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Poems; Anything That Rhymes
Topic Started: 9 Mar 2009, 06:41 PM (398 Views)
Godzilla	22 Apr 2009, 05:41 AM Post #16
What is green...scaly...breathes flame...and has spikes? Posts: 1,503 Group: Moderator Member #30 Joined: 17 February 2008	You had a bunch of misakes, one you vary your writing structure a lot. And that is one of the most imprtant principles the syle of which you write it. I would stay with the couplets instead of trying to do quartets which are much harder and all your lines don' rhyme. In poetry it doesn't have to rhyme line to line either. It just has to have a good flow. If you want I can edit it in microsoft word then send you the file.
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Luemas	23 Apr 2009, 04:15 PM Post #17
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ARAZEC	25 Apr 2009, 07:08 AM Post #18
This Person Has No Life Posts: 4,006 Group: Members Member #48 Joined: 18 June 2008	yeah i would like it edited -even post it back on this thread -like an " improved "version of how itv shoulda been i dont structure or think any poem through i just get an idea and enjoy writing it
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Luemas	25 Apr 2009, 12:38 PM Post #19
All ur Walrus R belong to Me Posts: 4,019 Group: Members Member #189 Joined: 14 January 2009	Whats Anzac day? And I know what you're saying mate, which is why I hate poems that have to rhyme...
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ARAZEC	26 Apr 2009, 06:38 AM Post #20
This Person Has No Life Posts: 4,006 Group: Members Member #48 Joined: 18 June 2008	hey google ANZAC day......its interesting for most ppl to find out that Australians & New Zealanders fought in the war. its a day to honour and remember our diggers
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Luemas	2 May 2009, 12:49 PM Post #21
All ur Walrus R belong to Me Posts: 4,019 Group: Members Member #189 Joined: 14 January 2009	Oh, Now I see why its such a big deal. I never knew that they fought in WWI, or for that matter, many other wars... I guess we've rarely even got into that era in my textbooks because my school is better then others, but they make the textbooks too long I guess..
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Santa Fe	2 Jun 2009, 11:13 PM Post #22
Alcove Puppetmaster Posts: 898 Group: Veterans Member #81 Joined: 11 August 2008	THE BLUE JAY AND THE BEAST As the day blackens into night and the offspring of a blue jay go to rest a crimson beam shines ever so bright in the middle of the blue jay's nest. A burst of hot plasma erupts from the light blasting the children into ash the mother awakens with ought quite a fright and the two beings clash. the red beam transformed into a rifle and the blue jay cringed with utter fear but the weapon had not caused even a trifle for the blue jay rose up and gave the rifle a leer. They fought and they rumbled but none was a match for the other they trampled and tumbled but arose without a bother. After countless hours the final blow was struck the rifle had been slain and fell to the floor the blue jay had won with ought utter luck and the ground was littered with blood and gore. The bird had flown to her nest, distraught by the rifle's slaughter then more rifle's came and eventually caught her the blue jay has lived in the nest to this very day and that ends the tale of this tenacious blue jay. Edited by Santa Fe, 2 Jun 2009, 11:15 PM.
	Namuh dlrow ruoy ot em ekat won. Taht naht elpmis erom teg ton seod ti. Em deen uoy dna uoy deen i...


Luemas	4 Jun 2009, 12:19 PM Post #23
All ur Walrus R belong to Me Posts: 4,019 Group: Members Member #189 Joined: 14 January 2009	Um Besides for the lack of Physics which makes everything good. 6/5
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ARAZEC	5 Jun 2009, 06:42 PM Post #24
This Person Has No Life Posts: 4,006 Group: Members Member #48 Joined: 18 June 2008	thats good ! 8/10
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Santa Fe	10 Jun 2009, 10:29 PM Post #25
Alcove Puppetmaster Posts: 898 Group: Veterans Member #81 Joined: 11 August 2008	The way she still lives in the nest is a secret. The point is to lack physics though .
	Namuh dlrow ruoy ot em ekat won. Taht naht elpmis erom teg ton seod ti. Em deen uoy dna uoy deen i...


ARAZEC	21 Jun 2009, 07:42 AM Post #26
This Person Has No Life Posts: 4,006 Group: Members Member #48 Joined: 18 June 2008	Waltzing Matilda, waltzing Matilda, Who'll come a waltzing Matilda with me, And he sang as he watched and waited till his billy boiled, Who'll come a waltzing Matilda with me. Down came a jumbuck to drink at the billabong, Up jumped the swagman and grabbed him with glee, And he sang as he shoved that jumbuck in his tucker-bag, You'll come a waltzing Matilda with me. Waltzing Matilda, waltzing Matilda, You'll come a waltzing Matilda with me, And he sang as he shoved that jumbuck in his tucker-bag, You'll come a waltzing Matilda with me. Waltzing Matilda, waltzing Matilda, You'll come a waltzing Matilda with me, And he sang as he shoved that jumbuck in his tucker-bag, You'll come a waltzing Matilda with me. Up rode a squatter mounted on his thoroughbred, Down came the troopers one, two, three, "Who's that jolly jumbuck you've got in your tucker-bag," You'll come a waltzing Matilda with me. Waltzing Matilda, waltzing Matilda, You'll come a waltzing Matilda with me, "Who's that jolly jumbuck you've got in your tucker-bag," You'll come a waltzing Matilda with me. Up jumped the swagman and jumped into the billabong, "You'll never catch me alive!" said he, And his ghost may be heard as you pass by the billabong, You'll come a waltzing Matilda with me. Waltzing Matilda, waltzing Matilda, You'll come a waltzing Matilda with me, And his ghost may be heard as you pass by the billabong, You'll come a waltzing Matilda with me. (this is a famous Australian poem)
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Luemas	21 Jun 2009, 01:05 PM Post #27
All ur Walrus R belong to Me Posts: 4,019 Group: Members Member #189 Joined: 14 January 2009	Oh... What's a billabong, tucker bag and stuff...
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Santa Fe	22 Jun 2009, 05:55 PM Post #28
Alcove Puppetmaster Posts: 898 Group: Veterans Member #81 Joined: 11 August 2008	Nice. 8/10
	Namuh dlrow ruoy ot em ekat won. Taht naht elpmis erom teg ton seod ti. Em deen uoy dna uoy deen i...


ARAZEC	23 Jun 2009, 06:59 AM Post #29
This Person Has No Life Posts: 4,006 Group: Members Member #48 Joined: 18 June 2008	Luemas 21 Jun 2009, 01:05 PM Oh... What's a billabong, tucker bag and stuff... a billabong is an aboriginal name for pockets of water like a pond,a tuckerbag is like a napsack for carrying food.
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Luemas	23 Jun 2009, 09:20 AM Post #30
All ur Walrus R belong to Me Posts: 4,019 Group: Members Member #189 Joined: 14 January 2009	Lol... yeah...
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