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| Higurashi no Naku Koro Ni; Insanity Gathering Chapter | |
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| darkhappy1 | Jul 18 2008, 04:07 PM Post #1 |
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(The characters and other elements of Higurashi no Naku Koro Ni (Kai) aren't mine. The parodies, characters, and other elements of many other anime also aren't mine. The songs, poems, and many other things in this Fan Fiction isn't mine unless stated. I also thank the people who let me use their name for this story. Also, there will be spoilers in this story, so don't read this if you didn't finish Higurashi no Naku Koro Ni Kai... If it isn't a good fanfic, sorry! First-timer! It will be somewhat short... I wonder how I'll be able to do this in a horror genre and actually making it scary... Okay, each post will be a short little chapter so that the post isn't too large and such. That way, you can always see the next chapter without reading it all over again just to find your place. No comments should be made in this thread, okay? Time to begin!) __________________________________________________________________ Kasai, Dr. Irie, and DLZ tried to get Shion out of the Rehabilitation Room. It was Shion finally saw Satoshi once again, and she didn't want to leave. She couldn't. She was trying to break free from their grasp. Shaking. Twisting. Then she gave up. She obediently calmed down as she was being dragged on the floor. They went out of the door, looking through the soundproof window once again. Satoshi was still in a deep sleep in the room they just left. Shion stood up, looking through the window, looking at Satoshi. Kasai said, "I'm sorry, Shion." He looked at her with sad eyes behind his sunglasses, and then he felt a sting on his chest. He fell down, along with DLZ and Dr. Irie. Shion placed her foot on Dr. Irie, as if she won a war. "Oh no no! I should be saying I'm sorry! Then again, I'm not! Dr. Irie, you didn't show me Satoshi before now, right when I was breaking down. I worried and worried... I thought he was dead. You made my heart break..." She turned to the paralyzed Kasai and DLZ on the ground. "You guys shouldn't have dragged me away from Satoshi. Yet you did. I had only a minute in there. A minute!" She paused and shed a tear. "I loved Satoshi..." She stared down at all of them and smiled. "I love Satoshi!" Shion took out her knife. She began stabbing DLZ. "I... love... Satoshi!" She laughed hysterically while her knife was being inserted into DLZ. She pulled it out and blood ran out of his body. In and out, in and out, in and out, in and out.... With all of the strength he tried to gather while in pain, he weakly said, "Shion..." Shion stabbed at his forehead. DLZ was dead. |
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| darkhappy1 | Jul 18 2008, 08:42 PM Post #2 |
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Higurashi no Naku Koro Ni Insanity Gathering Chapter Chapter 1 In June 1983, Hinamizawa was a peaceful little village. During this time, adults were trying to set up the special Watanagashi Festival. The children were taught at a tiny school, where the teacher had to teach all of the children from different grades. To lessen the teacher's load, older children could help the younger children with their work. When school ended, children would go home, relax, and enjoy a peaceful dinner. However, there was a club that didn't go directly home. Instead, they played games, and the person who lost received punishment! The club consisted of Keiichi Maebara, Mion and Shion Sonozaki, Satoko Houjou, and Rika Furude! Now, there will be even more members... However, the mysteries of Hinamizawa are yet to be revealed... * * * * * DLZ got off the bus and said, "We're here!" DLZ was a 14 year old guy who just happened to get mixed up into fun all the time. He just happened to come with other selected members of Hideout and ended up in Hinamizawa. Of course, DH suggested this little vacation trip. He looked at the serene scene of Hinamizawa, the sun shining directly into his eyes. The wind was blowing lightly, carrying away leaves. Trees were proudly standing over the grass, while flowers were spread everywhere. He even noticed healthy roses here and there. He closed his eyes and sniffed the sweet air. It seemed so peaceful, those few seconds... until more people got off of the bus. DH, Shadow, Thirteen, Nicole were just a few of the group to come out of the bus... After the Hideout group ran out of the bus, the bus rode away. It was already 4:39 PM, so they decided to go around the village. However, DH said, "Sorry! I'll be going around town alone! I need to meet someone very special." DH, or darkhappy1, was someone who abosolutely loved anime, computers, and drawing. However, he was reasonable and calm, although he is still able to have some light-hearted fun at times. Then DLZ said, "Wait, WHAT?! I thought you were going to lead the group! After all, you were the one who suggested this vacation trip!" Then DH interjected, "That doesn't mean I have to lead all of you guys... After all, this is a vacation!" Thirteen said, "I hope that wasn't an insult to all of us..." "... Nope! Nipah!" DH exclaimed. "So yeah! I'll be separating from all of you!" He did a sideways peace sign over his eye and stuck his tounge out by just a tiny bit. Shadow declared, "I will also be doing the same... except saying Nipah..." DH thought with a snicker, "You just did." "I need to meet a... friend of mine," Shadow continued. "Do it... Peko, Maggaare!" DH randomly thought in his mind. "So, I'll see you guys later." So, Shadow went in one direction, DH went the opposite direction, and the rest of the Hideout group stood in one spot like trees. Everybody was standing still for a minute, clueless of what to do next, while an old lady stared at them while walking by. She was about to say, "Do you people want postcards of Hinamizawa as gifts?" since they were staring at the scenery unintetionally, but she didn't. Finally, after the lady passed by a long time ago, DLZ said to everyone, "Okay! We need to go somewhere! Any sugge-" Right then, everyone's stomaches started rumbling. Thirteen groaned while Nicole said, "You know... I would like some cake..." DLZ tried to figure out what place they could eat at, so he took out his "Hinamizawa/Okinomiya Pamplet" and looked through it. "Aha! I found it! Angel... Mort? Interesting...," DLZ said in his mind. "Okay everyone! Let's go to Angel Mort!" DLZ shouted at everybody. "I guess I'll be the leader of this group for now! So follow me! Come on!" He marched towards Hinamizawa, using a route that would go into Okinomiya while getting a good view of Hinamizawa, while looking at the map at the same time. The other people in the group looked at each other, wondering how this would turn out, but then they followed him anyway. So when they "officially" went into Hinamizawa, they were seen as a line of tourists that was led by a fourteen year old... |
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| darkhappy1 | Jul 20 2008, 04:14 PM Post #3 |
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Chapter 2 After agonizing minutes of embaressment caused by all of the people in Hinamizawa and Okinomiya staring at the group of Hideout members, they were finally near the door of Angel Mort. Stairs were going up to the elevated stone ground, with a building on top of the ground. The exterior was painted butterscotch yellow, with orange horizontally cutting across the yellow in half. The roof was bright red with regular glass windows placed on it. Below the roof is the title "Angel Mort". There is also a pole with a sign that has an angel in it and says "Angel Mort"... DLZ shouted, "We're here!" Even though he was in a crimson red t-shirt that said "There are 10 people in this world: Those who know binary and those who do not" and dark green shorts, he was very hot. "So now, we need to just go in!" Nicole said, "You know, I've heard that this place makes very good cakes... Yum!" Nicole was someone who was under a lot of stress, but she was almost always cheerful when around her friends. So now, she's here with her friends, trying to survive the intense heat in her blue jeans and white shirt. So, everyone in the group went into the air-conditioned pastry shop. The walls were colored the same butterscotch yellow as on the outside, and the windows let in sunlight from the outside. There were also pastries near the walls that were in glass, since this is a pastry/ice cream shop. Then, DLZ spotted DH, Shadow, and a few other people at a table on the side. There was a green haired girl with a long ponytail that had on a yellow, unbuttoned vest over her white shirt and wore a red skirt. Then there was a little girl who had long, blue hair. She also wore a white shirt and a blue skirt. The next person was a little girl with short, blond hair. She wore a jade green dress (a somewhat short dress, not like the ones you see at formal occasion) with a yellow ribbon attached near the neck. There was another girl with medium-length, ginger colored hair. She wore a white beret along with a white dress (almost the same as the blond-haired girl) that had purple ribbons near the neck and lower back. Finally, there was a brown haired guy that wore green shorts, and a very short, red vest over his black shirt. DH was wearing his usual black shirt with white on the collar and brown khakis, while Shadow was wearing a crimson red t-shirt and black shorts. DLZ approched the full table and said "Hello! I believe we haven't met! I'm DLZ" Nicole, DarkFlare, and the others also approched the table. Nicole exclaimed, "Hi! I'm Nicole!" She smiled but then whispered to herself, "You guys remind me of a few people..." Thirteen followed by saying, "Yeah. I'm thirteen." DarkFlare said, "Hey. You can call me DarkFlare." BH greeted, "I'm BH, possibly the only sane one around here." "And I'm Blades!" Blades said. "You guys already know who we are, so no need for an introduction," Shadow and DH said. The brown haired guy said, "Okay... Well, it's Maebara Keiichi, at your service!" He gave them a thumbs up. The green haired girl said, "I'm Mion! Good to see ya!" She winked at them. The ginger haired girl exclaimed, "Hi! I'm Rena!" She waved. The blond haired girl said, "I'm Satoko, Booby Trap Master! Hohohohoho!" Then the blue haired girl said, "Hello! I'm Rika! Nipah!" Rena shouted, "Haauuu!!! I want to take you home!" She reached over the table to get Rika, but Keiichi and Shadow held her back. "MUST... TAKE... RIKA... HOME!!!" Keiichi said, "No! You can't take her home! She's a living being, not a cardboard cut-out of that guy from KCF!!!" Mion said, "You mean Colonel Sanders?" Keiichi shouted, "Of course I'm talking about him! WHO ELSE?" Mion told him, "Geez, a bit touchy, eh?" She smirked. Rika exclaimed, "Nipah!" Rena shouted, "HAAAUUUU!!!!! MUST TAKE HER HOME!!!" Rena became even more wild, while all of the other people in Angel Mort were staring at the spectale. A mother and her stepdaughter slipped out of the crazy pastry shop laughing with a box of Shortcakes and Petit Trianons. Someone named Ono was crowded by fans while a pink haired girl was sitting alone, eating a potato chip and watching Rena. DH thought in his very confused mind, "... Maggaare in the Air! Lucky Alternate Ending! Killer! GAH!!!" The Hideout group went to a nearby, much more larger table and picked up the menus on the table while Rena was still in "Take It Home" Mode. There was a girl, looking exactly like Mion, walking up to Rena's table with a very large tray of pastries. She had no ponytail, but she had a yellow ribbon tied to her hair. She set the tray down, in front of Shadow, Rena, and the others. Another girl set another tray down with the same exact pastries onto the other table Nicole, 13, DarkFlare, and the others were sitting at. DLZ said, "Thanks, but..." "I got these for for you guys. I knew you'd be hungry," DH interupted. "Oh... Thanks," DLZ said. "Thanks- Urgh! -Shion! I still can't get enough of your Angel Mort uniform..." Keiichi said at the green haired girl without the ponytail while Rena was still being held back. Then, Rena suddenly calmed down. Rena huffed, "You got me! That was really tough! Good job! Hahaha!" She picked up an Egg Tart from the tray. "But I won't lose!" She threw the egg tart into Keiichi's face. "Gah! Well, I guess it's time for a... FOOD FIGHT!!!" Keiichi screamed. He picked up a shortcake and threw it at Rena. Thirteen threw a carrot cake at DLZ, so DLZ threw part of an ice cream sundae at him. BH was hit with another Egg Tart In the backround, there was a guy named Minoru that just happened to walk in and say to Ono, "Hey Ono! I'm back! I for-for-for-" "Hohohohoho! If only I had more time to set up the traps!" Satoko said. She picked up a shortcake and threw it at Nicole, but she ducked and it hit Minoru. Minoru went over to a table and picked up his cellphone. He left quietly without anybody but Ono and the pink haired girl noticing. "Bye bee, Minoru!" said Ono and the pink haired girl. Ono sat down with the pink haired girl and all of his fans gave him personal space, while another waitress put a tray down with pastries and ice cream in front of them. Meanwhile, Satoko and Rena had shortcake smudged all over their face, Shion's back dripped vanilla ice cream as she was running from the chaos, Egg Tart was smushed to Keiichi's face and chest, and Rika wiped off Cheese Cake from her right arm. DLZ's stomach area was covered in Carrot Cake and his face was covered in Cream Pie, Egg Tart covered BH's body completely. swirls of vanilla and chocolate ice cream were smothered on thirteen and Blades, DarkFlare's hair had icing all over, and Mion and Nicole had Lemon Roll filling all over their clothes. "Stop!" Mion shouted. Everyone stopped. "Where is DH and Shadow?" Mion asked. Everyone shrugged. "Okay. Let me think...," Mion told everybody. She rewinded her memory before the food fight... Now it's time for Mion's Rewind Corner! Mion said, "I'm Mion! Good to see ya!" She winked at them. Rena exclaimed, "Hi! I'm Re-" Too far! "Thanks- Urgh! -Shion! I still can't get enough of your Angel Mort uniform..." Keiichi said at the green haired girl without the ponytail while Rena was still being held back. Then, Rena suddenly calmed down. Rena huffed, "You got me! That was really tough! Good job! Hahaha!" DH and Shadow escaped from the table, as they were on the outer edge of the seats. They walked away quietly without attracting any direct attention. Rena picked up an Egg Tart from the tray. "But I won't lose!" Shadow and DH were already out of the Memory Camera Boundaries. Then Rena threw the egg tart into Keiichi's face. End Mion said out loud, "Ah! Yes yes. Shadow can be quite sneaky and independent! I should've known... Okay! They have escaped from this game! We need to get them! But where might they be?" Right then, Mion saw DH in the crowd of fans and Shadow dressed up as an Angel Mort Waitress. Apparently, she was arguing with... Ono. "So Shion helped out Shadow, eh? Well, now it's time to get 'em!" Shadow heard Mion, and said to Ono, "You know what? If you don't like this tea, then get something like Coke!" "Shadow...," DH warned. Ono and the pink haired girl said, "Coke?" Shadow told them, "Yes, Coke. Either way, you still have your tea, made with the kindness I tried to add..." Shadow forced a smile. She picked up his tea and poured it on his white tuxedo and pants, then she ran into the crowd of fans. DH also heard Mion, and disappeared into the crowd. Mion and DLZ's groups shouted, "Get them!" Thirteen and DarkFlare randomly threw a piece of cheese cake at the crowd, but instead hit Ono and the pink haired girl. Ono whispered to himself, "Oh no..." The pink haired girl became VERY angry. "Face the wrath of me, Akira!!!" the girl screamed. She and Ono got pieces of their cakes, while the crowd of fans bought their own supplies of "Ammo". Good job, Rena. You started a Pastry War. Yum! |
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| darkhappy1 | Jul 23 2008, 02:25 PM Post #4 |
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Chapter 3 "Hanyuu, something is different in this Hinamizawa." "I supose so." "And as always, you've given up." There was a pause. "You're making me depressed, Hanyuu. I suppose you'll just have to hope. After all, don't you wish to eat the desserts from Angel Mort? Don't you wish to be seen, even? You keep on saying that everyday." "Angel Mort was closed due to the Food Fight. Plus, I don't know how they would treat me..." "You know how they would treat you. That was a lousy excuse. Plus, didn't you want to be in the food fight?" There was another pause. "Hanyuu, you're lucky I don't have my sake... You know, there are even more people in the club. It will be a lot of fun. Plus, this is a wonderful world. In the other worlds, Shion hated Satoko. In this world, she and everybody else loves Satoko. When we told Keiichi about Satoshi and the Watanagashi Festival in other worlds, he was paranoid afterwards. In this world, he isn't. In other worlds, Rina came into Rena's life. However, she hasn't come yet. Hanyuu, this a world that is near perfection. Hanyuu, you have to believe." Satoko sat up on her sleeping mat. "Rika, who are you talking to? ANd why are you sitting on the window ledge. It's already..." Satoko looked at the brown cat clock. "... 11:26 PM." "Don't worry Satoko! I'll go to sleep right now! Nipah!" * * * * * The next morning, there were huge gusts of wind in Hinamizawa. However, the school (and the only school around) was still in session, so most of the club (as some were too old to go to the school) walked together to school just for the heck of it. Satoko, in a buttoned pink shirt and blue shorts, screamed, "Ah!!! It's so windy!" Rika, in a long blue dress and a buttoned white shirt flew in the air. "Niiii...." Shion, in a buttoned white shirt and a short, navy blue skirt, exclaimed, "Ah!!! Not good!" Mion was in the same yellow vest over her white shirt, except that she also had on a red tie and a long, red dress (not her short red skirt that she wore). "Hahahaha! Shion, look at the weather before you dress for school!" Keiichi wore a buttoned white shirt (seriously, it's a recommended outfit) and black pants. That was the usual outfit for boys. In fact, all of the males in this group that's going to school is currently wearing the same thing. He said to Rena, "Wow Rena. You're holding extra tight there, eh?" He smirked. "Keiichi...," DH warned. Rena wore her short, light blue skirt and white shirt with blue and white stripes on the collar and at the end of the shirt's short sleeves. She told Keiichi, "Well, I didn't wear them today, so..." Keiichi fell backwards with a bloody nose. "Keiichi? Having another moment there, eh?" Shadow asked. Luckily, she was in jean shorts and a white shirt without buttons. "Heh. I wouldn't blame him. Keiichi is Keiichi," thirteen inquired. "Ah! So you're taking his side, thirteen? Haha!" DLZ told him. Since thirteen was easily offended, he screamed at DLZ, "I'M JUST SAYING WHAT'S TRUE!!!" BH had to break it up by saying, "Really. You guys are acting like babies..." Rika, on the ground this time, told them, "Let's not fight, okay? Nipah!" Rena was struggling. She could either: A ) Run away with Rika B ) Keep her skirt down ... Thank goodness she chose A, or else Keiichi would've had a heart attack... Next! * * * * * The school was very loud, as the wind was forced onto the exterior walls of the school and the kids themselves... Well, they talked a lot. Chie-sensei (the teacher, and the only teacher of the school) had to scream loudly to be heard and for the entire class to shut up. Trust me, it was frightening to hear the usually calm Chie-sensei get angry. Her white dresses and short, blue hair made her look even more innocent when calm... At least she made a somewhat good impression to the many people who transfered in that day... When it was lunchtime, the wind died down, and the club members in the school grouped together their desks. "Hey, Keiichi! What do you have for lunch?" Mion asked. "Umm.... I have Cup Noodles," Keiichi answered. "Haauuu! Keiichi, why are you bringing Cup Noodles again? It's not healthy for you!" Rena told him. "That's because his mother is away," Mion answered. "How did you know?" DH asked. "Um... Uh. Because I noticed! Plus, news travels around Hinamizawa fast! Hahahaha!" Mion said. "Well, Keiichi, I have something for you." She gave a bento box to Keiichi. When Keiichi opened it, he smiled. Keiichi told Mion, "Thanks! I'm starved! Wait, did you poison this? Eh, who cares!" He finished his Cup Noodles and ate the rice and the other sides in the bento box furiously. "Man, this is good!" "Umm... Uh, thanks!" Mion said. She blushed. "Uh... I need to go to the bathroom! With Shion!" She stood up and took Shion while running to the bathroom. Shadow whispered to herself, "This is going to be fun..." * * * * * School was finally over for the day. Usually, the club would come together and play a game, but Mion had to work and Rika had to practice her dance for the Watanagashi Festival. So, the club parted ways and went home. However, Keiichi and Shion stayed together. "So, Shion? I have a question." "Ask away!" "What was wrong with Mion?" Shion put her head down. There was a tense silence. She muttered something. "What did you say?" "Keiichi, I have to tell you something." "Okay. What is it?" There was silence. "Come on, Shion! You can't just tell me that you're about to say something and just leave me hanging!" "Leave me hanging..." "Wait, what?" "Keiichi... Mion likes you." |
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| darkhappy1 | Aug 7 2008, 02:42 PM Post #5 |
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(not finished) Chapter 4 Someone's head restin' on my knee, Warm and tender as he can be. Who takes good care of me, Oh, wouldn't it be loverly? - an excerpt from Wouldn't It Be Loverly? (My Fair Lady) ___________________________________________________________________________________ "Shion, I haven't thanked you for letting me stay with you!" DH said. "Oh! It's no big problem. After all, since Mion called me so that she knew if I could let you stay with me, I couldn't help but agree!" Shion exclaimed. "Yeah. It was nice of her to allow me to bring most of the Hideout members. I even called her saying that there might be more coming! Thank goodness Mion told everyone in the village that we were visiting and didn't know about their customs, or else the entire village would hate us because we didn't introduce ourselves!" DH told Shion. He started eating even more of his rice with broccoli and shrimp. "Man, I usually hate shrimp and broccoli, but this is good! Thank you Kasai!" Kasai, with his apron and sunglasses still on, said, "I'm glad you enjoyed my cooking!" Shion laughed. "It's nice to know that you like it! This is nothing, just so you know. Wait till he cooks some steak!" Kasai, DH, and Shion laughed all together in the space of their apartment room. Meanwhile, everyone else had their own apartment room except for DLZ, thirteen, Shadow, and Nicole. DLZ and thirteen were staying in Keiichi's house, while Nicole and Shadow stayed at Rena's house. However, Rena decided to make some food for Keiichi, so Nicole and Shadow made some too. When they got to Keiichi's house, they heard screaming and things breaking. Rena knocked on the door politely, and then Keiichi opened it a minute. "Oh! Hey Rena... and the two other people whose names I forget," Keiichi admitted. "It's Shadow, and this is Nicole," Shadow told him. "We brought you guys some dinner..." Right at that moment, Shion walked up to Rena and the others from the road. She also had a box filled with food. She was surprised that everyone was there and said, "Oh! Rena! You also brought some food for Keiichi too?" Rena nodded. "Aha! I guess I didn't need to make this," Shion said. "Whatever food you have, we need it!" Keiichi told her. He gave her a thumbs up. "Well, if you say so...," Shion said. She gave him the box, blushed, and ran away. "Uh... Well, Rena, Shadow, Nicole? I would like to have those boxes now. Thanks a lot!" Keiichi exclaimed. "No. Thank you," Nicole told him. The trio piled the boxes and gave them all to Keiichi. Keiichi closed the door, and they left afterwards. * * * * * When the group met at school before Chie-sensei started teaching, they saw that Keiichi, 13, and DLZ were very tired. Apparently, 13 and DLZ had some... fights in Keiichi's home. That explained all of the screaming last night. A very tired Keiichi said to Shion, "Shion, I wasn't able to thank you for the food you made us! We shared it together when we finished Rena, Shadow, and Nicole's boxes! Thanks guys!" Shion said, "Wait, I didn't-" She looked at Mion, who looked at her with eyes filled with guilt. "Oh! Uh... Yeah! You're welcome! Hahaha!" Shion told Keiichi instead. The doors slid open, and Chie walked up to her desk. "Okay class! You had enough time to talk, so let's start learning. Okay?" She smiled sweetly at the groaning class. * * * * * After school ended, Mion decided to tell everyone something before they left. Mion shouted, "Okay everybody! Watanagashi is closing in, so I'm inviting everyone to come join us in club activities! I already invited the Hideout members that don't come to school with us, and darkhappy1 is inviting the Hideout members coming to Hinamizawa during Watanagashi!" "Uh... I've heard rumors about a chain of mysterious deaths during Watanagashi. Is it true? Seems like it's fun," thirteen asked. Before Mion could reply, Rika told thirteen, "It's nothing to worry about! I'm sure that nobody here will get killed! Nipah!" "Oyashiro-sama's curse...," Rena whispered to herself. No one heard her. "If you say so...," thirteen said to Rika. He began to walk out of the classroom and then out of the building. The rest of the group followed. When they were outside, Rena saw two adults near a tree. "Tomitake, you really do pick interesting things to photograph," a blond haired woman told the other adult. She was wearing a pink shirt with a light green, cotton jacket on top of it. She also wore black pants that seemed a bit tight... Tomitake exclaimed, "Oh! Haha! Not really. I just take pictures of things that catch my attention. It's nice that you like what I take pictures of, Takano." He put his black camera over his eye and took a picture of the tree filled with birds. He wore a cap over his light brown hair, and he wore retangular-framed glasses. He wore a black muscle shirt and baggy camo pants. "Tomitake-san! Takano-san!" Rena shouted a few feet away. Mion, Shion, DLZ, and the rest of the group turned their heads to where Rena was waving her hand. Tomitake and Takano turned around and saw the group of children. "Oh! Hello Rena! So this is the Hideout gang, eh? Smile!" Tomitake shouted. He took a picture of the group in a second. "Urrgghh!!!" thirteen screamed. "I didn't have time to smile!" "Yes. 16 year olds can be very slow...," DLZ said. He fell down on the ground with a bruise on his cheek. "Shion! What was that for?" "Oops! Heh! I guess you have to be careful about what you say!" Shion said. As Takano and Tomitake were walking up to the group, Takano said, "My my. We don't want to be violent, do we?" "No, I guess not," DLZ said when getting back up. He glared at Shion. Takano said, "Of course. Anyway, it was nice to meet you. See you some other time..." She chukcled to herself as she left with Tomitake. * * * * * In the evening, Keiichi casually walked on a sidewalk in Okinomiya, looking at the few people he passed by. Right then, a child ran out of a shop happily. "Come back again!" Mion shouted at the kid as she walked out of the shop. Over her yellow shirt and light blue pants was a white smock. As she was about to turn back to the shop, she saw Keiichi. "Keiichi! What are you doing here?!" She turned red. "Well, I have to thank you for the food you gave me," Keiichi told her. "Uh... What food?" Mion asked nervously. Keiichi said, "Don't worry. You don't have to play dumb." He walked up to her. "It's okay, MIon. It's all okay." Keiichi put his arms around her. He embraced her. He didn't feel ashamed. Mion blushed. She was surprised. Then, she let herself embrace him as well. She lied her head on his shoulder, enjoying every second of it. They felt warm, even as the colder wind blew, signaling the arrival of night. As Shion was walking with a few plasitc bags in her hands, she saw Mion and Keiichi. In her white blouse and short, forest green skirt, she felt a chill down her spine as the cold wind blew fiercely. As she kept on walking, she whispered to herself, "Satoshi..." Nicole was wearing a black trenchcoat, entirely buttoned. As she was walking, she noticed Shion. Nicole passed her without saying anything. Then she saw Keiichi and Mion while walking, starting to separate from each other. Mion ran away, back into the shop she was working at. Keiichi seemed to be in shock for a moment, and then he turned his back and walked away. Nicole looked forward again. "Bull." |
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| darkhappy1 | Aug 24 2008, 11:07 AM Post #6 |
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Chapter 5 I'm out that door bam Hits me like a ton Of those red bricks Can't dig myself Out of this highest ditch This madness - an excerpt from Simple Song (Breakout - Miley Cyrus) ___________________________________________________________________________________ "They are supposed to be here right now! It's 4:00 PM!" Mion shouted. "Well, they might have a lot of stuff to unpack in their new apartments!" DH shouted. Mion huffed and turned her back at him. DH huffed and turned his back at her. Keiichi looked around and said, "Wow. This is a pretty big event." "Yeah. I haven't seen so many people in the town, all gathered in one place," DLZ exclaimed. Rika, who was in her red and white shrine maiden kimono, said, "I hope you all enjoy yourselves! Nipah!" Shadow snickered. "This is so great!" Nicole exclaimed. "Hohohoho! Plus, I'll be able to beat all of you, all the way to America!" Satako blabbered. "It's good that you have the spirit, Satoko!" Shion said. Nicole said, "Look! They're here! Finally!" She pointed to Wynn, TC7, Relic, Blades, BH, and DarkFlare who were coming to the group. Blades said, "Hey guys! We're finally-" 'Penalty, to all of you people!" Mion shouted. "Hold on a minute. We just got here!" Wynn stated. "I dislike these kinds of people....." "Exactly! It's already 4:10! We were supposed to start ten minutes ago!" Mion screamed. "So, it's penalty to you, you, you, you and you!" She pointed at DarkFlare, Relic, Wynn, Blades, and BH. "Why not TC too?" BH asked. "Because she had to travel with all of you guys! Fellow girls help each other out! Also, you guys are now part of our club!" Mion said. TC7 smiled sweetly and thought, I guess I'll go along with this for now.... "Yay! We get to punish people already!" Satoko exclaimed. She took out her black marker while everyone else held onto the ones about to be punished. "Hohohoho!!! I won't be to rough, okay?" After a few minutes, the punishment was done.... "Good job Satoko!" Shion said. "I really like what you've done!" "Yes. You really made a work of art," DH stated. "Why of course! Trap Masters are creative, and we have to be crafty!" Satoko exclaimed. Wynn, BH, Relic, Blades, and Darkflare had ink all over their eyes, noses, cheeks, and basically everything else on their face. They were now cats! "Mew mew!" Rika said. Rena resisted trying to take her home. "People are looking at us like we're crazy! I will not stand for this!" DarkFlare stated. He was pushed back and fell down. "Then sit down, for all I care!" Mion said. "Because today, we will go around each of the stalls and show off our skills! Whoever loses will get double the punishment! So first, it's an eating competition! To the mini-sausages!" Everybody ran to the mini-sausages. "I seriously don't want a cat tail and stripes on my back!" Wynn said while walking to the mini-sausages stall. He wasn't going to waste energy on running. When everybody bought the mini-sausages, most of them stuffed their mouths with the food. "Hot!" Wynn screamed. "Okay everybody! Let's go to the Water Ice Stall!" Mion shouted after a few minutes. Everybody raced to the Water Ice Stall except for thirteen. "Can't I just enjoy the food for once?!" he screamed. He ate the sausages while running to the Water Ice Stall. When everybody bought their own Water Ice, most of hem stuffed their mouths with the ice. Rena, Shion, Rika, Satoko, Keiichi, Nicole, Relic, DLZ, Blades, Relic, and Thirteen shouted, "Brain Freeze!" "That's why I eat my ice slowly....," DH stated. After a few minutes, Mion shouted, "Next is the Cotton Candy Stall! Let's go!" Everybody raced to the Cotton Candy Stall. BH ran with his almost finished water ice, but then someone accidentally knocked it out of his hands and it splated on his shirt. "Not cool!" BH shouted. When everybody bought cotton candy, everyone put the candy in their mouths quickly. Keiichi wasn't feeling so good, while Satoko screamed, "I won't lose!" After a few minutes, Mion said to everyone, "Okay! Time for all of you to enjoy yourselves! I already know who lost! Heh!" So, everybody went to their own activity, before they knew it, it was almost time for Rika's dance! Thump! The hoe crashed down. It was dragged back. The demon hit it again. Thump! The hoe crashed down once again. It carried away the white fluff as it was dragged back. The masked man hit the drum with the mallet once again. Thump! The decorated hoe crashed down again. It carried away the cotton as Rika dragged it back. "I didn't even know she had that much strength....," DLZ said. "Looks are deceiving, you know. Sometimes, what you thiink they are is really the opposite of their true side!" Shion stated. After she said that, the crowd erupted into applause. After the applause, people associated with the shrine had a large pile of cotton behind them. They gave out a cottonball to each person who came in front of them. The entire club followed Rena, who was holding an incredibly large teddy bear and wearing her white beret and dress with purple ribbons near her collar. They all took a cottonball and headed to the river. Rika managed to catch up with them. "Rika, you were great out there," thirteen said. "Thanks! Nipah!" Rika exclaimed. Thirteen smiled. "So, what do we do with this... cottonball?" Wynn asked. As Rena set her teddy bear down, she replied, "Well, you see everyone else? The are putting their cottonball in the river. It's because the cottonball drains all of our bad deeds and stuff away." She put the cottonball in her cupped hands close to her heart and closed her eyes. She kneeled down onto the hard stones and put her hands forward. She opened her eyes and opened her hands. The soft cottonball was still there. She separated her hands, letting it fall onto the water. There was no splash, there was no plop. Just a silent landing. It followed the river's slow currents, and it drifted away with the other cottonballs, together. The Hideout group also dropped their cottonballs. Some kneeled down, while others still stood up. Either way, they made it to the water. A few watched their cottonballs drift away with the others, while others were uninterested. After they watched the scene for a few minutes, then ones kneeled down stood up. When Rena stood up, she lifted her large teddy bear up. Shion noticed and said, "Rena, where did you get that?" Rena replied, "Oh! Keiichi, DarkFlare, Nicole, DH, and I played a game at one of the stalls. We all tried to get the teddy bear, but we all failed except for Keiichi. Instead of keeping it, he gave it to me." She looked at Keiichi with admiration, and Shion saw that. Shion looked at the large bear, then Rena again. "Well, I hope you like it! I know that you like cute things a lot!" Shion exclaimed. She gave out a false smile and chuckle. Don't even try. * * * * * Thirteen was walking in the trees near the dirt road. He wanted to get away from it all, all of the noise, the chattering, everything. So, he kept on meandering. A white van drove on the dirt road, and then it suddenly stopped. Thirteen thought, "I have a bad feeling about this." He hid behind one of the trees while watching what was going on. The doors on the back of the white van opened, and out came three men in light gray uniforms. The uniform was basically a buttoned jacket, a short cylinder-shaped hat with a visor, and pants. Anything other than those weren't part of the uniform. The three men seemed to be dragging something quite heavy out of the van. It was Tomitake. Thirteen stared in shock. Is he dead? Did they kill him? Did they drug him? What happened? He stepped back. Crack. "*!" thirteen thought. "Who's there?" one of the men said. The group headed towards the tree with their tazers and pistols at hand. I guess I'll have to do it. Thirteen ran away quickly. The group noticed his movement and ran after him. Thirteen made a turn to his left and kept on running. The men turned to their left and followed him. One of the men was close enough to reach thirteen, but then thirteen turned to his right. Then, he turned to his right after five seconds. After eight more seconds, he turned to his right again. He had to shake them off somehow. "Why did th-" Blood flowed down his left shoulder in the back. Thirteen let out a silent scream and held onto his shoulder. He dropped to his knees and fell down. Blood seeped into the ground, and his hands were covered in his own blood. It kept on flowing out without stopping. All he could see was red. He smiled. "Look at this. It's red. It seems so shiny. My strength. It's weakening. Finally. Will I finally get some peace? Do I really want this? At least those stupid people will be gone. Should I be scared? Why should I care? Ah.... I feel something near my head. It's cold...." He kicked back and hurt the man who had his gun on his head. "I won't die yet. Not right now. I'll make sure about that." Bang! |
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