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What have I done
Topic Started: 14 Jun 2010, 11:59 PM (206 Views)
cheesebug
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generic, but thats how i feel.

I stumble in again
Undress to release my scars
I know you see them
Always there watching me
Your eyes dig into my skin
What have you done again
You ask
Grinding your teeth you manage to scream
I come in beaten
Blood drips from my neck
You take a look at me and ask
What have you done again
I walk up to you injured
Red flows from my wrists
You examine me
Smirk
Call me a coward
You look up at me
Can’t even cut deep enough to hurt
You say
What have you done again
I stand up high
Everything looks so small
Helpless
I cringe
The scars dance in a blur
Intoxicated I fall
Expect a miracle
An epiphany
But I just hit the ground
Blood seeps downhill
I see you at the bottom
You don’t ask what I have done again
Instead you stare at me
And let me think it for myself.
http://masochistic-goddess.tumblr.com/poetry
"You will hear thunder and remember me,
and think: she wanted storms."
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ewh

regret ?

well i like this one very much
its not as complex as much of your work-im going to read it again in the morning to see another meaning and the term epiphany i havnt heard used for a long time-its a good time isnt it ! :thumbs:
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Midst Of Vampy
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Yep, I was going to say regret.
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ah ha ha thanks arzy
http://masochistic-goddess.tumblr.com/poetry
"You will hear thunder and remember me,
and think: she wanted storms."
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well, the only thing is that your poems also have the same...uh...concept.
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not to me
you have to look deep
most of these poems lie
so that the truth cant be seen.
http://masochistic-goddess.tumblr.com/poetry
"You will hear thunder and remember me,
and think: she wanted storms."
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well, they usually ARE dark, though...
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obviously. i dont get how to write happy poems. they dont have stories.
http://masochistic-goddess.tumblr.com/poetry
"You will hear thunder and remember me,
and think: she wanted storms."
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actually, sometimes they do...
one of my best friends is getting married next year to the love of her life, and he wrote her a happy, beautiful, love poem. *sigh*
That's how I want to be won over by a guy...
a love poem. I'm such a sucker for poems...
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Love poems....its the thought that counts, but they bore me if they arent meant for me
http://masochistic-goddess.tumblr.com/poetry
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heh heh,
some guy I barely knew in 8th grade had been crushing on me for three years without me knowing! One day, he finally got up the courage to at least put a love poem in my locker and on my desk...
he was so sweet, we ended up going out for 6 months, but then he moved :(
He wrote the sweetest things and would always sneak up from behind me and tackle me and pin me down, tickle me, and then we would just watch the clouds for a while, and he'd tell me how lucky he was to have me.
It sounds like something from a movie...
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