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Lilah Velox; (Different power as TK was full)
Topic Started: Oct 3 2015, 01:01 PM (132 Views)
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[Posted Image] Habboon Username: Voltan

[Posted Image] Character Name: Lilah Velox

[Posted Image] Character Alias: Armor

[Posted Image] Character Age: 17

[Posted Image] Character Gender: Female

[Posted Image] Character Origin: England

[Posted Image] Character Powers: Psionic Exo-Skeleton Armor

[Posted Image] PERSONALITY - Lilah is a very subtle and quiet person, often not speaking of her powers. She despises fighting and violence, whilst having a innocent nature.

[Posted Image] POWER - Psionic Exo-Skeleton Armor


  • APP1 - Superhuman Strength; Lilah can generate an enormously strong psionic exoskeleton armor around her entire physical body. This exoskeleton drastically enhances her strength, allowing her to use her strength at a total of 4 tonnes. The Psionic Exo-Skeleton Armor also takes around 15 seconds to fully generate, and can last up to 1 hour.

  • APP2 - Extreme Durability; Lilah has extreme durability and impenetrable power. In certain situations the Psionic Exo-Skeleton Armor will significally enhance her exoskeleton’s size, strength, agility, dexterity and durability but for only 20-30minuets. With Lilahs extreme durability she can push it up to 3 tonnes. To some extent, she can shape her armor, such as her ability to form Wolverine-like claws and make them extend outward.

  • APP3 - Concussive Blasts;The strength, power and size of her psionic armor greatly enhances and increases tremendously when she is angered. In addition, the body armor greatly heightens and strengthens the concussive force behind her offensive and incredibly destructive blows. Lilah can cause her armor to release a large solid concussive blast of energy that apply 4 tonnes of force once activated, the blasts are able to shatter glassl and normal ceramics and are more enhanced when Lilah is angered, the blasts are able to pell to a 60 degree outblast. If using the Concussive Blasts too much, this could leave Lilah with minor 3rd degree burns on her palms and hands.
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A 360degree (essentially undodgeable) concussive shockwave of 4 tonnes of force seems too powerful, and definitely should not be able to "shatter metal and bone" at a beginner level.
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Changed to 180 degree outblast, and also changed it to ''glass and normal ceramics'' (pots and shit)
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You say your suit "will significally enhance her exoskeleton’s size, strength, agility, dexterity and durability but for only a short amount of time". How long is a short amount of time?

"In addition, the body armor greatly heightens and strengthens the concussive force behind her offensive and incredibly destructive blows and makes her practically invulnerable and immune from a significant degree of physical harm and damage." You should remove this. I don't want you to be practically invulnerable when you are angry.

I also think that your concussive blasts should be sent out as a beam, as even a 180degree blast is pretty much impossible for people to evade.
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Changed @ Mittyho
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