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The multimeaning poem; What do you see?
Topic Started: 15 Apr 2010, 11:01 PM (432 Views)
cheesebug
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I wrote this poem, read it, and decide what yoyu think it means.

Can't you see I want you?
Can't you see I crave you?
Across the depths of my soul I shout your name
In the depths of my soul I plead for your return
Don't say goodbye when it's your eyes, your scent that drives me wild
Whether watching the midnight sky or my unpainted walls
I reach for you
Can't you hear me crying?
Can't you hear me pleading?
I let you run through my mind until I grab my shirt, give a twist
Remembering the crimes you have committed against my longing
She is with you smiling
And I pretend not to care
Can't you see me preaching?
Can't you see me trying?
She steals you away and tells you she is mighty
And you are worthless
You are addicted to her love
Until you are dying just because you did not believe you could survive
But I am still alive
Can't you hear me screaming?
Can't you hear me begging?
I end up with a broken bloodied mirror
Because when I peer into it
I see her eyes.

Okay, so this poem can mean three things (or more, I'm tired)-
The girl I'm talking about is mean and stealing my boyfriend, but I feel guilty because I am like her.
The girl I am talking about is me and I feel like I have killed y soulmate
OR
The one I love is addicted to a drug.

I saw the second and third one mixed. What did you see?
http://masochistic-goddess.tumblr.com/poetry
"You will hear thunder and remember me,
and think: she wanted storms."
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Midst Of Vampy
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I saw....Tacos. Yes... Tacos
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Vamp, thanks for the other beautiful reviews, but just know I take my work VERY seriously. If you want to joke around, go to one of lues threads. Or something.
http://masochistic-goddess.tumblr.com/poetry
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I'm sorry. It really is beautiful. There goes my failed attempt a humor...
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sokay, you dont have to memorize my quirks just yet ;)
http://masochistic-goddess.tumblr.com/poetry
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heehee, better prepare though.
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i laugh at pain is one....
http://masochistic-goddess.tumblr.com/poetry
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uhhh...
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