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| Topic Started: Sep 27 2015, 04:20 AM (350 Views) | ||||||||
| Deleted User | Sep 27 2015, 04:20 AM Post #1 | |||||||
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| Wolverine | Sep 27 2015, 10:02 AM Post #2 | |||||||
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"Broken body" - list that this gives him 3 tonnes durability and that standard healing times apply. You can develop on this better through-out developments. List a time limit on the mind control and how much fire needs to touch them, how many minds you can control at once (one is fine) and how long the cool-down is. How hot are the flames? Add personality. |
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| Deleted User | Sep 28 2015, 07:28 PM Post #3 | |||||||
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| Deleted User | Oct 1 2015, 12:47 AM Post #4 | |||||||
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I see that you made changes, but all you did was give yourself a suit (which is your power). A suit isn't an X-Gene. Also his gadgets are a bit over the top aside from shoot lasers "manipulate molecules and more" is incredibly vague, and why does the gadget allow him to manipulate molecules (which could give you a vast amount of attributes such as tk) | |||||||
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| Deleted User | Oct 6 2015, 04:20 PM Post #5 | |||||||
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