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Greyson Gallahad
Topic Started: Oct 5 2015, 03:01 AM (236 Views)
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Habboon Username: Xenoflare
Character Name:Greyson
Character Alias: "Grey"
Character Age: 19
Character Gender:Male
Character Origin: Washington State.
Character Powers: Pyrokinesis

PERSONALITY - Rather quiet and becomes very protective of what he loves, somewhat courageous and will stand for what he believes in.

POWER - The ability to generate and manipulate fire with his mind or hands. He cannot form solids with this ability as it is fire. He does not require oxygen for the fire however as it is generated using his own source of energy from within his body.

TRAINING- His father recognised that he was a mutant and considered that he was likely to be in danger so he was conditioned over a long period of time to defend himself against threats he was thought to encounter.

JET OF FIRE- An ability of which allows him to use fire to propel himself temporarily through the air or in some form of direction. These thrusts do not last very long and cannot propel mass amounts, like moving a giant boulder for example. These thrusts can allow Greyson to move at speeds of 50 mph.

THERMOCONTROL- Able to control the heat of his fire. This can only be done for a certain period of time and cannot be sustained for long periods of time. 300 degrees celsius is the maximum temperature his flames can burn at. His regular temperature of which his fire will be sustained at is around 200 degrees celsius.
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You need to put a speed limit on your flying (you can find one in the limitations topic) and a maximum and minimum temperature for your thermocontrol.
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I have finished editing.
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Your flight needs to be put a lot lower, at about 50mph.

Your temperatures are way too high and too low at the moment. Could you also tell us whether they're Fahrenheit or Celsius?
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Done editing, again.
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You did not edit the flight speeds as it still reads: These thrusts can allow Greyson to move at speeds of 250mph, 300mph at max power placed in the output of this fiery jet. Your flight needs to be 50 mph. Also I believe we were allowing a maximum of 300 Celsius for basic pyrokinetics, another staff will confirm.
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Done.
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Also im not sure on the credibility of "subzero" flames.
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Just my opinion, but how the fuck can a fire burn cold??? Things need heat to burn, if its too cold they wont burn at all.
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Is the sub-zero flame equivalent to basically ice?
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Basically yes, it is equivalent to ice.
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I removed the subzero fire entirely, it seemed as though it was causing too much of a complication.
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as I said 300 celsius was the start limit for flames.
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oml is it done yet.
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all fire needs oxygen
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Is there anything that I need to change.
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pending for four days.
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you can roleplay with a pending file
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