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Avitus Nazario
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Topic Started: Jun 4 2018, 12:25 PM (46 Views)
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megazocker29
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Jun 4 2018, 12:25 PM
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Quote - "(Insert quote here)" | | Name: | Avitus Nazario | | Age: | 34 | | Sex: | Male | | Species: | Turian | | Home: | Palaven | | Current Residence(s): | Citadel |
| Marital Status: | Single | | Sexuality: | Heterosexual | | Family Status: | Unknown
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| Allegiances: | Former Turian Military
| | Title/Position: | Ex-Commander / Strategical Assistant
| | Occupation: | Bounty Hunter
| | Possessions: | Apartement on the Citadel, A61-Mantis-Fighter
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| Skin Color: | Tan | | Hair Color: | - | | Height and Weight: | 6"20 and 210 lbs | | Eye Colour: | Gray | | Build: | Muscular | | Scars/Markings: | Light scar over the left eye | | Clothing: | Armor |
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Likes: | His Species, Turian Military, Palaven, Law and Order, Killing Criminals | | Dislikes: | Nearly all Humans, Criminals, Terrorists | | Weaknesses: | Talking about his Family, Can´t talk about feelings | | Strengths: | Shooting People, Great Strategist | | Fears: | Landing on the street again | | Desires: | Getting Humans out of the council, Starting a family | | Personality: | Uncommunicative, Smart, Strategic | | Languages Known: | German, English
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| Strength | 7/10 | | Dexterity | 6/10 | | Constitution | 8/10 | | Wisdom | 7/10 | | Charisma | 9/10 | | Intelligence | 9/10
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| Small Arms | 8/10 | | Long Range Combat | 8/10 | | Mid Range Combat | 9/10 | | Close Quarters Combat | 7/10 | | Melee Weapons | 6/10 | | Heavy Weaponryt | 7/10 | | Explosives | 7/10 | | Hand to Hand Combat | 8/10
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History | Avitus Nazario was a lonely child abandoned by his family and living in the streets of Palave. The Hunger and the loneliness formed his character and he became anti-social and knew how to solve problems. At the age of 16 the Turian Military got an eye on the young Turian and offered him a position. He started with easy things like serving food in the cantina or cleaning weapons. but in the age of 18 he finally got into duty as a soldier. The Turian Military became Avitus family over time and everything that he had. He was part of many missions, most of them were about taking terrorist cells down. In the Turian Military his opinion about the Humans was influenced more and more for the worse, because his commander (who was like his father) had a bad opinion about the young species in the council. When Avitus was 29, his commander stepped down from duty because of his older age and bequeathed Avitus his Ship and his title, from now on he was called Commander Nazario.
He has lead some very successful missions and stood out because of his tactical knowledge. At an Age of 32 he lead a mission to fight some organized criminals on Menae which were humans who rebelled against the Turian Government. When they arrived the criminals immediately started firing on them and Nazarius gave the order to attack the building they were in. Many people died, on both sides, but in the end Nazarios' troops got the situation under control. Many of his friends died and in anger he gave his soldiers the order to kill the remaining unarmed Human criminals. After the mission he had to stand in front of the Turian court-martial and got suspended from duty for his war crime. It was from this point on that his hatred of humans was at its peak. They took everything from him his friends and his family (The Military). Now he´s working alone like in the old days and does what he does best: Hunting down criminals for money. |
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Edited by Fenrir, Jun 5 2018, 02:52 AM.
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Fenrir
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Jun 5 2018, 02:54 AM
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I finished proof reading it, a note to you in regards to writing. It's just lead in all instances, leaded is not a word. Limit capitalization to things such as the beginning of sentences, named organizations like the Turian Military, and names of people. Constant unnecessary capitalization makes it difficult to read. This is just for your use when you write additional biographies and when in game. Last note, there is no need to put biography in the title of your post.
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Edited by Fenrir, Jun 5 2018, 03:01 AM.
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megazocker29
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Jun 5 2018, 05:09 AM
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Thank you for proof reading Fenrir! Ill try to use your advice in the future!
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