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| Before I Die A Twisted Death; its a story i beleve | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: 12 Jan 2010, 09:33 AM (384 Views) | |
| cheesebug | 12 Jan 2010, 09:33 AM Post #1 |
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I literally wrote this in seven minutes for a class. Enjoy? Before I Die A Twisted Death CHAPTER 1 - Before The Rains Before the rains, I was normal. Before the red rain, I had a life. I had a love, A family, A mind of my own. That was before the device Before the accident That set me free. I knew something was wrong when I saw the red clouds. Going outside was a mistake. Touch a piece of metal. Touch a piece of disaster. Scarlet drops turning the snow to blood Turning my mind into a controlled thing That anyone could take. Suddenly, I thought, Hey, why don't I go see what Alex is doing? Suddenly, I lost my common sense. Suddenly, I started down the road, Feet hitting pavement, Pavement hitting feet, Red hitting both. When I found Alex, his head was turned up to the sky, Mouth open, Waiting for more. I asked about his whereabouts. He just looked at me, As if I was crazy, And I was crazy. And suddenly I realized the rain was blood And Alex wanted more And this had to be the end of the world The wonderful end of the world. CHAPTER 2 - The Room The room was dirty. The room was dirt. A cave, A hole, A mine. Along the walls were streaks of red Smeared everywhere. I didn't know who I was. I looked for anything to tell me No mirror No paper No anything Except a box The box was green. The box was locked. A noise like screaming came from it Somewhat beautiful screaming. And all I knew Was that I needed to open that box And see what was inside Making that noise. I looked closer at the walls And saw The smears were not smears They were words. Over and over again The same thing was written Kill Charlese Kill Charlese Kill Charlese. I tried to scratch the words away Came across brick Engraved with words To escape Kill Charlese. The screaming got louder And I thought I need to kill Charlese. CHAPTER 3 - Charlese Is Not Dead The problem was I didn't know Charlese I didn't know me But I just wanted to escape Pacing Tripping What is this? A carpet Dirty. Lift it to see a door of wood. Lift the door See a staircase A way out A light A forest. I stood in the forest And looked around. There was no exit As there was brick all around A glimpse of the sky The only entryway of air. And I thought, What kind of sick trick is this? But there was a tree Inside the trunk there was a dagger Ruby red. Like the rain. I tried to reach it Something bit me. My hand oozed Not blood, but Black darkness That covered the rest of the forest And the staircase to the cave. Tripping in the dark Trying to find a stick As the sky above me turned redder than death Darker than fate. Tripped again Hurt my knee Found a stick. Went back to the tree Killed the biting thing A bug? Reached the reflective dagger That only mirrored the sky. CHAPTER 4 - The Trunk Found the stairs Into the light Back to the dirty room. My hand was fine My soul was ripped. I went to the trunk It swung open with my touch And inside there was A photograph! A photograph that said Use the dagger. I knew this phorographed girl was Charlese. She was the only thing standing in my way And I would kill her. In the light My dagger sparkled I hugged it to my chest Scraping it softly But suddenly I saw something My reflection Who I was Who I am. I am Charlese. |
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http://masochistic-goddess.tumblr.com/poetry "You will hear thunder and remember me, and think: she wanted storms." | |
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| cheesebug | 15 Jan 2010, 09:32 AM Post #2 |
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and my comp doesnt have spell check so if u c an error please tell me im going to put more into it, just saw THE GAME, made me cry harder than benjamin button, got a lot of inspiration. (the cake is a LIE) |
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http://masochistic-goddess.tumblr.com/poetry "You will hear thunder and remember me, and think: she wanted storms." | |
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| Deleted User | 15 Jan 2010, 10:40 AM Post #3 |
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is that a saying? or did u actually watch.....and cry in BB? (LIKING YOUR WORK ) |
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15 Jan 2010, 01:28 PM Post #4 |
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DELICIOUS!
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Haha. I saw the game. Spoiler: He commits suicide at the end. Oh, and Cheezebug, here's your revised post My computer doesn't have spell check so if you can see an error please tell me. I'm going to put more into it. I just saw The Game, it made me cry harder than Benjamin Button, and I got a lot of inspiration. (The cake is a lie.) |
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I think I'm Crazzzy. I think your crazy. I think your crazzzy... probably. | |
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| cheesebug | 15 Jan 2010, 05:21 PM Post #5 |
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lol not loike that ![]() no, arzy, i mean i cried really hard at ben button but i cried harder at the game. coughluenofakespoilers!cough |
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http://masochistic-goddess.tumblr.com/poetry "You will hear thunder and remember me, and think: she wanted storms." | |
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18 Jan 2010, 07:50 PM Post #6 |
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Ssh... It's funnier when people watch emo movies and everybody dies. Suggestion, watch it for yourself. Edited by Luemas, 18 Jan 2010, 07:51 PM.
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I think I'm Crazzzy. I think your crazy. I think your crazzzy... probably. | |
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