (397 Views)
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This little strand of thread is about poems. Show off poems you've made maybe when you were younger, create your own, or just admire others.

Here's a list of things you can BUT are not required to make:

Haiku , Diamante

Sonnet , Odes

Quatrain , Didactic

Couplet , Triolet

Etheree , Cinquain

Rondelet

Have fun kids :thumbs: .


Edited by Santa Fe, 9 Mar 2009, 06:42 PM.
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Written with a pen.
Sealed with a kiss.
If you are my friend,
please answer this.

Are we friends or are we not?
you told me once but I forgot
so tell me now and tell me true
so I can say I'm here for you.

of all the friends I've ever met
you're the one I won't forget
and if I die before you do
I go to heaven and wait for you.
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Some More Types of Poetry:
Ballad
Fixed
Haiku & Eastern
Limerick
Open
Sestina
Song
Sonnet
Spoken Word
Villanelle
Surrealism
Typographical
Rhyming Verse
Alexandrine
Epic
Blank Verse
Canzone
Elegy
Epigram
Epithalamium (or Epithalamion)
Free Verse
Lyric
Ode
Pastoral
Tanka
Terza Rima




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I had to make a poetry book, with several different forms of poetry two years ago. They may still be somewhere on my computer..
Here goes validation

In the lands of fire.
In the mines of gold.
There breathes a person,
neither young, nor old,
He spends his days thinking,
contemplating a song
all day he sits away,
braiding his long white beard...

Not quite sure where that came from...
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its Santa Claus
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I have to make a poetry book to, except I'm currently doing one in my english class. We've finished haiku's, didactics, and diamante's.



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No... it isn't Santa Claus... It i think has more to do with Olewyn the bard. With a museo... in Fireroot. not sure though..
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Here is a poem I made

I wish i could soar through the sky but I have no wings to fly, I wish I could reach your embrace my love, My ever grace.
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a jelly fish lay on the beACH above the waters reach
even on the highest tide so it shriveled up and died.

does anyone know What type of poetry that is?

someone told me this one.....

A limerick fan from Australia

regarded his work as a failure

his verses were fine

untill the fourth line

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Edited by ARAZEC, 14 Mar 2009, 08:27 PM.
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I think a limerick has all lines rhyme, it's six/five lines and the fourth is shorter, syllable wise then the rest. I think.
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Limerick:

There once was an old man from Wheeling
Who had a peculiar feeling
Said the sign on the door
Please don't spit on the floor
He jumped up and spat on the ceiling


the first, second and last sentence must rhyme.
and the 3rd & 4th sentence must rhyme.
the first sentence mostly ends with a Location.
Edited by dutchgirl, 18 Mar 2009, 03:02 AM.
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well i am re-posting this i wrote it while the bush fires were burning in my country.....


The Last Ember


why where you used to run and laugh
cant i hear you anymore?

they tell me one does not feel the burning alive
its because the brain gives mercy to the body

i feel the peeling of your skin
its my reality everyday

should i look for you too? and join them
but i know you will never be found

cremated againest your will
your dust brings no peace for the living

was i spared the stench of burning finger nails
to live with my ghost called regret?

should the ground bring forth green again and kookaburras laugh where they perished?
in your rightfull place, why were we robbed by calamity?

i will wander for a time and then settle only to wander again
but the circles i walk are not on a path upward

can our home really be nothing?
my throat cracks on the inside of me
i am torn to the core
i am an open wound

a thin veil of soot forever blinding could this really be all that remains?
if i lay down here too can the earth take me back?

would it be so cruel to spit me out ?
yes
i must gnash teeth untill i find courage that never comes

alluding me as i search through pain for exsistence
someone touches my arm and i turn

it is slow but i see a twinkle in their eye it comes from the corner
was that real or imagined? i search again eyes widened darting

i see the twinkle and its shining at me
was it God? was God talking to me?

this person this stranger that longs to comfort me
is like a mirror

i can receive their love but am void of any returning
falling into their shoulder this stranger lets me cry

tears are long ago dried up but i cry silently for a long time
no words are spoken or story shared

the stranger receives my greif and returns only love
their silence my permission allowing for the exchange

the trading of sorrows and the return of love.
my yoke is lightened
my greif is shared and this stranger remains knowingly
they too know loss and they too know pain

this is all that i know of the stranger
this and the twinkling of an eye.


Written Feb 2009 by ARAZEC
In Memory Of The Volunteers Victorian Fires



Edited by ARAZEC, 23 Mar 2009, 06:49 AM.
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awesome
did you see it happening? the fire I mean.
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I only saw the fire on the tele
when i write its mostly i dont think i just feel and start






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:( i know,i know a double post but its the most appropriate topic....

so i wanted to post my own Health Care Poem

Health Care

Lined up like cattle in the waiting room
Emergency Section at night time noon

faces wear anguish,faces wear doom
faces wear worry....will the doctor come soon?

In walks some Junkie
trying to be composed
itching furiously and scratching their nose

another nose bleeds from another fight night
revellers huddling their friend is he alright?

a little baby stares
at the stark flurecent light
oblivious and innocent parents surveying the sight

the triage nurse, tough as nails
sorts the auditions
people fumble for id hugging the rails

she is a seasoned professional
sorting the sick
one waiting for her passes out
hey that does the trick !

a feeling of hopelessness
as the hours drag on
here come the sirens !!!
oh no now the wait will be long.

in a very small corner
theres some one who does not care
waiting very patiently just hanging in there

too weak to protest
to sick to get up
too much in pain
as the nurse has a coffee ,the second cup....

something feels cold
and trickles to the floor
as a man stands up screaming doctors we need more

as the waiting room erupts
complaints all around
everyones standing
except this one person stuck to the ground

now the blood flows freely
and begins to pool

the stomach ache,was not that
it was an unborn child-whose mother was gratefull just to be inside......

as it pushes past 1 double doors swing open
a buzzer sounds,everyones hoping....

Dr Ratatatameroutini calls out the number
looking around,demanding- wake up from your slumber!

he notices the girl
who was breifly a mother



*someone edit the mistakes please !!!






Edited by ARAZEC, 17 Apr 2009, 04:03 PM.
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