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Surge; -- "Checkers or Chess?"
Topic Started: Oct 2 2015, 08:28 PM (164 Views)
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Habboon Username: Chidori
Character Name: Jordan Sawyer
Character Alias: Surge
Character Age: 16
Character Gender: Male
Character Origin: Mutant
Character Powers: Optic Blast

PERSONALITY - Jordan has always been seen to be a quite person and intelligent due to his time in confinement.

POWER: Optic Blast: Jordan's gift allows him to project continous streams of energy from his eyes which can cause Concussive Force and High amount heat.



  • APP1 - Concussion Beams: This allows Jordan release beams of pure solidified energy that causes concussive damage, with effects ranging from slight push, hard hit, knock-out, minor and major damage, shattering and up to total annihilation of the target.

    Users may even learn to control the movements of their beams such as making often them go in straight lines, curve, twist, turn, bend, as well as follow and lock onto targets to really long-range with proficient accuracy and marksmanship. (2 Tonnes of Force)



  • APP2 - Enhanced Combat: Jordan is unbelievably skilled in most known forms of fighting. They can be exceptionally proficient in the fighting traditions of a variety of cultures and become advanced with their own individual methods of close quarter combat, including martial arts (from all over the world), boxing, and wrestling. They can also become superhumanly skilled in their use of weaponry.



  • APP3 - Enhanced Reflexes: Jordan has drastically enhanced reaction speed, allowing them to dodge bullets, catch flies in mid-air, dodge and maneuver around complex attacks, catch falling objects, block detriments and react instantaneously to what others take more time to react to.




  • APP4 - Wave Motion Blast: Surge can emit/release enormous and destructive wave of energy at a desired target and most likely destroy the surrounding area.
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Speed is capped at 100mph so you can't break sonic barriers yet.
Put actual numbers on these apps.
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fixed
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What's the maximum strength of your concussion beams and wave motion blasts?
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Edited
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You need a limitation on your wave motion blasts too. Just "most likely destroy the surrounding area" is a bit too vague.
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I dont see how having optic blasts gives you enhanced reflexes or enhanced combat
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Users may even learn to control the movements of their beams such as making often them go in straight lines, curve, twist, turn, bend, as well as follow and lock onto targets to really long-range with proficient accuracy and marksmanship.

also take out locking onto targets as well as doing intricate movements with your beams at such an early state
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