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| Topic Started: Jun 6 2008, 09:05 PM (981 Views) | |
| Jack da King | Jun 6 2008, 09:05 PM Post #1 |
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This is your area to give feedback on how I'm doing on the story I am writing, Godzilla: Chaos. |
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Who needs Toho Kingdom anyway? I'm a member at Monsterland Forums! Stick that in your pipe and smoke it! I find the term "Zombie" to be offensive. I prefer to be called Vitality Impaired. Jerry's Frags: 17 | |
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| packmule | Jun 7 2008, 12:44 PM Post #2 |
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So far so good. thumbs up I liked how you touched upon the origins of Godzilla and Angilas. |
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| Jack da King | Jun 7 2008, 12:59 PM Post #3 |
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Glad you like it. I was afraid I was taking something of a risk with the whole Alberto-Euplocephlo thing. |
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Who needs Toho Kingdom anyway? I'm a member at Monsterland Forums! Stick that in your pipe and smoke it! I find the term "Zombie" to be offensive. I prefer to be called Vitality Impaired. Jerry's Frags: 17 | |
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| packmule | Jun 7 2008, 01:06 PM Post #4 |
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I have always preferred sci-fi/kaiju fan fictions that rely on science for many(or all) of their aspects and not supernatural themes which are, IMO, more appealing, at times, in a horror fan fic. |
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| Jack da King | Jun 8 2008, 03:42 AM Post #5 |
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And now it begins... |
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| gojiramatthew | Jun 8 2008, 07:01 AM Post #6 |
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As another fanfiction writer here (Im the Author of "Freddy vs Godzilla"), I must say your story is great, very enjoyable, I hope you finish it. B)  Also I quite like you signature. :) |
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| packmule | Jun 8 2008, 09:46 AM Post #7 |
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Uh, it does make a generally good impression with me though obviously I doubt if any of the moderators or admins at Toho Kingdom would feel likewise. 
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| Jack da King | Jun 8 2008, 02:50 PM Post #8 |
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Yeah? Well, they kicked me off, so I'm not really in a position to be nice to them, am I? Next chapter's kind of short, but important nontheless. |
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| packmule | Jun 8 2008, 02:56 PM Post #9 |
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I was banned from TK about two years ago(or thereabouts). The situation that brought that occurrence about was most unfortunate and, despite my disdain at those involved with me in it, I still take an ample amount of the blame for allowing the situation to escalate. It's something that I will not allow myself to repeat, you can be certain of that. I'm not going to rehash anything at this point but I do believe the site itself, excluding the forums, is outstanding, and credit should be given to Anthony Romero for that, as he is clearly a great fan of the genre. :) Topic: I look forward to reading more chapters of your work. :) |
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| Jack da King | Jun 8 2008, 04:58 PM Post #10 |
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I spammed a lot. and thanks, more is coming soon. Man, you should have read my last fanfic (on TK). It sucked. |
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| packmule | Jun 9 2008, 07:14 AM Post #11 |
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Give yourself some credit for being so candid about your own work. There are a lot of people who wouldn't be willing to make an admission like that. ;) I always stress two things about fan fiction submissions at this message board: 1. be ready for criticism of your work, and 2. don't worry too much about whether you think it's good or not. The only way to improve, and certainly I think most who make these submissions are looking to do just that, is to continue making them, posting them, and getting feedback from others. Unfortunately, that feedback may not always be constructive, and it may even involve personal attacks, like what I've seen at large kajiu themed boards. That kind of thing doesn't happen here and it won't...as long as I'm here. :) |
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| gojiramatthew | Jun 9 2008, 08:48 AM Post #12 |
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Show it to me and I'll tell you if its bad or not IMO. ;) |
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| Jack da King | Jun 9 2008, 11:40 PM Post #13 |
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Find it yourself. It should be on page 4 or 5 by now in TK's fanfic section. It's called "Godzilla: Time of Doom". I never got to finish it because of being kicked off, however. P.S. are their seriously only two people reading? P.P.S. I added a table of contents thread, as well as a new chapter. |
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| gojiramatthew | Jun 10 2008, 12:39 AM Post #14 |
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I dislike going to TK to find things.
There are possible more, you never know. ;) I only have Packmule most of the time telling me what he thinks of my fanfics, its better then no one reading you work. ;) |
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| Jack da King | Jun 10 2008, 03:00 AM Post #15 |
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http://www.tohokingdom.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=17305 Do I get a pat on the back for working so hard? NEW CHAPTER, NO0BZORZZZZZ!!!!1111!!!ZZZZ!!!!!!!11!! |
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