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| Tweet Topic Started: 16 Mar 2010, 03:52 PM (1,220 Views) | |
| Deleted User | 16 Mar 2010, 03:52 PM Post #1 |
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heres a place to comment so it doesnt wreck the flow.... |
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| cheesebug | 16 Mar 2010, 07:53 PM Post #2 |
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ARZY you are so thoughtful! Thanks for doing this; what are your comments on it? |
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http://masochistic-goddess.tumblr.com/poetry "You will hear thunder and remember me, and think: she wanted storms." | |
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| Deleted User | 19 Mar 2010, 04:01 PM Post #3 |
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well i am up to this part Spoiler: click to toggle as usual i really enjoy your writing and its descriptivness -eg "poison ivy plants potted along the hallway" .... awesome. despite my atrocious grammar i picked up this - "she pulled oven a little computer & started writing" you meant "open" instead of "oven" yeah? looking forward to reading the rest.... |
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| cheesebug | 20 Mar 2010, 01:51 PM Post #4 |
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ah ya ill fix that....thank you i wrote more (almost done) and ill post the rest soon...
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http://masochistic-goddess.tumblr.com/poetry "You will hear thunder and remember me, and think: she wanted storms." | |
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| Deleted User | 18 Apr 2010, 05:06 PM Post #5 |
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well.....this isnt a Tori comment but a comment all the same. Nice work Cheesebug- certainly a creativety (vity? ) EXPLOSION going on at the moment.So i ask what is inspiring you at the moment? is it ur spring break still ? all that sunshine ??? |
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| cheesebug | 18 Apr 2010, 06:19 PM Post #6 |
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No, spring break ended a long time ago. You probably noticed all my recent poems (except lady of the night) have a male character So, theres a chick (lets call her mandy) and two boys-Lewis, who likes me and i like him but theres a lot of tension, and Isaac, whos a best friend who likes me but also likes the spotlight. Lewis and Isaac usually comfort me when things get bad, but Isaac recently started to become somewhat quiet around me. Then, I saw Mandy and him flirting, got freaked out, Lewis tried to comfort me (he didnt know why i was acting depressed) but i ignored him, even though i liked isaac less than him. That's what "explain my love" is about. |
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http://masochistic-goddess.tumblr.com/poetry "You will hear thunder and remember me, and think: she wanted storms." | |
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| Deleted User | 18 Apr 2010, 06:23 PM Post #7 |
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ooooo well very interesting |
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| cheesebug | 18 Apr 2010, 09:03 PM Post #8 |
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Grr! as if. Mandy needs to die. i will get my Revenge! |
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http://masochistic-goddess.tumblr.com/poetry "You will hear thunder and remember me, and think: she wanted storms." | |
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| Midst Of Vampy | 12 Jun 2010, 11:02 PM Post #9 |
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XD How... threatful...? |
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| cheesebug | 13 Jun 2010, 08:07 PM Post #10 |
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Long time ago. I forgot about the boy anyway. But she's still a batch. |
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http://masochistic-goddess.tumblr.com/poetry "You will hear thunder and remember me, and think: she wanted storms." | |
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| Midst Of Vampy | 14 Jun 2010, 08:30 PM Post #11 |
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Heehee, I know exactly how you feel. enemies never fade... |
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| cheesebug | 14 Jun 2010, 10:39 PM Post #12 |
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I am a huge believer in vendetta. F**k world peace. Someone takes your buss seat pop a cap in their @$$. |
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http://masochistic-goddess.tumblr.com/poetry "You will hear thunder and remember me, and think: she wanted storms." | |
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| Midst Of Vampy | 15 Jun 2010, 08:25 AM Post #13 |
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:O OMG! So we're on the same page
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| cheesebug | 15 Jun 2010, 11:28 AM Post #14 |
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ay! |
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http://masochistic-goddess.tumblr.com/poetry "You will hear thunder and remember me, and think: she wanted storms." | |
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| Midst Of Vampy | 15 Jun 2010, 06:52 PM Post #15 |
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haha *sees Luemas sitting in my seat* *Loads shotgun* run,boy,run! |
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i wrote more (almost done) and ill post the rest soon...
) EXPLOSION going on at the moment.
12:49 PM Jul 11