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//: Creating... Kristopher Leclair...
 
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❝It only takes 1 mistake for hatred to lace upon you.❞
Kristopher Leclair





Mirrors Edge:
      Kristopher's x-gene has taken a very strange path on her body. She can channel a certain amount of energy to any object including her fists and hands giving them a bladed or a flat shield like property. The energy itself wraps around the object. For example, if she used Bolster on her foot she could make the energy form a bladed like property on her heel that would give her kicks quite the edge. The energy durability is the same has her Physical Strength.


Enhanced Strength:
      Kristopher's x-gene has given her strength that maxes out at 1 tonne.


Enhanced Durability & Invunerability:
      Kristophers x-gene has had an effect on her skin and bones making them as hard as stone and strangely, has given her immunity to piercing objects such as bullets or swords. Although: a honed titanium sword or .50 Caliber bullet could still pierce her. Her durability is maxed out at 3 tonnes.



Mirror's Bolster:
     By sending her energy to a specific part or parts of the body, she can bolster herself. She most commonly sends the energy to her legs to increase overall speed & jump height. This has a thirty minute OOC cool-down.

[Posted Image] Kristopher (青葉, Silent Mystery)

— Full Name: Kristopher Leclair
— Alias: Lizard
— Age: Seventeen
— Gender: Female
— Birthdate: January 27th, 1998
— Race: Allegedly Human.
— Eye Colour: Alexandra's Genesis/Violet
— Hair Colour: Jet Black
— Height: 5'11ft
— Weight: 237Lbs
— Occupation: Student
— Alignment: Neutral
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''Kristopher, speaking in which her silence makes the world go insane...
Only in which she speaks behalf the actions that shouts for her...
Her life is held within her hands, taken by her control...
Which she stands tall by others without any doubt others may take over her...
Maybe by the use of skill, but not the power of intelligence that holds...
Maybe even taken by the domestication they tower upon us...
But at the end of the day, Kristopher...
Kristopher Leclair, who will stand by your side during the violence occurring...
Maybe now, that you learn how society leads, the only thing by your side is the wind...''

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Come on, with the 1,1 -.- Read the post about file music. It's really obnoxious to make it so small that it can't be paused, it's ridiculous.

Anyway, onto the file. Can you state one power and every power that comes from it? Aura combustion out of enhanced strength doesn't make sense, if you were going for that. Also, take it out of a spoile rand better organize it.
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I'm very sorry about that, I'll get to that right now. :)
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Mixing the applications for strength and enhanced strength doesn't make much sense. If her power is enhanced strength, the cap on her strength is 1 ton. Also enhanced jump isn't the same as absolute jump, the impale itself is also limited by her strength cap 1 ton, so anyone with invulnerability or superhuman durability superseding that can withstand the blow. Razer Foot Strength while interesting doesn't make much sense. Her feet are still blunt objects, she wouldn't be able to cut anything with them.
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