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| Topic Started: Dec 29 2007, 11:03 AM (201 Views) | |
| Riyan | Dec 29 2007, 11:03 AM Post #1 |
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==Opening text crawl== A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away... RISE OF THE SITH Fourty-nine years after the rise of the Galactic Empire, the New Galactic Republic verges on collapse. DARTH SHADOW, the new Dark Lord of the Sith, has unleashed his invincible and infinite Sith armada upon an unsuspecting galaxy. Shadow's war of conquest has crippled the Jedi Order, leaving them scattered and vulnerable as countless Knights fall in battle, and many more swear allegiance to the new Sith Master. As the war continues on, the Jedi realize that there is more to this Sith Uprising than meets the eye. In the skies above the Inner Rim world of Onderon, a Jedi battle fleet engages the forces of Darth Shadow in a desperate effort to halt the Sith's galactic domination.... Darth Riyan, Shadow's most loyal Sith Lord, was walking down the ship's corridors making his way toward the bridge. He entered the bridge and proceeded to Darth Shadow, he took a quick bow, and spoke the words "Lord Shadow, theres a Jedi fleet fixing to board us. What are your orders?" |
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Riyan - Redeemed Jedi (Primary Character) Tironos Ocheron - Republic General (Secondary Character) Numi Ocheron - Jedi Knight (Secondary Character) 
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| Darth Shadow | Dec 29 2007, 02:03 PM Post #2 |
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The fleets slowly arrived out of hyperspace and into the orbit of Onderon. A group of Sith freighters and fighters broke away from the group to deal with the planet's Moon, Dxun. The ship in front of the Fleet was the capital ship, the Immobilizer, the capital ship of the ruthless Dark Lord, Darth Shadow. He looked upon the planet and noticed that their was an entire line of ships, most dropships, waiting to land in Iziz's spaceports. As he gazed upon the planet, his sith apprentice, Darth Riyan, entered the Bridge. He walked up to his master, got on his knees, and said: "Lord Shadow, theres a Jedi fleet fixing to board us. What are your orders?" The dark lord turned around and replied, "Rise my apprentice. Have fighters deal with the trade ships waiting in line. Then have the command ships focus on the Jedi ships. After the forces in the sky are dealt with, I want you, along with a group of Dark Jedi, to take a legion of troopers and touch down on the Iziz's spaceport and head for the Palace. I sense a Jedi is heading for that city, and I want him and the Queen dead. When their finished, this planet will then be ours. But until then, have Admiral Veed give me full coverage on the attack on Dxun." Shadow turned back around as Sith fighters deployed from his fleets' docking bays. He then began to use his Battle Meditation, but he stopped, knowing his soldiers would not fail him. The dark lord then became happy as she saw his fighters destroying the opposition. But there was something about one of those ships that amazed him. It was dodging the fighters left and right. He knew that there was a Jedi onboard, influencing the battle. |
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| Riyan | Dec 29 2007, 02:27 PM Post #3 |
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Darth Riyan left the bridge and headed toward the War Room. He informed the troopers and the dark Jedi of Darth Shadow's plan. One of the dark Jedi questioned part of the plan and Riyan used force choke on him and told the others to not question the Dark Lord of Sith's plans or actions. He scanned the room and then left and headed for his chamber. He entered his chamber and went to his communication screen and brought Veed up. "Admiral Veed" "Yes Lord Riyan" "Darth Shadow commands you report full coverage of the battle on Dxun." "Yes Lord Riyan" "Oh and Admiral" "Yes your lord?" "Failure is not an option" "Yes Lord Riyan" Riyan cut off the communication screen and took a seat in the middle of the room. He breathed slowly and deeply and began normal meditation. Admiral Veed appeared on the bridge communication holocron and reported to Lord Shadow. “My Lord, the battle isn’t getting intense right now. Mandalorians keep jumping out of the forest and but they are dealt with. We have no casualties at the moment. By the time you…” there was static and he cut off. |
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Riyan - Redeemed Jedi (Primary Character) Tironos Ocheron - Republic General (Secondary Character) Numi Ocheron - Jedi Knight (Secondary Character)
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| Meko Allden | Dec 30 2007, 12:20 AM Post #4 |
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Meko landed on Onderon, he jumped out of his starfighter with no one expecting he was there. He waited for Sith Forces to attack at full strength. "Darth Shadow, I'm planet side now waiting for orders." said Meko over his comlink to Darth Shadow. |
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| Riyan | Dec 30 2007, 11:32 AM Post #5 |
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"Good. Find Admiral Veed and find out whats going on. Watch your back, those Mandalorians know how to kill Jedi and Sith. If any attack kill them and don't think twice. When you find Veed report the situation to Darth Shadow....and remember....Lord Shadow doesn't take kind to bad news" |
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| Krev Roo | Dec 30 2007, 11:54 AM Post #6 |
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Krev stood over 'Admiral Veed's' body looking around the room. He had cut the power for only a few minutes and had to leave. As he bolted out of the building and hid in a safe place he put an illusion on the outpost as if it hadn't been touched. The Sith soildiers were still marching the perimiters and the Admiral would continue to report in 5..4...3....2.....1 |
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| Darth Shadow | Dec 30 2007, 04:15 PM Post #7 |
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OOC: Now, I am switching over to Aaida. IC" One hour quickly passes by... Aaida's fleet slowly began its departure out of the Clone & Ship Factory and into the orbit of Coruscant. As all the ships were in orbit, Aaida signaled the pilots of her ship, and they fleet entered hyperspace. Aaida couldn't think of a better way to kill time than to check around her ship. She couldn't meditate, for her thoughts would just begin dwelling on her brother. She slowly walked over to her admiral, who turned to her, saluted, and said, "The fleet is at 100% efficiency. We should be in Onderon's orbit in just 45 minutes." She nodded, and began to think. I had better brief my troopers. said Aaida as she walked over to the loudspeaker. "Attention all troopers, attention all troopers!" the Jedi Master said over the loudspeaker, "This is High General Aaida. We only have 45 minutes, so I'll make this quick. I want Captain Zuka to take a legion of about 200 troopers and land on Dxun's surface to deal with the Sith on the moon." She paused, taking a deep breath, then continued on. " From there, you will meet up with Master Serra. Then I want Commander Neko to take 500 troopers and retake Onderon's Palace. Now, we are going out there, and we are going to kick some Sith ass! Am I right!?" The troopers all screamed in unison, "MA'AM, YES MA'AM!" They then returned to their normal duties while the others prepared to dock. To kill more time, Aaida went over to her Jedi Padawan's chamber. She opened the chamber using the force and told him, "Get ready, you're leading the first legion of troopers to Dxun." the padawan replied, "Yes my master! On my way to the hangar bay! But, before I go, could we meditate? I haven't meditated in so long!" She nodded, and the two began meditating, dwelling their thoughts on peaceful events, clearing their minds. 45 minutes had past, and Aaida's fleet had exited hyperspace. It was chaos in space, and Aaida could only imagine that there was more chaos on Onderon. Her fleet began opening fire like it was no tomorrow. She knew that that this would not be an easy fight, and she knew her brother was on-board one of those cruisers. |
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| Meko Allden | Dec 31 2007, 01:29 AM Post #8 |
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Meko walked quitely along no sensing any signs off danger near by, but at that moment he sensed something he then ran to where Admiral Veed he was dead, Meko stood there for a moment and turned on his comlink,"Darth Shadow,Admiral Veed........is... dead." said Meko. |
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| Krev Roo | Dec 31 2007, 02:51 AM Post #9 |
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"Darn! Could have waited a few more minutes." Krev exclaimed to himself as he felt the dark jedi come across the bodies of the ones he had just put out of commission. His hands moved over the controls in his A-wing getting the information for the space around the planet. "Looks like I won't be able to fly out of here with the battle going on up above." With a swift movement he jumped out of the A-Wing and covered it back over with an illusion. It would be impossible to find it under the cloak. Another push of his feet and he was off back into the battlefield. Veed was still alive but the transmission from the illusioned Dark Jedi may put them into confusion until the Jedi arrive planet side. |
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| Riyan | Dec 31 2007, 05:33 PM Post #10 |
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Dath Riyan was practicing his lightsaber forms, getting ready for battle. He stood for a momment thinking of his past that he barley remembered. He thought of his mom dying by the hands of Darth Shadow, this angred him and he practice harder, wit hevery swing he took, rage filled another inch of his body. A soldier entered the room and told Riyan that Lord Shadow is summoning him. He thanked the soldier and then used force push. "Never enter my quaters without permission soldier!" The soldier apologized and ran out of the room. Riyan put his lightsaber on his belt and left the room. |
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| Meko Allden | Dec 31 2007, 08:59 PM Post #11 |
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Meko then waited for otheres to arive, he sat down on a bench there and waited for the others. |
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| Riyan | Jan 1 2008, 12:28 AM Post #12 |
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Darth Riyan had thoughts of many while walking toward the bridge. He knew he would have to clear them before entering or his master would read them. He approched the door and took a deep breath. He cleared his thoughts of nothing more then the batte. He entered the bridge and walked to his master once more and said "Yes Lord Shadow?" |
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| Darth Shadow | Jan 1 2008, 08:08 PM Post #13 |
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The battle was going extremely well for the Empire. The Orderonian and Republic ships were being dismantled by the second. The dark lord let out an evil laugh, knowing that the planet will soon be his for the taking. But his laugh soon stopped, sensing a tumor in the force; A Jedi had boarded his ship, heading for the bridge. He became angered at the fact that his fighters had not been able to destroy the Jedi boarder before he boarded the ship. He then sensed another tumor in the force; a Jedi battle fleet had exited hyperspace into Orderon's orbit. This also angered Shadow even more, but he knew his ships would handle it. He looked upon the entering fleet, as it consisted of about 90 ships. Shadow turned around and saw his apprentice. "Yes Lord Shadow?" "My apprentice. I want you to take a a legion of troopers and Dark Jedi and land on the planet's surface and kill the Queen and her Jedi protectors. I will deal with the Jedi boarder." said Shadow as he walked off and pulled out his lightsaber. But, he then look at one of the Commanders. "Commander Zann? Aim the supercannon at that ship in the middle, that's the lead ship. After it's dealt with, send 20 squadron of fighters from each of our ships to handle the rest of that Jedi fleet." Shadow whipped out his lightsabers, exited the bridge, and searched for the Jedi. He entered the elevator and stopped on the holding cells. After looking around, he did not find the Jedi. He entered the elevator again and headed for the Armory. He searched and found the Jedi, striking down one of the troops. "There you are, you Jedi scum!" he said as he rushed toward the Jedi, engaging him in combat. |
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[>Living on the Edge, Fighting Crime, Spinning Webs<] [^Made by Kazuma at KHInsider^] [>Villains on the Rise, And the City's Victimized>] [>You can't know what control really is until you lose it.<] [^Also made by Kazuma at KHInsider^] | |
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| Krev Roo | Jan 1 2008, 08:25 PM Post #14 |
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Krev whipped out his lightsaber as he aproached behind a troop battalion. Moving quickly he caught them by surprise and as he went on he kept bringing out more of his lightsabers. Hopefully this would catch the attention of the army. |
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| Riyan | Jan 2 2008, 06:56 PM Post #15 |
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Riyan went to the barracks and summoned a legion of dark troopers and dark jedi. His apprentice Darth Besnik was part of this legion he sumoned. The loaded up on two transports and a squadron of star fighters escorted them to the planets surface. The ships landed in the middle of the city. It was now in his hands to take the palace. The battle was soon engaged and Darth Riyan and Besnik fought their way toward the palace. |
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