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| crowmagnumman | Sep 5 2008, 08:04 PM |
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I like it. I like G85 a lot, so I'm probably biased Right now it's a bit short, so it reads more like a summary, but I think it's good. I think it could be much better if it was longer and you fleshed out the characters, and helped the reader get to know them.. I'm working on a Godzilla story of my own too at the moment. Hopefully I can turn it into a script. I like that this story isn't exactly an ending, and it leaves it open. My story has a similar ending. Edited by crowmagnumman, Sep 5 2008, 08:05 PM.
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