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Topic Started: Jun 9 2008, 07:37 AM (246 Views)
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BoJoLo
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Jun 9 2008, 07:37 AM
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ureshii, akiaki suru...(watashi wa tochimasu desu)
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what have I done? what did I say? Ive lost you and now Im alone. now all my friends are flying away but I still havent quite flown.
I here whispers near. whispers here they are coming from my past they make me cry and make me fear my life is moving to fast.
I wish that you were still here with me but dreamers dream too much. I know your gone, its easy to see but Im so lost without your touch
during the day, I play with much joy. at night I bleed out tears I now only am a happy toy to be useful when I brighten my peers what use am I when I only drop my burdens on my friend. what use am I when Im starting to cause myself a dark and dreadful end.
~BoJoLo
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Makkura the Fallen
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Jun 9 2008, 08:51 AM
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God of the Fallen
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*reads first line* GREAT POEM BO!! *walks off without reading the rest and mumbles something about bo taking away from my anime time*
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 Last night i lay in my bed, looking up at the stars in the night sky... and thought to myself... where the HELL is the ceiling?!
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Warshadow
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Jun 9 2008, 09:48 AM
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Gone...
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*wakes up*
what sorry i fell sleep after bojolo.
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Jejex
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Jun 9 2008, 11:24 AM
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Zuh
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*smacks Makkura and warshadow in the back of the head*
I thought it was great. Good job!
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Warshadow
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Jun 9 2008, 11:55 AM
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Gone...
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yeah bojo you should work making cards for hallmark channel thing...
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JakeHeatfist
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Jun 9 2008, 12:25 PM
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the sugar king
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Way to go! (I would put a rating, but I m too tired to calculate right now, all I can tell you is, it will be a very high rating)
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CrimsonCat101
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Jun 9 2008, 12:57 PM
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Your Voice of Reason
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:abouttocry: I love it!
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 made by me ^^
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Jessica
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Jun 9 2008, 03:07 PM
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Your Worst Nightmare
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:abouttocry: tis beautiful~
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don't fuckin` blame me...

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Rei ~Dark Goddess~
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Jun 9 2008, 03:41 PM
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Mystic Angel Of Love And Darkness
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I ask BoJoLo before i post this on his topic. I was pissed off when I wrote this.
My Voice, My Thought, In Darkness
What is this darkness that I feel in my soul Is it the thought of lost or is the hope of find? Trying to find of a peace of mind Be the word betray is always in the heart of the mind.
Friends? Does this word mean a thing. Friend hurt, and betray Friend leave they never stay They are here today but gone like yesterday What they say is not what you get Half the time in truth you know they don’t give shit All they do is kissup when you have something they can gain. But after they gain, they bring the pain. The pain cover you like the rain. In the back of your brain you know it was going to happen one in the same.
The you truly understand the pain. Do you want me to give my thought in this hut but yet the bliss of it
Have you even be lock in the room bleeding and crying All the while wishing for the gift of drying Have you even had so many scars Not on the outside be on the inside of you heart Have you ever been trick by someone you love Had you mind whipped, soul flipped That is left you body limp. Have you every suffer any of this, have you lived it day to day for 11 years? Wake up to the smell of beer Have you ever had to live in ending fear Chained to a floor, or a bed. Force to do the unthinkable, Trying to block it out in you head.
Weak people complain about the everyday I love lost A friend gone A small wrong Minor problem gone wrong They make dram or nothing, pretending they know pain When they truly know nothing. Of the pain that come to easy as the rain. But stays, and never shakes away.
Acting it all day do Wearing all black, nail paint like Like they wish they knew. Depressed cause it is a popular thing Wish they knew, but they have shit for brains
I wake once a day wishing I could die. This darkness in my soul makes me wanna try. But no matter how hard I try. God still want let me die.
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My World Is A Dark One.
I'm running from my past What's done I can't redo I'm just, looking in my rearview Looking in my rearview Wanna right all of my wrongs Wat's done I can't redo I'm just, looking in my rearview Looking in my rearview
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Windy Nelson
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Jun 9 2008, 03:45 PM
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Miku Hatsune
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- Jun 9 2008, 04:41 PM
I ask BoJoLo before i post this on his topic. I was pissed off when I wrote this.
My Voice, My Thought, In Darkness
What is this darkness that I feel in my soul Is it the thought of lost or is the hope of find? Trying to find of a peace of mind Be the word betray is always in the heart of the mind.
Friends? Does this word mean a thing. Friend hurt, and betray Friend leave they never stay They are here today but gone like yesterday What they say is not what you get Half the time in truth you know they don’t give shit All they do is kissup when you have something they can gain. But after they gain, they bring the pain. The pain cover you like the rain. In the back of your brain you know it was going to happen one in the same.
The you truly understand the pain. Do you want me to give my thought in this hut but yet the bliss of it
Have you even be lock in the room bleeding and crying All the while wishing for the gift of drying Have you even had so many scars Not on the outside be on the inside of you heart Have you ever been trick by someone you love Had you mind whipped, soul flipped That is left you body limp. Have you every suffer any of this, have you lived it day to day for 11 years? Wake up to the smell of beer Have you ever had to live in ending fear Chained to a floor, or a bed. Force to do the unthinkable, Trying to block it out in you head.
Weak people complain about the everyday I love lost A friend gone A small wrong Minor problem gone wrong They make dram or nothing, pretending they know pain When they truly know nothing. Of the pain that come to easy as the rain. But stays, and never shakes away.
Acting it all day do Wearing all black, nail paint like Like they wish they knew. Depressed cause it is a popular thing Wish they knew, but they have shit for brains
I wake once a day wishing I could die. This darkness in my soul makes me wanna try. But no matter how hard I try. God still want let me die.
:cry:
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Jejex
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Jun 9 2008, 04:28 PM
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Zuh
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.... Wow really good Rei! I mean really really good!
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L_O_V_E
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Jun 9 2008, 08:32 PM
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ThE CrAzY ChIcK!
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awesome poems :kisses:
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Hollynoel
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Jun 9 2008, 09:29 PM
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READY! SET! ITALIAN!
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Wowzers, now that applies to a lot of things.
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   I like my yaoi with a side of crossdresser.

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Jessica
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Jun 9 2008, 10:40 PM
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Your Worst Nightmare
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- Hollynoel
- Jun 9 2008, 09:29 PM
Wowzers, now that applies to a lot of things.
yea,it does its a great poem though! very deep..
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don't fuckin` blame me...

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Warshadow
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Jun 10 2008, 07:01 AM
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Gone...
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- Dark Angel
- Jun 9 2008, 06:41 PM
I ask BoJoLo before i post this on his topic. I was pissed off when I wrote this.
My Voice, My Thought, In Darkness
What is this darkness that I feel in my soul Is it the thought of lost or is the hope of find? Trying to find of a peace of mind Be the word betray is always in the heart of the mind.
Friends? Does this word mean a thing. Friend hurt, and betray Friend leave they never stay They are here today but gone like yesterday What they say is not what you get Half the time in truth you know they don’t give shit All they do is kissup when you have something they can gain. But after they gain, they bring the pain. The pain cover you like the rain. In the back of your brain you know it was going to happen one in the same.
The you truly understand the pain. Do you want me to give my thought in this hut but yet the bliss of it
Have you even be lock in the room bleeding and crying All the while wishing for the gift of drying Have you even had so many scars Not on the outside be on the inside of you heart Have you ever been trick by someone you love Had you mind whipped, soul flipped That is left you body limp. Have you every suffer any of this, have you lived it day to day for 11 years? Wake up to the smell of beer Have you ever had to live in ending fear Chained to a floor, or a bed. Force to do the unthinkable, Trying to block it out in you head.
Weak people complain about the everyday I love lost A friend gone A small wrong Minor problem gone wrong They make dram or nothing, pretending they know pain When they truly know nothing. Of the pain that come to easy as the rain. But stays, and never shakes away.
Acting it all day do Wearing all black, nail paint like Like they wish they knew. Depressed cause it is a popular thing Wish they knew, but they have shit for brains
I wake once a day wishing I could die. This darkness in my soul makes me wanna try. But no matter how hard I try. God still want let me die.
Did you get enough satisfaction???
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shiten
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Jun 10 2008, 08:04 AM
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ಠ_ಠ
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- BoJoLo
- Jun 9 2008, 07:37 AM
what have I done? what did I say? Ive lost you and now Im alone. now all my friends are flying away but I still havent quite flown.
I here whispers near. whispers here they are coming from my past they make me cry and make me fear my life is moving to fast.
I wish that you were still here with me but dreamers dream too much. I know your gone, its easy to see but Im so lost without your touch
during the day, I play with much joy. at night I bleed out tears I now only am a happy toy to be useful when I brighten my peers what use am I when I only drop my burdens on my friend. what use am I when Im starting to cause myself a dark and dreadful end.
~BoJoLo
:cry: marry me!!!!
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Warshadow
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Jun 10 2008, 08:19 AM
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Gone...
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- shiten
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- BoJoLo
- Jun 9 2008, 07:37 AM
what have I done? what did I say? Ive lost you and now Im alone. now all my friends are flying away but I still havent quite flown.
I here whispers near. whispers here they are coming from my past they make me cry and make me fear my life is moving to fast.
I wish that you were still here with me but dreamers dream too much. I know your gone, its easy to see but Im so lost without your touch
during the day, I play with much joy. at night I bleed out tears I now only am a happy toy to be useful when I brighten my peers what use am I when I only drop my burdens on my friend. what use am I when Im starting to cause myself a dark and dreadful end.
~BoJoLo
:cry: marry me!!!!
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milk he won't marry you even if he was gay!!!
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Rei ~Dark Goddess~
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Jun 10 2008, 10:25 AM
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Mystic Angel Of Love And Darkness
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Lol, read that wrong poem that milk posted to my bad on that one. Sorry
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My World Is A Dark One.
I'm running from my past What's done I can't redo I'm just, looking in my rearview Looking in my rearview Wanna right all of my wrongs Wat's done I can't redo I'm just, looking in my rearview Looking in my rearview
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Rei ~Dark Goddess~
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Jun 10 2008, 10:27 AM
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Mystic Angel Of Love And Darkness
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- Warshadow
- Jun 10 2008, 10:01 AM
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- Jun 9 2008, 06:41 PM
I ask BoJoLo before i post this on his topic. I was pissed off when I wrote this.
My Voice, My Thought, In Darkness
What is this darkness that I feel in my soul Is it the thought of lost or is the hope of find? Trying to find of a peace of mind Be the word betray is always in the heart of the mind.
Friends? Does this word mean a thing. Friend hurt, and betray Friend leave they never stay They are here today but gone like yesterday What they say is not what you get Half the time in truth you know they don’t give shit All they do is kissup when you have something they can gain. But after they gain, they bring the pain. The pain cover you like the rain. In the back of your brain you know it was going to happen one in the same.
The you truly understand the pain. Do you want me to give my thought in this hut but yet the bliss of it
Have you even be lock in the room bleeding and crying All the while wishing for the gift of drying Have you even had so many scars Not on the outside be on the inside of you heart Have you ever been trick by someone you love Had you mind whipped, soul flipped That is left you body limp. Have you every suffer any of this, have you lived it day to day for 11 years? Wake up to the smell of beer Have you ever had to live in ending fear Chained to a floor, or a bed. Force to do the unthinkable, Trying to block it out in you head.
Weak people complain about the everyday I love lost A friend gone A small wrong Minor problem gone wrong They make dram or nothing, pretending they know pain When they truly know nothing. Of the pain that come to easy as the rain. But stays, and never shakes away.
Acting it all day do Wearing all black, nail paint like Like they wish they knew. Depressed cause it is a popular thing Wish they knew, but they have shit for brains
I wake once a day wishing I could die. This darkness in my soul makes me wanna try. But no matter how hard I try. God still want let me die.
Did you get enough satisfaction???
What do you mean hun?
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My World Is A Dark One.
I'm running from my past What's done I can't redo I'm just, looking in my rearview Looking in my rearview Wanna right all of my wrongs Wat's done I can't redo I'm just, looking in my rearview Looking in my rearview
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CrimsonCat101
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Jun 10 2008, 10:35 AM
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Your Voice of Reason
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- Jun 9 2008, 03:41 PM
I ask BoJoLo before i post this on his topic. I was pissed off when I wrote this.
My Voice, My Thought, In Darkness
What is this darkness that I feel in my soul Is it the thought of lost or is the hope of find? Trying to find of a peace of mind Be the word betray is always in the heart of the mind.
Friends? Does this word mean a thing. Friend hurt, and betray Friend leave they never stay They are here today but gone like yesterday What they say is not what you get Half the time in truth you know they don’t give shit All they do is kissup when you have something they can gain. But after they gain, they bring the pain. The pain cover you like the rain. In the back of your brain you know it was going to happen one in the same.
The you truly understand the pain. Do you want me to give my thought in this hut but yet the bliss of it
Have you even be lock in the room bleeding and crying All the while wishing for the gift of drying Have you even had so many scars Not on the outside be on the inside of you heart Have you ever been trick by someone you love Had you mind whipped, soul flipped That is left you body limp. Have you every suffer any of this, have you lived it day to day for 11 years? Wake up to the smell of beer Have you ever had to live in ending fear Chained to a floor, or a bed. Force to do the unthinkable, Trying to block it out in you head.
Weak people complain about the everyday I love lost A friend gone A small wrong Minor problem gone wrong They make dram or nothing, pretending they know pain When they truly know nothing. Of the pain that come to easy as the rain. But stays, and never shakes away.
Acting it all day do Wearing all black, nail paint like Like they wish they knew. Depressed cause it is a popular thing Wish they knew, but they have shit for brains
I wake once a day wishing I could die. This darkness in my soul makes me wanna try. But no matter how hard I try. God still want let me die.
Wow....I'm left speechless...it was really good...
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Warshadow
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Jun 10 2008, 03:30 PM
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Gone...
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- Dark Angel
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- Warshadow
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- Dark Angel
- Jun 9 2008, 06:41 PM
I ask BoJoLo before i post this on his topic. I was pissed off when I wrote this.
My Voice, My Thought, In Darkness
What is this darkness that I feel in my soul Is it the thought of lost or is the hope of find? Trying to find of a peace of mind Be the word betray is always in the heart of the mind.
Friends? Does this word mean a thing. Friend hurt, and betray Friend leave they never stay They are here today but gone like yesterday What they say is not what you get Half the time in truth you know they don’t give shit All they do is kissup when you have something they can gain. But after they gain, they bring the pain. The pain cover you like the rain. In the back of your brain you know it was going to happen one in the same.
The you truly understand the pain. Do you want me to give my thought in this hut but yet the bliss of it
Have you even be lock in the room bleeding and crying All the while wishing for the gift of drying Have you even had so many scars Not on the outside be on the inside of you heart Have you ever been trick by someone you love Had you mind whipped, soul flipped That is left you body limp. Have you every suffer any of this, have you lived it day to day for 11 years? Wake up to the smell of beer Have you ever had to live in ending fear Chained to a floor, or a bed. Force to do the unthinkable, Trying to block it out in you head.
Weak people complain about the everyday I love lost A friend gone A small wrong Minor problem gone wrong They make dram or nothing, pretending they know pain When they truly know nothing. Of the pain that come to easy as the rain. But stays, and never shakes away.
Acting it all day do Wearing all black, nail paint like Like they wish they knew. Depressed cause it is a popular thing Wish they knew, but they have shit for brains
I wake once a day wishing I could die. This darkness in my soul makes me wanna try. But no matter how hard I try. God still want let me die.
Did you get enough satisfaction???
What do you mean hun?
mm you know what i mean... :beaten: :beaten:
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Rei ~Dark Goddess~
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Jun 10 2008, 05:16 PM
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Mystic Angel Of Love And Darkness
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- Warshadow
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- Dark Angel
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- Warshadow
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- Dark Angel
- Jun 9 2008, 06:41 PM
I ask BoJoLo before i post this on his topic. I was pissed off when I wrote this.
My Voice, My Thought, In Darkness
What is this darkness that I feel in my soul Is it the thought of lost or is the hope of find? Trying to find of a peace of mind Be the word betray is always in the heart of the mind.
Friends? Does this word mean a thing. Friend hurt, and betray Friend leave they never stay They are here today but gone like yesterday What they say is not what you get Half the time in truth you know they don’t give shit All they do is kissup when you have something they can gain. But after they gain, they bring the pain. The pain cover you like the rain. In the back of your brain you know it was going to happen one in the same.
The you truly understand the pain. Do you want me to give my thought in this hut but yet the bliss of it
Have you even be lock in the room bleeding and crying All the while wishing for the gift of drying Have you even had so many scars Not on the outside be on the inside of you heart Have you ever been trick by someone you love Had you mind whipped, soul flipped That is left you body limp. Have you every suffer any of this, have you lived it day to day for 11 years? Wake up to the smell of beer Have you ever had to live in ending fear Chained to a floor, or a bed. Force to do the unthinkable, Trying to block it out in you head.
Weak people complain about the everyday I love lost A friend gone A small wrong Minor problem gone wrong They make dram or nothing, pretending they know pain When they truly know nothing. Of the pain that come to easy as the rain. But stays, and never shakes away.
Acting it all day do Wearing all black, nail paint like Like they wish they knew. Depressed cause it is a popular thing Wish they knew, but they have shit for brains
I wake once a day wishing I could die. This darkness in my soul makes me wanna try. But no matter how hard I try. God still want let me die.
Did you get enough satisfaction???
What do you mean hun?
mm you know what i mean... :beaten: :beaten:
I am not in the mood today.I am really nothing in the less fucking mood for you to act retarded ~.~ or perverted. Not feeling well enough to fight with you i mean it.
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My World Is A Dark One.
I'm running from my past What's done I can't redo I'm just, looking in my rearview Looking in my rearview Wanna right all of my wrongs Wat's done I can't redo I'm just, looking in my rearview Looking in my rearview
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BoJoLo
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Jun 10 2008, 06:25 PM
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ureshii, akiaki suru...(watashi wa tochimasu desu)
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*hugs rei*
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