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| Topic Started: Oct 5 2015, 03:01 AM (236 Views) | |
| Deleted User | Oct 5 2015, 03:01 AM Post #1 |
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![]() Habboon Username: Xenoflare Character Name:Greyson Character Alias: "Grey" Character Age: 19 Character Gender:Male Character Origin: Washington State. Character Powers: Pyrokinesis PERSONALITY - Rather quiet and becomes very protective of what he loves, somewhat courageous and will stand for what he believes in. POWER - The ability to generate and manipulate fire with his mind or hands. He cannot form solids with this ability as it is fire. He does not require oxygen for the fire however as it is generated using his own source of energy from within his body. TRAINING- His father recognised that he was a mutant and considered that he was likely to be in danger so he was conditioned over a long period of time to defend himself against threats he was thought to encounter. JET OF FIRE- An ability of which allows him to use fire to propel himself temporarily through the air or in some form of direction. These thrusts do not last very long and cannot propel mass amounts, like moving a giant boulder for example. These thrusts can allow Greyson to move at speeds of 50 mph. THERMOCONTROL- Able to control the heat of his fire. This can only be done for a certain period of time and cannot be sustained for long periods of time. 300 degrees celsius is the maximum temperature his flames can burn at. His regular temperature of which his fire will be sustained at is around 200 degrees celsius. |
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| Deleted User | Oct 5 2015, 04:31 PM Post #2 |
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You need to put a speed limit on your flying (you can find one in the limitations topic) and a maximum and minimum temperature for your thermocontrol. |
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| Deleted User | Oct 6 2015, 07:06 AM Post #3 |
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I have finished editing. |
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| Deleted User | Oct 6 2015, 05:35 PM Post #4 |
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Your flight needs to be put a lot lower, at about 50mph. Your temperatures are way too high and too low at the moment. Could you also tell us whether they're Fahrenheit or Celsius? |
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| Deleted User | Oct 7 2015, 07:31 AM Post #5 |
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Done editing, again. |
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| Deleted User | Oct 7 2015, 12:44 PM Post #6 |
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You did not edit the flight speeds as it still reads: These thrusts can allow Greyson to move at speeds of 250mph, 300mph at max power placed in the output of this fiery jet. Your flight needs to be 50 mph. Also I believe we were allowing a maximum of 300 Celsius for basic pyrokinetics, another staff will confirm. |
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| Deleted User | Oct 8 2015, 09:55 AM Post #7 |
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Done. |
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| Deleted User | Oct 8 2015, 11:25 AM Post #8 |
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Also im not sure on the credibility of "subzero" flames. |
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| Deleted User | Oct 8 2015, 12:05 PM Post #9 |
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Just my opinion, but how the fuck can a fire burn cold??? Things need heat to burn, if its too cold they wont burn at all. |
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| Wolverine | Oct 9 2015, 10:21 AM Post #10 |
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Is the sub-zero flame equivalent to basically ice? |
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| Deleted User | Oct 10 2015, 06:33 AM Post #11 |
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Basically yes, it is equivalent to ice. |
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| Deleted User | Oct 10 2015, 11:49 AM Post #12 |
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I removed the subzero fire entirely, it seemed as though it was causing too much of a complication. |
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| Deleted User | Oct 10 2015, 02:40 PM Post #13 |
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as I said 300 celsius was the start limit for flames. |
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| Deleted User | Oct 11 2015, 02:39 AM Post #14 |
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oml is it done yet. |
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| Deleted User | Oct 11 2015, 01:36 PM Post #15 |
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all fire needs oxygen |
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| Deleted User | Oct 12 2015, 07:40 AM Post #16 |
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Is there anything that I need to change. |
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| Deleted User | Oct 12 2015, 12:48 PM Post #17 |
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| Deleted User | Oct 16 2015, 06:26 AM Post #18 |
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pending for four days. |
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| Deleted User | Oct 16 2015, 06:28 AM Post #19 |
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you can roleplay with a pending file |
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| Deleted User | Oct 17 2015, 10:24 PM Post #20 |
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