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| Kaizen Ningo Squad Senshiborg-Prologue; Discussion of KNSS fan fic | |
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| Topic Started: May 26 2008, 09:23 AM (298 Views) | |
| UltramanSmythe | May 26 2008, 09:23 AM Post #1 |
Takayuki Miyauchi fanboy
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Prologue: The universe is an unending spiral of planets and galaxies, and only on a few does life that God gave birth to live. Some of it-became sentient, some for the better, others for worse. This is the story of four human people who are transformed into the extrordinary Senshiborg. They are four friends who are on an intergalactic road trip, Ben Tanaka, the calm headed leader, Yuriko Sue, the sly and sexy adventurer, Alex Sivan, the dedicated martial artist, and David Laalie, the cool hotshot. The story begins when the three friends cross a strange pathway that disrupts everything. "Ben, you can't drive for a million credits! Give me the steering wheel!" Yuriko yelled as Ben swerved the starcruiser. Alex was in the back of it meditating, and David was t-practicing. Suddenly, a small indicator light on the dashboard began to blink. "Damn you Ben, did you break the turning gear AGAIN? Galactica Fed is going to kill you if they find out!", Yuriko continued to rant. Ben retaliated "It's Galactica's own fault they build such crappy machines...wait, that's not the turning indicator, that's the attack alarm! Yuriko, get to the turret!" Yuriko nodded and lowered herself into the compartment. Suddenly, the view outside became blurry. "I-I'm losing control!" Ben shouted. Alex rushed in and searched for the emergency stabilizer button. Yuriko cursed at Ben. Without warning, the ship's power supply shut off. The crewmates were all KO'd by the shock of the gravity control shutting down. "They'll make the perfect specimens, bring them to the op table...", a metallic voice growled from another ship above them. "Now, our perfect soldiers will finally be realized!!!" Chapter 1 Next |
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| UltramanSmythe | May 26 2008, 09:24 AM Post #2 |
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Discuss here too. |
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| packmule | May 26 2008, 09:53 AM Post #3 |
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I'll reserve more comment until after I've obviously read at least one chapter. Suggestion: post your "chapters" in a separate topic thread and we can use this one to discuss the chapters. :) |
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| UltramanSmythe | May 26 2008, 10:01 AM Post #4 |
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Change the title to add prologue and discussion, please? |
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| packmule | May 26 2008, 10:07 AM Post #5 |
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Done. :) |
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