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| Topic Started: Sep 28 2009, 08:55 AM (22 Views) | |
| Syphen | Sep 28 2009, 08:55 AM Post #1 |
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I was cleaning my computer today and came across a old story i wrote called "The creature" Enjoy  The creature Chapter one It was an early Saturday morning Jed and patch was walking through the park. Jed stumbled upon a small egg patch saw it too. Patch walked over and picked up the egg. They took it home and watched it grow. The days passed but the egg hadn’t hatched. Jed and patch waited patiently but the egg didn’t crack. Then at 3:15 in the morning it hatched. Jed and patch gazed upon the little creature. It was a cute little thing. After time it growed it got bigger and bigger then it stared to destroy things. Then it ran away. It started to kill the town of New Jersey it was beginning to be destroyed. Innocent people were being killed chewed ripped apart patch and Jed stared at the monster they looked after Jed said that’s it patch we have to put it down. They drove down to the AAA gun store. They knew the clerk it was one of there friends her name was pandy. She was 17 and pretty attractive .they bought what they could afford the got 2 pistols and a ask 47 and a kalasncoff germen assault rifle. They got in to the car and drove of looking for the monster. Jed thought how 4 humans could kill a massive monster this is crazy will it work. They found the monster. They pulled over got out of the car and started shooting like trigger happy maniacs. The monster was getting pissed off then pieces or f the monster were falling off but the were little bugs killing more people one jumped on to pandy making her bleed pandy was gripping on to life . Jed and patch started shooting the bug. they retreated to a abandoned school it was empty and a little creepy .they saw a couple of bugs trying to get through the started shooting at the bugs there dark black blood splattered all over there faces and every where else .then the creature spotted the humans hiding in a school the creature ran over at them . The army was shooting and had tanks and choppers. A private shot the creature in the eye the creature screamed out in pain. The creature bent down and pulled the private apart blood splattered every where. The creature was wiping out all of New Jersey. The creature smashed all the bridges every one was trapped patch and Jed and pandy watched as every one was stealing every thin in the shops. The creature took of the school roof the three humans ran and jumped in the car. Jed was driving the creature was chasing them pandy and patch was shooting the creature. then the creature kicked the car the humans were flying through the air they hit the ground hard the car caught fire the humans ran away the creature looked at a kid that was stabbing him in the groin the creature picked the kid up and ripped his arms off blood come out and the kid was screaming the creature pulled off his other arms and his legs . The kid was barley alive. Screaming in pain the creature pulled his guts out his organs and his guts dropped to the ground. then noticed there was no way to kill the creature was too strong a horde of army solders stormed in shooting throwing grenades the creature took his hand and pointed this finger . His finger had a huge nail knife. The creature swiped and took all the solders heads off blood squirted every where all the solders dropped to the ground blood all over the ground. then pandy screamed and ran climbed to the top of the creatures head she stabbed him in the eye now the creature was blind in both eyes pandy flew off patch cached her and they started to run away. They found a army helicopter they got into it a flew away the creature yelled they ran out of fuel and landed in a town called Springfield .they went and looked on the television a couple of crack heads were watching the creature was on the news they called it samesonzilla it had destroyed all of Manhattan and was making its way too Springfield patch said oh shit . The town was barracked and no one could enter every one was hiding and getting ready for samesonzilla. It was in sight attack yelled the caption in charge every one started shooting. Sameinzilla yelled in pain angry he started to breath fire army men burned there faces melting skin came off and there brains fell out guts blood it was like a blood fest every one was screaming and yelling help us god help us. The creature was killing everyone and everything men women children they were all being slaughtered. The humans looked at the street people were griping to life c raying in pain bleeding guts and brains were falling out. It was a cold day in hell people said. This creature will destroy us all said a black 19 year old boy. He picked up a stick and ran at the creature. The creature picked up the boy bit hid head off spat his red covered in blood brain. The creature dropped the boy his bloody body hit the ground with a THUMP blood covered an area around his dead body. Every one panicked the creature continued to kill people disembowel bodies blood guts brains the stench of blood filled the town quick. Jed and patch and pandy were beginning to think what to do next. They were running out of ideas. Jed said. There is an emergency chopper at the hospital. So they made there way to the hospital. The creature was making its way to the hospital leaving a trail of blood and guts behind it. So many innocent people were dying. This was the day of remaining no one knew what to do. Life as we speak was perishing soon the creature would kill the world. The humans made there way to the hospital there said Jed the helicopter up top. The lift was broken so they took them. Little did they know that the bugs that fell off the creature were recreantly following them? They made it to the top they got in the helicopter and took off. A bug was hiding underneath the copter. Patch lent over and shot the shit out of it. Dark black blood covert patches face. They stopped and landed 4 hours later they landed in a town called Brooklyn. They warned the townspeople every one hid in there home some headed south. The humans fell asleep. BANG the creature is here. The creature killed so many people ripping them apart eating the blood flying out body parts getting thrown around guts gore brains hearts organs bones livers lungs and teeth lying on the ground. Jed was getting very pissed off. The creature was making babies they were running loose killing violently. So sad all innocent people were dying. They didn’t know what to do. Suddenly air force jets came dropping bombs on the creature. The creature dropped to the ground and every one cheered but he wasn’t dead. But unconscious. The all tied him up with all the thing the town had. The creature woke up. It was angry pissed off he got out of the ropes pretty quick and started his rampage this time more angry vicious killing. the creature was making his way around the world killing songwriting every one , the army was planning to nuclear bomb but they have to wait till he is alone they cant risk killing people . The creature wiped out the whole town. The jet dropped the bomb on the creature BANG. They waited for the smoke to clear the creature leaped up and took the jet out It crashed. Blowing up the men his guts flew out .nothing could kill the monster. Every one was shooting. What could kill this monster said pandy. Maybe if one of us jumps on top and shoots him in the brain. So patch ran up the creatures back jumped on top of his brain and shot him. It wasn’t working the creature threw him off. He landed in a pile of garbage. He got up and walked over to Jed and pandy. Army men were storming in by second. They were shooting killing every one then patch had an idea. He grabbed his gun ran and jumbled in the creatures mouth down his throught swam in blood till hr found his heart. He walked up and started shooting it. Jed and pandy watched as the creature threw up blood and dead bodies. Patch came out to. The creature was still there hurt badly but not dead. It was time to strike time to hit him hard. But he was still powerful so retreated to a nearby army base and hit inside got there wounds fixed up. It was safe there they got some rest. The next morning there asked the cornel if they could help. They told him the whole story. He said yes at your own risk. The humans went armed up. They were in a jeep heading to the battle. Then the creature came and picked up the jeep and threw it. It hit a building and the car flew down. It hit the ground hard. The humans got out and a private. The 2 remaining army people died from hitting the ground. His blood was all over the windshield the other was saying. Go on with out me. They ran the creature picked the car up and threw it in the water. That’s said Jed we can drown it. They called on the radio the cornel had attached to his jacket. They called for jets to push him in the water. the jets flew past bombing pushing him in the water then it fell in. under water the creature was splitting in to too he climbed out. This time there were two of them. Shit said Jed in anger. The creature ran over and paced up the cornel and squeezed him. His eyes popped out screaming in pain he snapped in half blood every where. The humans ran in to a sub way station. Patch find a way to get power said Jed. Patch walked and found the control panel. Pushed the red batten to get power. The creature was tying to get in both of them. Hurry up yelled Jed. The train had power. They got into the train and took of. The creature got in .it started to chase them. He bit off the back of the train. The humans ran to the front. The creature was biting off bits of the train making its way to the humans the humans jumped off the train in to a door that leads to the streets they went there. The could hear the creature scream yelling angry. They ran as fast as hey could. The creature made its way to land killing more people. So much blood. They were out of ideas what were they going to do. All they could do was hope . As the creature was angering jed thought to himself an idea.they all were shooting it seems. At didn’t seem to be getting hurt..what could the do to kill it . they walket into a bulding . there was a mother and a child . the were crying they were sad .thery didn’t want to die the child was only 5 . jed walked up and asked him his name . the child said . his name was patrick. . patrick aid can you help us . we don’t want to die . tyhen all of a sudden the creature reached in and grabed the kid and ripped him apart . patricks blood splatterd all over his mother. She screemed then she ran and jumped off the building and splatterd all over the ground. A big puddle of blood. Jed was getting angry with |
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