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Before I Die A Twisted Death; its a story i beleve
Topic Started: 12 Jan 2010, 09:33 AM (384 Views)
cheesebug
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I literally wrote this in seven minutes for a class. Enjoy?




Before I Die A Twisted Death

CHAPTER 1 - Before The Rains

Before the rains, I was normal.
Before the red rain, I had a life.
I had a love,
A family,
A mind of my own.
That was before the device
Before the accident
That set me free.

I knew something was wrong when I saw the red clouds.
Going outside was a mistake.
Touch a piece of metal.
Touch a piece of disaster.
Scarlet drops turning the snow to blood
Turning my mind into a controlled thing
That anyone could take.

Suddenly, I thought, Hey, why don't I go see what Alex is doing?
Suddenly, I lost my common sense.
Suddenly, I started down the road,
Feet hitting pavement,
Pavement hitting feet,
Red hitting both.
When I found Alex, his head was turned up to the sky,
Mouth open,
Waiting for more.
I asked about his whereabouts.
He just looked at me,
As if I was crazy,
And I was crazy.
And suddenly I realized the rain was blood
And Alex wanted more
And this had to be the end of the world
The wonderful end of the world.

CHAPTER 2 - The Room

The room was dirty.
The room was dirt.
A cave,
A hole,
A mine.
Along the walls were streaks of red
Smeared everywhere.
I didn't know who I was.
I looked for anything to tell me
No mirror
No paper
No anything
Except a box

The box was green.
The box was locked.
A noise like screaming came from it
Somewhat beautiful screaming.
And all I knew
Was that I needed to open that box
And see what was inside
Making that noise.

I looked closer at the walls
And saw
The smears were not smears
They were words.
Over and over again
The same thing was written
Kill Charlese
Kill Charlese
Kill Charlese.
I tried to scratch the words away
Came across brick
Engraved with words
To escape
Kill Charlese.
The screaming got louder
And I thought
I need to kill Charlese.

CHAPTER 3 - Charlese Is Not Dead

The problem was
I didn't know Charlese
I didn't know me
But I just wanted to escape
Pacing
Tripping
What is this?
A carpet
Dirty.
Lift it to see a door of wood.
Lift the door
See a staircase
A way out
A light
A forest.

I stood in the forest
And looked around.
There was no exit
As there was brick all around
A glimpse of the sky
The only entryway of air.
And I thought,
What kind of sick trick is this?
But there was a tree
Inside the trunk there was a dagger
Ruby red.
Like the rain.

I tried to reach it
Something bit me.
My hand oozed
Not blood, but
Black darkness
That covered the rest of the forest
And the staircase to the cave.
Tripping in the dark
Trying to find a stick
As the sky above me turned redder than death
Darker than fate.
Tripped again
Hurt my knee
Found a stick.

Went back to the tree
Killed the biting thing
A bug?
Reached the reflective dagger
That only mirrored the sky.

CHAPTER 4 - The Trunk

Found the stairs
Into the light
Back to the dirty room.
My hand was fine
My soul was ripped.

I went to the trunk
It swung open with my touch
And inside there was
A photograph!
A photograph that said
Use the dagger.
I knew this phorographed girl was Charlese.
She was the only thing standing in my way
And I would kill her.

In the light
My dagger sparkled
I hugged it to my chest
Scraping it softly
But suddenly I saw something
My reflection
Who I was
Who I am.

I am Charlese.

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"You will hear thunder and remember me,
and think: she wanted storms."
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and my comp doesnt have spell check so if u c an error please tell me
im going to put more into it, just saw THE GAME, made me cry harder than benjamin button, got a lot of inspiration.
(the cake is a LIE)
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is that a saying? or did u actually watch.....and cry in BB?

(LIKING YOUR WORK )
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Haha. I saw the game.
Spoiler: He commits suicide at the end.


Oh, and Cheezebug, here's your revised post

My computer doesn't have spell check so if you can see an error please tell me. I'm going to put more into it. I just saw The Game, it made me cry harder than Benjamin Button, and I got a lot of inspiration. (The cake is a lie.)
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lol not loike that ;)
no, arzy, i mean i cried really hard at ben button but i cried harder at the game.
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Ssh... It's funnier when people watch emo movies and everybody dies.
:whistle: :whistle:

Suggestion, watch it for yourself.
Edited by Luemas, 18 Jan 2010, 07:51 PM.
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