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| Tet | Aug 19 2015, 05:26 PM Post #1 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| ✦ Kiryuu | Aug 19 2015, 06:04 PM Post #2 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Seeing as you've spent no ryo on equipment; you have 6,500 left over. Combat style should be further expanded. You have -1,600 ryo spent on stats; fix this. Personality needs a lot more word count as well as history |
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| Tet | Aug 20 2015, 05:05 PM Post #3 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| ✦ Kiryuu | Aug 20 2015, 05:33 PM Post #4 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Appearance and personality still needs more work; shoot for about 150 words. Combat style; shoot for 100 words. Chuunin start with 6,500 ryo to spend on equipment. You have 400 leftover ryo for stats; which must all be expended in order for it to receive an approval. Regarding his intelligence and his rank as a chuunin; you'd need to expend on how he actually become one despite being horribly horribly stupid. Chuunin are squad leaders, one cannot usually become one without having enough intelligence to actually be a chuunin. You may keep a newbie level of intelligence, but there has to be some way for him to have been able to pass the exam; whether through cheating or having tricked the proctors in some way via the aid of teammates for example. |
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