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Meguel Ruxzer; Im starting over
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Topic Started: May 3 2008, 06:51 AM (288 Views)
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Meguel Ruxzer
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May 3 2008, 06:51 AM
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((Is there any chance I can have 1 skill in bow + 1 in daggers?))
***NOTE: Carlos can only use Pokemon and Meguel can only use Wepons*** Name: Meguel 'Beserk' Ruxzer Age: 19 Gender: Male Country: Lascia Class: Outlaw Liege: NA Starting Town: Drogheda Chosen Weapon: 2x Jagged Daggers
Appearance: Meguel is 5ft '11 and has a body weight of 7 stone, he is of an average build. Meguel has Dark Hazel hair and turquoize blue eyes that sparkle in the moonlight. He has a light tan colour skin but if he gets a suntan then his skin wil turn dark tan, he also has a white birth mark in the shape of australia on his left arm.
He wears a bandana in his home city and when traveling on routes but when he is in a new city he preferes to keep it off, his bandana is black with a red sword on both left and right sides facing outwards. He wears a white silk shirt and a black leather jacket which reaches to the end of his rib cage, there are two pockets on his leather jacket on both left and right sides. A red wolfs face picture is on the back of his jacket. He has a white bandage on both his hands and claims they are from when he migrated from Caledonia with his famly. He has a black leather bealt with six slots to place his pokeorbs. The buckle of the belt is silver.
Meguel has white trousers and they have several pockets in them. His trousers have a few stitched up holes from sailing. He has black shoes that look rather posh, but have been battered over the years.
Personality: Meguel was a kind, caring guy underneath but hated to show it, because his reputation was everything, as he didnt want to begin from scrath all over again. That would be hell! On the outside he was quite tormented and cunning, although he had an angry side it was only triggered by several things that usually could not be made out. Meguel was quite tricky to figure out, especialy in combat. Usually insults did not get to Meguel but if they did you would know about it. He gained the name beserk after going mad when his brother betrayed him.
Meguel was the kind of person to hold a vicious grudge angainst traitors, people who beat him or snitches. He remained calm in combat and calm in theft the only time he was'nt calm is when traveling, his two little bros drove him insane "Are we there yet?" is the fraise that came to mind.
Biography: When Meguel was first born his father was murdered, everyone knew who it was- well everyone would while tresspassing on Drodgheda waters- however no one had the skill to catch him. Curerent mayor of Drodgheda had murdered him whilst hunting for treasure, or loot as they call it. Meguels father had original tried to get as close to the Caledonian capital city as possibal to try and assastinate the king under order of his Council, for he was promised second in control in return for bringing the kings crown to him. Unfortunately, a lassal had found out the plans and tried to stop the Council from making a war, but was to late to stop them. Meguels father had already set off. After that Meguels family received a message from the Councils leader.
Dear Mrs. Ruxzer I am sad to say your husband has been presumably killed by a knight of the Lascian army. We all know this is a great loss to both you and us as he was our best troop, therfore a we have sent dierections to a boat were you will be escorted to Lasia were you may start a new life, as your letters are being read and your tax is being checked. We wish you the best of luck with your new life
Faithfully, The Council
The next day they set off for Belfaste, on the way Meguels Mother got engaiged and got pregnant. Two years had passed. By the time they reached Belfhaste she had had two sons; Carlos (the eldest by 15 minutes) and Raephiel. That night in Belfhaste was terrible Carlos had had major dioreha and no-one in the inn got any sleep. The morning was no better, a food war had taken place between the two kids Carlos had thrown an egg at Raephiel and he had reacted. It was about 12 o' clock when ther reached the boat. A 5 hour boat ride was ahead of them. Fortunatelty, Xera had sent a crew to get them safely there.
The next week they were fully settled in Lasia, they had a great beach-side cottage and the Lascian food was exelent. Meguel mother had been giving tourists rides around the harbour for lots of cash per person. But this was not to last... Ten years had past and there was a great fire in the cotage Meguel mother and her blastose died, when they saved us. Luckily, an outlaw taught us the way of the outlaw and saved our life.
3 years from then, on an early summers morning they went sailing, there tutor betrayed them on the open seas. But he had underestimated them, Meguel easily overthrough him and took charges, from then they had lived in the harbour on the boat, hovever the sail was brocken.
RP Sample: Meguel walked through the streets of Drodgheda, Carlos close by his side incase he needed him. The bristiling streets were full of great targets to steal from but Meguel was more bothered about his pub meal. Once a week two of the three children would get a pub meal and fortunatly it was Meguels turn, he could taste the lovely steak in his mouth, the lucious juice of the tender Fillet Steak. "Mmmm...." he said quietlty, "Are you still thinking of your stomache?" Asked Carlos as Meguel had only just had a plate of chips. "Yup." He said, grinning.
Eventually they had reached the pub, a delicious oduer leaked from the pubs kitchen, "remember, we've only got 70 gold, so go light on the beer" said Carlos seriously, Meguel just laughed. Meguel opened the the door and walked into the pub. He took a seat in the corner. A waiter came to serve them. "Hello, we'll take two filled steaks and two of your finest beers," said Meguel eagerly, still tasting the steak in his mouth.
After the meal they were drunk, and out of cash alltogether. "Hey that guy looks good to pickpocket." Meguel whispered to Carlos, gripping the daggers from his side. "Fine." he said carelessly. Meguel ran up behnd him and grabbed him by the mouth. "Gimme the bag," Meguel whispered in his ear. The man co-operated handing the bag over. Meguel and Carlos legged it through the city to the boat, shuting the door behind him, "good time?" Asked Raephiel, looking at the bag. "Hey whats that?!" "Shut up dumby!" snapped Meguel, pouring the content of the bag on the floor. "A Pokeorb..." said Carlos amazed. "Lets see what it is." Said Meguel.
He threw the Pokeorb, eager to find out what was inside.
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It held me back))((For all these years
 Theodore lvl 5
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Alexiel Shinteiv
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May 3 2008, 12:19 PM
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Just a feeeew things need to be cleared up before I can give this one the okay. The littlest one is that there were no blue jeans at this time, haha. Trousers, breeches, those're all good words for pants from this time.
Two bigger things, though, are mention of the leader of the Thieve's Council. Xera isn't their leader's name (as the leader's not even listed in the NPCs), and it would probably be better if you just said it was from the Council, and that the Council had sent the boat/supplies and such, rather than the head of the Council. That would clear all that up.
Also, could you explain in the RP sample, or in the bio if you'd rather change it and the RP sample, what happens to Carlos when you start RPing? The sign-up's only for Meguel.
Sorry for the hold-up >.<
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 Aegis Lvl 07 |
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 Celsius Lvl 07 |
 Fenrir Lvl 10 |
 Tizona Lvl 06 |
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A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His might upholds the weak. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.
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Meguel Ruxzer
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May 3 2008, 12:44 PM
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The two kids were intended to journey with me, adding more discription as the thing went on, true I focus mainly on meguel but I do have little focus on those two, plus I Intended for one of them to die during the start of the war.
Will fix jeans, lol.
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It held me back))((For all these years
 Theodore lvl 5
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Alexiel Shinteiv
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May 3 2008, 12:46 PM
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Hmm....I don't think we can really let that happen, sorry. >.< Not two of them, anyway. You can edit both of them out in the end, or you could leave just one, and split up the duties between them. It's not in the rules yet, but you could have one be a fighter, with absolutely no Pokemon ever and the other use Pokemon but be absolutely incapable of using a weapon. And the +2 can only go to one weapon, any weapon, but just one, I'm afraid...
Can't just be a random NPC though, sorry. >.<
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 Aegis Lvl 07 |
 Adgir Lvl 07 |
 Celsius Lvl 07 |
 Fenrir Lvl 10 |
 Tizona Lvl 06 |
 Unknown |
A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His might upholds the weak. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.
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Meguel Ruxzer
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May 3 2008, 12:50 PM
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I think i'll have one able to use wepon only and I know im pushing my luck but the other as a one pokemon only person (obviously he woul'dnt get a starter).
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It held me back))((For all these years
 Theodore lvl 5
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Alexiel Shinteiv
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May 3 2008, 01:18 PM
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Alright, now we're cookin'! For the bio you've earned a good 450 Gold, and one of the following Pokemon!
Meowth Seedot Croagunk
Pick a Pokemon, a gender, a nickname (if you'd like one), and two egg moves for your Pokemon to know right off the bat, and myself or Enrua'll get right on it! Remember, all Pokemon automatically know all learnable TMs of their primary type.
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 Aegis Lvl 07 |
 Adgir Lvl 07 |
 Celsius Lvl 07 |
 Fenrir Lvl 10 |
 Tizona Lvl 06 |
 Unknown |
A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His might upholds the weak. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.
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Meguel Ruxzer
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May 3 2008, 01:22 PM
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Croagunk please, Female and the egg moves shall be Bullet Punch and Dynamic Punch. I'll nickname it Theodore
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It held me back))((For all these years
 Theodore lvl 5
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Alexiel Shinteiv
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May 3 2008, 03:26 PM
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Good luck!
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 Aegis Lvl 07 |
 Adgir Lvl 07 |
 Celsius Lvl 07 |
 Fenrir Lvl 10 |
 Tizona Lvl 06 |
 Unknown |
A knight is sworn to valor. His heart knows only virtue. His blade defends the helpless. His might upholds the weak. His word speaks only truth. His wrath undoes the wicked.
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