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| Topic Started: Mar 17 2016, 03:27 AM (161 Views) | |
| rajahcreed | Mar 17 2016, 03:27 AM Post #1 |
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Habbo Username: rajahcreed Character Name: Ian Tijerina Character Alias: Biohazard Character Age: 18 Character Gender: Male Origin: Badajoz, Extremadura, Spain Character Powers: Toxikinesis (Poison Manipulation) Character Abilities:
Edited by rajahcreed, Mar 19 2016, 01:37 AM.
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| Fearme17 | Mar 18 2016, 05:19 PM Post #2 |
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Please seperate out each ability, and go into more detail about how they'd work and how you'd RP it. Also, remember it's only 1 power which entails 3 abilities. |
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| rajahcreed | Mar 19 2016, 01:08 AM Post #3 |
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I edited it. How does it look now? |
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| Fearme17 | Mar 19 2016, 01:16 AM Post #4 |
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Each ability has way too many applications. The first one is like a whole power in itself tbh |
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| rajahcreed | Mar 19 2016, 01:36 AM Post #5 |
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Hmm. I tried balancing it with limitations but I failed to see how massive it still is. D'oh! Sorry about that. I restricted him to poison breaths and lower-level melee weapon constructs. Is it any better? Thanks for your feedback. Really appreciate it.
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| Andru | Mar 19 2016, 04:05 AM Post #6 |
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How strong is your poison and does it take time to do damage or is it immediate? |
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| rajahcreed | Mar 19 2016, 05:16 AM Post #7 |
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It will take effect right away (as soon as his poison is inhaled or contact with his toxikinetic construct is made). At this point in his abilities, as soon as 30 seconds, nose bleeds may occur. Depending on the will/health of the "victim," fainting may occur at most 3 minutes (his body will go into full defense mode, conserving energy to combat the effects of the poison). It will take at least 3 hours before serious effects (such as internal bleeding and damage) happen, so the lethal spread of his poison is mostly avoidable (anyone with healing powers will probably be able to counter his poison at this point in his abilities; and anyone with knowledge in biochemistry could probably create an antidote). I am open to suggestions. xD I just really wanted to create a Dr. Jekyll/Mr. Hyde character, with whom I can RP that kind of inner struggle. In this case, his poison power/abilities is his Mr. Hyde while his outward appearance & overall attitude (decent-looking, nauseatingly kind & positive guy) is his Dr. Jekyll. |
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| Andru | Mar 20 2016, 03:06 PM Post #8 |
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Make it longer than 3 minutes to faint, say around 10. This application is now pending. It will require the second opinion of a senior member of staff. |
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| Fearme17 | Mar 20 2016, 07:11 PM Post #9 |
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This application has been approved. Welcome to the Jean Grey School of Higher Learning. |
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